SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12 - Page 41

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

and the ending was epic😆😆😆
fir se bhaang ke pakode kash khaye hote
i wonder aage kya hota😆
i always love these type of ending which gives readers to imagine what wud happen but at the same time the story ends
its thrilling to read such endings
😃


hahaha...yes then in these types we can make a version of our own in our head😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

ek os aur bacha he
wo kal padhungi okay
chal unique love wale thread pe aaja😉


yup...and m posting one more

i read ul and commented too😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
FOR ALL THOSE WHO DIDN'T LIKED THE BHAIJAAN THING IN THE LAST OS:

DEARIES,
I really appreciate it that I have got readers who not only read my work but give their sincere reviews as well. I know that for some of us it's weird as brother-sister having any kind of relationship is taboo but in Islam, it's a normal practice to marry the girls off to their cousins, so the girl stays within the family and among known people.

So I just took the idea from that and basically in the OS, Asad and Zoya weren't related in any matter. Zoya was Najma's friend and took it from her to call Asad as Bhaijaan.

Now I hope you understood my point of view and I am glad that you all took it upon yourself to let me know your views.

-Srashti😊
Edited by -Crazy4AsYa- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
mehroon pari pls read this
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4478390#

chotu sa teaser he jaldi padha jayega
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
R
chuk chuk chuk chuk aai stalker
stalker!
Mehroon pari ki update pe 🤣
yaha ke first pg pe lalu lal ka dera he 😉

unres! Starts!
Such topics can be expected from juhi and only juhi 😆
thoughtful 👏
AGAIN ! Awesome banner by meri...no no jiju ki paru 🤣
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I really don't knw where do i start? This os made me nostalgic
and i counted 2 tears slipping down my cheeks. Haha m i going crazy? I mean u gave such a wonderful update and not that emotional bt why m i wiping tears 😆
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Breathing deep i shud say i love u so much mehrun pari 🤗
M FALLING FOR The way u write. And my tears were of mix emotions! And one of them was pride.
I'm so proud of u doesn't matter if u think ths isn't ur gud work
coz i really m lucky to have u as a writer and me being ur reader ❤️
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I knw her former family was meant to be hated
and i do hate them! A lot!
The way u described her feelings formed a very gud connect. Writing on such issue is tough and i thnk u did a great job!
On knwing her marriage was fixed and she wanted to study and then she gets a family who helps he graduate! Nothing new! These type of stories always contain the similar thng. But mai batati hu naya kya tha
it was you and your fresh thnking
i appreciate that and the bold parts were good to read. Him holding her hand during her ruksati was magical
atleast her bro supported her
then came their night and aww hilarious to read zoya threatened him of lal mirchi [lalu lal ke color ki 🤣]
and the next day aww i loved it when he said to his ammi that mirchi kam dala kijiye hahah...
And i just loved these lines on their wedding night when zoya slept... That was the line na ki uske friends ne bohat tareeko se potray ki thi ye night...yaha se leke silence do talks tak i had the happy tears. Best para of ths update was ths only
then they grew on trust and when she helped him to retrieve file waha bhi jo wise launguage ka prayog kiya he wo bindass laga! 😆
M bck to my jovial self
Zada der serious ni rehti me 🤣
no more crying ab to happy shappy hoing
kyuki i lv u hua and her parents out of picture yes!
Baby on the way yay!!!
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haha first pg to gaya
sry guys
bt mai hu yaha and i am first! Yayaya
yay!

P.s. Posts continued after few pages KYUKI TUNE ITNA ACHA LIKHA KI RES KARE HUE POSTS BHI KAM PAD GAYE 🤣
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago

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