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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: kvsurbhi

Hey Amazing update 😊

Asad is caring n at the same time he does want to show
Why does he bring Ammi in everything 😕
Poor zoya
Now where is she
Hope nothing happens to her
Continue soon 😛


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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Chapter 3

Hey Guys! Sorry for the delay! This is for jas91 <3 Love you maan ^_^ And this is my 500th post<3
enjoy reading :')

Asad kept searching for her , he tried calling her but failed. He finally decided to inform the police , just then the door bell rings. He rushes to open the door thinking it might be Zoya. Yea, it was. He was shocked to see her in this condition. Completely wet & she looked tired. Her eyes were swollen cause of crying. No more tears could come out. Before Zoya could do anything , asad hugged her tightly. Very Tightly. Tears rolling down his eyes. "I thought you left me" he said to her in her ears. She didn't reply. She was still in the shock situation. Zoya? Called out dilshad. No reaction. Zoya? She called out again. No reaction. "Zoya?" Called out asad. Zoya looked into asad's eyes. She ran to hug him. She hugged him tightly. Crying crying crying. The only I thing she did. Asad tried his level best to know what happened but Zoya kept crying. With much difficulties, asad made Zoya sleep. He went near his room window and thought, what's wrong with her? Why is she not talking? He thought many things , did I hurt her too much ? He couldn't sleep cause of tension. He kept thinking why is she depressed? Is it because of me?.
Morning : asad opens his eyes to see Zoya first , full night he was sleeping on the floor near the window. He didn't even realize when did he sleep. He opened his eyes, he saw Zoya was not there on the bed. "Zoya?" He called out. Zoya! ? He screamed. He hears washroom tap running sound. Oh she's in the washroom , he talked to himself. Just then dilshad comes in running, "asad!"
"Haan?"
"Woh Zoya KI appi aur jeeju"
Haan Kya?
"They ain't there anymore." She said with a sad face.
"What? How when? Where? Omg agar Zoya Ko pata chalega toh uska Kya hoga?" He replied.
"Their flight crashed" dilshad told.
"Rip ya Allah"
"How will we tell to zoya?"
Just then Zoya enters : I know Ammi.

Dilshad & asad were shocked.

"I know Ammi.." She repeated , tears rolling down her eyes. "It was all my fault" dilshad came towards her , " no Zoya it is not your fault" "it is Ammi, if I hadn't forced them to come , they would have not gone away from me" she said facing the floor , tears rolling down her eyes uncontrollably. "No Zoya , don't cry yeah Allah KI mark thi" said dilshad.
"No Ammi, everyone have left me everyone. Ammi , Abbu, appi, jeeju, everyone. No one wants to be with me". She said. Hearing this , asad came towards her, but before he could do anything dilshad hugged Zoya. "Zoya no. You should take rest. It's not your fault" said dilshad. "No Ammi noo no" she said faintly and within a second fainted in her arms. "Asad! Take her to her bedroom" asad takes her in his arms and calls the doctor as soon as possible.
Few hours later, Zoya opens her eyes, she was still depressed, she thought it was all her fault that her appi left her. Forever. "Zoya " called out asad softly. Zoya turned her face hearing asad's voice. "Zoya please" he said with tears in her eyes. "I ain't talking to you mr khan" she replied him softly.
"Please Zoya, listen to me"
"no mr khan"
"Please zoya"
"Leave me alone me khan oh wait I'm already alone"
"No Zoya you ain't alone, I am there with you. "
She didn't reply.
"I'm really sorry Zoya, i didn't mean to hurt you, in really sorry " he said crying, he was crying for the the first time that too for Zoya. She have hanged him completely.
Zoya turned towards him and was shocked seeing him crying.
"Asad" she called him out very softly.
He kept crying looking down. He have hurted her.
"Asad don't cry" she told him.
He kept crying. Zoya couldn't handle it anymore. She couldn't see him crying never. She got up from the bed and ran towards him and hugged him. Asad hugged her too tightly. "No asad don't cry" she said to him.
"I'm sorry Zoya"
"It's okay mr khan"
"Call me asad I feel better"
She blushed. " mr khan.. "
"Haan?"
"Why did appi and jeeju leave me" she asked him , they were still hugging tightly. Silence, 5 mins silence. Asad made her sit on her bed. He sat down on his knees.
"Zoya"
She looked towards him.
"When you go to a garden , you always choose the most beautiful flower right? That's the same thing here. Your appi & jeeju were the most beautiful thing that's why Allah chose them" he replied to her. He couldn't see her like this. He wanted the old Zoya back.
Zoya smiled. Asad smiled. They knew it's a beginning of their love. "I love you asad " Zoya thought. "I love you zoya" asad thought.

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Hey guys!
I know I'm updating after so long xD
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This chapter is dedicated to jas91 <3
Edited by PizzaHolic. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Wow amazing update😛
Omg zoya's appi jeeju died😭

Poor zoya feel sad for her
Good atleast asad handled her well n his words when she asked him why did they leave me were amazing
Hope they confess to each not in there mind😉
Continue soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: kvsurbhi

Wow amazing update😛

Omg zoya's appi jeeju died😭

Poor zoya feel sad for her
Good atleast asad handled her well n his words when she asked him why did they leave me were amazing
Hope they confess to each not in there mind😉
Continue soon😃


Thank you so much <3
Congo on being first ^_^
Glad u like it ^___^
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Its amaizing afrin!emotnal one.
Anzee died!omg!poor zoya!
She totaly broke dwn.asad handle her well...
Its nice 2 c asya emotnal talks
thy cnfes 2 each othr in thr mind?why nt openly!
Hp asad overcm his insecurity!...
Thnks 4 pm.cntinu soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Nice part
Felt bad for zoya
Asad Ko ki akkal do yaar
Hope everything goes well between them
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
emotional update...
poor Zoya...feels all alone now
but Asad took care of her
They both love each other...
hope they confess
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Sad..
Aapi n jeeju died...
But glad that asya was there for each other...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Feel sorry for api and jeeju
Asad can't see zoya hurt
Why can't he just tell her that he loves her
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Awesome chapter
Zoya's appi n jiju died
Zoya is so upset.
Asad supported her.
Hope asya confess soon

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