SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Res
Unres..

Lol first for the reverse psychology 🤣

Tumne aloo ki reverse psychology yaha use ki lol...

Well for the OS it was super cool..
I was glad you dint include Tanveer here...
Just Asya..

Liked Asad's talks with his heart😆

I wish something similar happened in the show..
I was so annoyed with scenes that followed the super epic bhang night...

Continue with more of it..

I applied it here 😆

I am glad too that Billi baby is not here...

N thanks for liking

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Thanks

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
Lol
I love the last line

"Allah Miyaan! Aapne phir se bhang ke pakode kha liye kya?"

Omg
Zoya
😆

Believe zoya to turn any situation into a comical

Originally posted by: urvisaini
Wow yaar!
Loved it

But the ending was super awesome

Zoe asking Asad
lah Miyaan! Aapne phir se bhang ke pakode kha liye kya?"

🤣

Loved it

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Thanks dear

Jyada senti ho gaya islie thoda fun😉

Originally posted by: HR-DMG4life
Sweet os'

😃

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Wonderful OS
One of the good scenes of QH & the way u wrote it differently was beautiful
Thanks for pm

Thank u

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Kisne bhaag ke pakode khaye? Asad ne na apne? ☺️
Allah Miyaa!! What' s wrong with u?!!! It was too good ☺️

U ne khilaye hasgulle mujhe 🤣

Thaaanku

Originally posted by: priya--
awesome os

😊

Originally posted by: Applef
Loved it..
Asad's plight was so palpable..
Zoya even it that situation can think about his family..
Last part was awesome..

Thank u😳

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: cutie15
Thank you soo much for writing this..!
I loved it..:)
It was all that I wanted to read.. I'm so satisfied after reading it..!
Nd yes the idea of writing asad's feeling was awesome. ..
The ending was hilarious. . Typical zoya..;)
superb job..:) loved it soo much..!
Thank you..:)

I am glad u liked it n are satisfied

My job done😳

Thanks to u for this wonderful idea...enjoyed writing it

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: kaju27
this is so cute...
you recreated whole bus accident scene minus billi...that was great...
loved it

😳

Originally posted by: enthusiastic
Awesome yaar
U know kya likha hai aapne muje to lag raha tha itna jaldi end kaise ho gaya
muje aur chahiye
really superb os
Wonderful
great asad ahemad khan kitne helpless ho gaye
Kaise bechara ho gaya tha jab zoya ko hospital lele jana chahta tha
really loved it
gud job
👏 👏 👏

Thank u paru

Aur dusre topic pe likhungi yeh finish😆

Originally posted by: ashiii333
Wow

Kya OS tha

Loved it

Asad and his heart

Emotions were written beautifully

The best scene was...

Allah Miyan aap ne phir bhaang pakode kha liye 🤣

Thanks for pm

Great job

Do write more soon

Thank u thank u

Last line ne toh tehlka macha diya😆

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Awesome OS...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Was Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Beautifully Written...⭐️

Update Next OS Soon...😃

Thanks

Originally posted by: asadzoyaqubool
Superb os👏
Xactly dis shud hve had happened in the show
It wud have been a treat to watch such scenes
Cud actly imagine the flow of scenes
continue soon thanks for pm

Aww so sweet of u😃

Originally posted by: jas91
Huggie Tehsu 4 d res 🤗
that was so sweet of u

& Srash it was super duper fantastic OS👏
This version of BNHH was wonderful
It has Asad's POV 4 a change & I loved reading it😃
Awesome it was & Zoya getting conscious wid how dare u call my Shayri stupid was so funny😆😆
very very lovely OS😛

Thank u buddy 🤗

I love asad based OS's too

Glad u loved it

Originally posted by: H.e.n.a
Res finally 😃
Unres!!
😆
"Allah miyan aapne phirse bhang ke pakode kha liye!!"
🤣

Wonderful Srash!!
Post accident scene was heart touching!
Loved it!

Sabse achi bat isme billi nahi thi! Thnk god!
Love u for this! 🤗

Thank u Trish

I am glad to see u here

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
it was beautiful...
Keep Writing more...
❤️

Thanks😳

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: azsumay
Hey srushti
That's nice
Slietly
Asya last convo was too good
Lol

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: Amin21
sweet and lovely os
love it

😳

Originally posted by: katkaif55
this was one fANTASTIC OS👏

Thanks

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Srashh...
Why You No Continue Thiss...
This was very good..., Quite Melodramatic also...And way Unlike our Asad...would have done this...but he should have done this only..and shayad isi bahane Tannu unki zindagi mein hee na aati..
Khair wonderfully written part..,
Loved the whole OS...
But Last mein wahan End kiya tumne...kyun.? Kyun.? Kyun.?
Khair...
AWESOME , FANTASTIC , MIND BLASTING.
Continue soon with more...

Mayur I would like to continue it but this was meant to be an os

I am happy u liked it n believe me no Billi was awesome to write

Thanks

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Amazing os
Loved reading it
Especially the last part
Please continue writing such awesome stories 😊

Thanks

Keep reading

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

😊

Originally posted by: princess_surbhi
Awesome os with beautiful banner
loved it
thanks for pm

Thank u

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: enthusiastic
Kanjoos ho gayi ho?

Haww kyun😕

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: sasir
Awesome

Thanks

Originally posted by: anopama
Aww this was just too sweet
U know I actually enjoyed this one more than the scene in QH
Bcuz there is no billi and asad full focus is Zoya
And he accepted what he feels he is not in denial
Love it

That's such a compliment for me

Thank u 😃

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Thank you Tehseen, next time mera Res bhi, with name (Chico 😉)

Srashti, wow!!!! I mean this was just too good. So vividly described, beautifully done girl 👏👏

Ek baat batao, why did all these good things not happen in the show 😕? Pagal 4 lions CVS need to really read stuff on the forum.

Loved it completely dear. It was an amazing read.

Thanks dear

I know we've better imagination than those rotten cv's 🤣

Originally posted by: nilusoni
awesome os loved it
thanx for pm

Thank u

Originally posted by: Persiko
Srashhhuuu Meriii Jaaannn
...

Amazing loved it ...

beautiful...

Haye humara Asad EC nahi rahaaa

🤗

Party🥳

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ASYAaishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

i really love this reverse psychology...

love it..

it was cute. beautiful.yet emotional one at times..

plz writes more...

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: ASYAaishu
i really love this reverse psychology...
love it..
it was cute. beautiful.yet emotional one at times..
plz writes more...

Thanks

Obviously I'll write more...it's so much fun

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

I applied it here 😆
I am glad too that Billi baby is not here...
N thanks for liking

🤣

Ur welcome here..

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Binzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Yahoo shrash...
I managed to be on time here..😊

Res for Aroo, jas, Mayur, summi, bunny and all of shrashti's gang and readers who follow this thread...

Sorry srash took up your spot..

thankuu 4 the res sinu aappi...🤗
unres on pg 29...

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