AsYa FF : Our Incomplete Love (CH6 : 9/10) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing concept dear..cant wait to read more and ha update longy long chappys pls...
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Originally posted by: KT15661

amazing concept dear..cant wait to read more and ha update longy long chappys pls...




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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks for new concept finally no tanveer i do not know story theme but make asad jealous n zoya care towards each other n pls is story mein dono ko mila deena.

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Originally posted by: harkav

thanks for new concept finally no tanveer i do not know story theme but make asad jealous n zoya care towards each other n pls is story mein dono ko mila deena.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 1


"Mr khan " called out Zoya. She was waiting for him since 7pm. He was late again. He saw her , and avoided.
"Mein apke liye khana kagaon? She asked. He avoided her & went to his room. Allah Miyan! What wrong with this guy? She thought. Mein kitni izzat SE Bol rahi hoon phir Bhi jawab nahi de rahe hai , first he never tells me he is gonna be late. She talked to herself.

She rushed to their room. Yeah , 'their' room they don't even share one bed. Asad sleeps on the sofa & Zoya on the bed. She opened the door & noticed he was not there. She heard the washroom tap running. "Oh he is there" she thought. "Open the door mr.khan!" She screamed loudly knocking the door. "What's your problem ms farroqui?" He screamed from inside.

"It's not ms farooqui for your kind information!" She screamed back. She is the same Zoya who still doesn't give up. She tried her best to be fit for asad but no, asad never accepted her. No reply. Asad didn't reply. "Mr.khan!" She screamed. No reply again. She started pushing the door. And atleast the door opened , she rushed in. She was shocked. Blood. His chest was covered with blood. He was standing there , near the mirror with cotton trying to control the blood. He was shocked seeing her inside. "What's wrong with you Zoya?" He screamed at her and turned to the opposite side.

"How dare you come inside my washroom with my permission, " he kept screaming , unknowing she was not there to listen. No reply. "Ms farooqui?" He called out while he turned. Kahan chali gayi? He thought.
Forget it. He said to himself & turned back to the mirror. He felt someone's hand on his chest. "Aaah" he screamed. It hurted. He looked up to see zoya's face. Zoya was having cotton in her hands , she was cleaning the blood. Soft Tears rolling down her eyes. "Leave me" he said. Zoya being Zoya didn't listen to him.

He got pissed and with his hands he caught Zoya. "What's wrong with you? " he was shocked seeing her cry. "Why are you crying" he asked. Zoya looked in his eyes with tears rolling down. "Oh! Wow! Mr asad Ahmed khan is asking me why am I crying? Look mr khan. You got hurt. I don't know how but you have to tell me. Look how much blood is coming out. " she said to him softly. "Why should I tell you? You are no one to me." He replied. Zoya was shocked. More tears rolled down her cheeks. "I'm your wife mr khan !" She screamed at him. He was shocked at her behavior. "No , don't you remember this is fake? Fake wedding?" He said. "It doesn't matter mr.khan. We are married" she replied. He was still holding her by his hands. He left her suddenly.

"Listen , this is just fake. You are nothing to me , you mean nothing to me, just a normal girl who came in to my life & changed everything, you spoiled my life" he said angrily. "Oh really mr khan I spoiled your life? " she asked. "Yesh, you did. It was your damn idea to do this fake marriage". "Oh really? Then who told you to use my plan Haan?" She asked again. She wanted to know everything. What he felt for her everything. "Whatever ms farooqui" he replied. "It's mrs Zoya Ahmed khan" she replied with proudness. "You really don't feel anything ? " she asked. "Like what ? " he knew what she meant but still pretended to know nothing. "Love, feelings , likings, you don't have feelings for me? " she asked. "I don't. And what kind of question is this ?" He said lyingly. "I want to know why you did this mr khan. I don't think you would ever marry me without having feelings. You would have never married tanveer cuz you don't have feelings for her" she said. "Have you gone insane?" He asked, he was shocked this was the first she ever talked to him like this.

"I want to know mr khan why do you always stay away from me? Why do you feel nothing for me? And if you do feel something for me why don't you tell me? What about those moments mr khan? You were drunk and you had told me that you love me" she said. "I was drunk okay? " he told. "When a person drinks , they only speak the truth. " she said. "I don't wanna talk to you" and he went towards the sofa. "But I want my answers mr khan!" She screamed. She felt dizzy. She could not see anything clearly. Blur. Everything was blur. "What answers ? All those stupid things you are asking? Listen ..." He turned towards her and realized she was lying on the floor. "Zoyyyaaa!!" He screamed running towards her.

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Oh yeah! I'm done with the first chapter yay xD next chapter next week most probably or tomorrow xD for PMs do buddy me. I
Hope this was long enough to satisfy you people xD
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Edited by Afr.in - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So asya married
Tanveer is gone thank the lord
But still as keeps distance from his wife
He loves her but the fear of hurting her
So how is asad hurt
Poor Zoya in pain seeing him in pain
He confessed to her while drunk and then he denies
Omg she fainted
Hope Zoya fights him to the end and don't give up
Haha the zoyaaa is enough to know how much he loves her
Thanks for pm
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Edited by anopama - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting concept..
Asad avoiding her because of his own insrcurities
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update...really curious to know what happened to zoya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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really nice concept .. I m liking it .. please cont soon
its been really long that I have read a story with this concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds interesting,
looking forward to unfold story..

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