I knw her former family was meant to be hated
and i do hate them! A lot!
The way u described her feelings formed a very gud connect. Writing on such issue is tough and i thnk u did a great job!
On knwing her marriage was fixed and she wanted to study and then she gets a family who helps he graduate! Nothing new! These type of stories always contain the similar thng. But mai batati hu naya kya tha
it was you and your fresh thnking
i appreciate that and the bold parts were good to read. Him holding her hand during her ruksati was magical
atleast her bro supported her
then came their night and aww hilarious to read zoya threatened him of lal mirchi [lalu lal ke color ki 🤣]
and the next day aww i loved it when he said to his ammi that mirchi kam dala kijiye hahah...
And i just loved these lines on their wedding night when zoya slept... That was the line na ki uske friends ne bohat tareeko se potray ki thi ye night...yaha se leke silence do talks tak i had the happy tears. Best para of ths update was ths only
then they grew on trust and when she helped him to retrieve file waha bhi jo wise launguage ka prayog kiya he wo bindass laga! 😆
M bck to my jovial self
Zada der serious ni rehti me 🤣
no more crying ab to happy shappy hoing
kyuki i lv u hua and her parents out of picture yes!
Baby on the way yay!!!
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago