SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Awesome os yaar
Zoya asad ko bhaijaan bolti hai soo cute
very uniq i loved it
asad bachpan se hi zoya ka kitna khayal rekhta hai
muje bahut acha laga
Very well written
gud job 👏

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#272

Shrash this was awesome n cute...

I not only liked it but loved it...

Hehe the best n funny part was when she gave her consent saying yes bhaijaan😆

It was written with so much sincerity n simplicity...

Aroo nice topic..

N lol Aroo Asad ur pappa...😆😉

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

it is superb srash...
hihi...zoya called asad bhaijaan before :)
finally they get married and they are celebrating anniversary with their daughter..
enjoyed very well...
asad is really caring and protecting...
dilshaad fullfilled her dream...
the last time zoya called asad bhaijaan made me smile wide...
good job dear...
loved it very very very much...

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asadzoyaqubool

@asadzoyaqubool

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Awesome update

Childhood romance was cute

Asad d protective one is cute

Update soonish

Thnks for pm

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#275

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Lovely and Different Os.😊

The Banner was so Nice.😊

The whole OS was so Beautifully explained.😊

Please write like this on ASYA(KABHI) and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊

__________________________________

(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#276

Hey Srash...
Well a Very well written and wonderful part...
OS concept was fantastic as always..but but , i still couldn't digest the BhaiJaan thing...here...it is H.E.L.L A.W.A.R.K.E.D..
But a not so similar i also have in my own family...but it is Odd...
Hope You don't mine me telling that..
Still enjoyed reading it.
Continue soon with more.

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#277

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#278

Beautifully written Srashti. Very different but a very go read. Loved the concept and the way you executed itbwaa very good to. Loved the pinky finger thing, was extremely cute.

Loved it completely ❤️