SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12 - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago
Cute os
like it
thanks for pm
update next os soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-


Sure why not! But I write randomly not in a fixed order so don't mind if it gets delayed😳

Ah no problem for that
I don't mind
Ohkay so prompt is
"Khan Villa on fire. Asad's life in danger. Zoya facing her fear of fire to save asad"
Thank You so much btw 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: H.e.n.a

Res...

Unres..😃
This one is an unique concept and awesome written Srash.
I loved the whole past story of them.
U proved that only feeling matters nothing else.
Zoya addressed Asad as bhaijaan out of habit but this can never changed their blooming love,
Of course Dilshad played a very important role here, her wise eyes recognises the growing relation between them and pushed them to take next level.
The first day college dropping scene has revealed Zoya's feeling too well and Asad's way of looking at her has confirmed his feeling too.
So, over all well justified and a brilliant piece,
I loved it a lot.
Well I loved their daughter Arooba a lot 😉

Thanks dear
I am glad u understood what I really wanted to express with this story😳

I love long comments... .
🤗

Dil khush kar diya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom

Awesome OS

Lovely
Liked the concept of childhood love
Asya journey from their childhood to present was amazing😊

Thanks dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

Aww

That was so cute
Childhood love

Glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Aww this was super cute..:)
I loved it .
chilhood romance is my favourite. .
awesome. .
Superb..:)

Thank u dear😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

It was an awesome OS..
Childhood Love...😊
Very lovely and cute...
But that bhaijaan..is little awkward..😉

Thanks baby😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

Awesome os yaar
Zoya asad ko bhaijaan bolti hai soo cute
very uniq i loved it
asad bachpan se hi zoya ka kitna khayal rekhta hai
muje bahut acha laga
Very well written
gud job 👏


Thanks baby
Mujhe accha laga ki tumne itna sweet comment kiya😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Shrash this was awesome n cute...

I not only liked it but loved it...
Hehe the best n funny part was when she gave her consent saying yes bhaijaan😆
It was written with so much sincerity n simplicity...

Aroo nice topic..
N lol Aroo Asad ur pappa...😆😉


Thanks sweetie...
Glad u liked it and understood my emotions
Aroo Ahmed khan pe mat hanso😆

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