AsYa FF : Our Incomplete Love (CH6 : 9/10)

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Nice
Loved it
Interesting...
Plz update soon...
Plz pm me

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KAVYA

@kavyapramod99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Meri asad ko kya huaa..uska chest se khoon beh raha Hein aur phir bhi us zoya ko uski answers Ki padi..meri asad ko doctor ke pass leke chalonah aur uski ache se khyal rakhna pls

( hehe :;I'm a drama queen yaar)
It was an amazing update yaa..loved it..continue soon and do pm me

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Annie

@_Annie_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Great start dear :)

I love such stories...Eager to know what happens next. Update soon dear :)

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ashlesha2

@ashlesha2

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Hello dear

Awesome n intersting but a little longer part will be perfect🥳👍🏼👏

N writing style

Asad:

Zoya:

Or just

N for feeling

A new paragraph

Hey this wayu of writing I mostly prefer

Quotes in a paragraph least attracts me hope u understand

And and and i just suggested it is totally upon u

Don't just stick to this

Chiilll😎

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Hey,its short.i wnt 2 read 4 lng time.ha ha!
Amaizing start.
Why asad dnt let go his insecurities?in this way he is hurting zoya more.
Hope zoya find her way.
Updt soon
& i think i m in ur buddy list thn whr is my pm?*pout*.i didnt get it.nxt time pm me pl

Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 10 years ago

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Wow amazing story

Thank god tannu is out of way

like asad is going to act as dumb here.

emotional fool

What happened to zoya

very interesting story

Thanks for pm

update soon

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

I love this!
So happy that Asya are married in your story!
Asad is keeping his distance but the words coming out of his mouth are quite hurtful and mean...
For how long will Zoya keep fighting him? ...Poor thing...

Looking forward to the next update!