SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Loved it..

Asad's plight was so palpable..

Zoya even it that situation can think about his family..

Last part was awesome..

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kaju27

@kaju27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

this is so cute...
you recreated whole bus accident scene minus billi...that was great...
loved it

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Awesome yaar
U know kya likha hai aapne muje to lag raha tha itna jaldi end kaise ho gaya
muje aur chahiye
really superb os
Wonderful
great asad ahemad khan kitne helpless ho gaye
Kaise bechara ho gaya tha jab zoya ko hospital lele jana chahta tha
really loved it
gud job
👏 👏 👏

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Wow

Kya OS tha

Loved it

Asad and his heart

Emotions were written beautifully

The best scene was...

Allah Miyan aap ne phir bhaang pakode kha liye 🤣

Thanks for pm

Great job

Do write more soon

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Awesome OS...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Was Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Beautifully Written...⭐️

Update Next OS Soon...😃

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asadzoyaqubool

@asadzoyaqubool

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Superb os👏

Xactly dis shud hve had happened in the show

It wud have been a treat to watch such scenes

Cud actly imagine the flow of scenes

continue soon thanks for pm

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Yahoo shrash...

I managed to be on time here..😊

Res for Aroo, jas, Mayur, summi, bunny and all of shrashti's gang and readers who follow this thread...

Sorry srash took up your spot..

Huggie Tehsu 4 d res 🤗

that was so sweet of u

& Srash it was super duper fantastic OS👏

This version of BNHH was wonderful

It has Asad's POV 4 a change & I loved reading it😃

Awesome it was & Zoya getting conscious wid how dare u call my Shayri stupid was so funny😆😆

very very lovely OS😛