SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12 - Page 40

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Posted: 10 years ago

haan has liya bohat
ab comment time😆
suearmaniac thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey mehroon pari
here with the review of main hoo na
this time mene kuch presume ni kiya and seedhe read ki update😆😆
well one question though it was not at all crap
but why to blame ankie???😆😆😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
banner to khoobsurat he bada👏👏
first thing i love about this update is
that this is very asad-ly update
like how he used to think and gussa jayaz he uska
loved the way the italic heart makes him realize where he's wrong and where he's right
and more best was when at last he actrually listened to his heart😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
it also carried an unsaid msg to humanity😆😆
i loved it when despite his car broke and the mental mess he was in
he helped those accident ppl
and found zoya
his state was well described all thruout the update😃👏👏
and there she wakes up saying my shayris aren't stupid🤣
m,ast update👏👏

suearmaniac thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
and the ending was epic😆😆😆
fir se bhaang ke pakode kash khaye hote
i wonder aage kya hota😆
i always love these type of ending which gives readers to imagine what wud happen but at the same time the story ends
its thrilling to read such endings
😃
suearmaniac thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
ek os aur bacha he
wo kal padhungi okay
chal unique love wale thread pe aaja😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
yup...yaar mast dialogue hai
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

hey mehroon pari
here with the review of main hoo na
this time mene kuch presume ni kiya and seedhe read ki update😆😆
well one question though it was not at all crap
but why to blame ankie???😆😆😆


good...jyada expectations high na kiya kar...seedhe padh lena hi theek hai

Ankie 🤣 she just made me crazy with her...we were doing stupid things and i just forgot what i have to write😉
Gulaabo thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

banner to khoobsurat he bada👏👏
first thing i love about this update is
that this is very asad-ly update
like how he used to think and gussa jayaz he uska
loved the way the italic heart makes him realize where he's wrong and where he's right
and more best was when at last he actrually listened to his heart😃


you know in indian shows sab kuch women based hota hai, we rarely get hero's pov...so i just tried writing it in his pov

heart...all my stories have heart somewhere or the else...i just love heart and mind talks😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

it also carried an unsaid msg to humanity😆😆
i loved it when despite his car broke and the mental mess he was in
he helped those accident ppl
and found zoya
his state was well described all thruout the update😃👏👏
and there she wakes up saying my shayris aren't stupid🤣
m,ast update👏👏

aww..bless you to find the hidden message
glad u liked it😃

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