SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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Shaila Banu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Wow yaar that is sooo lovely asya r just sho cute n i enjoy reading it😳

Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago

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Binzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

I'm late..this is the comment for chapter 1😳
you very beautifully wrote it...
child labour... one of the most important topic which we can't accept ever...
asad as a military officer 😊
their silent love ❤️
nice os dear...

I have a suggestion..asya's holi

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ASYAaishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

i love it..

actually, i hates supernatural writtings..but this did win my hears..

i really love it...

it does feels very much natural to an extent!!!

plz cont soon...

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Binzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

read os 2
its very very beautiful...
loved it very much...
asya's realisation, confession... 👍🏼
supernatural story.. zoya's ammi is back for asya...
good job dear 👍🏼

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ChipChipiBhaalu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Awesome OS Dear

Zoya remembering a past incident

Who is d actress playing Zainab? She luks Arushi of SS or sum1 else

Asad losing Zoya's ring

Zoya getn to know dat Asad has her ring n gets angry. She was right in getn angry as it was a memory of her mom which he sud have gave her.

Asad finally confessed his love to her

Her mom got happy seeing her daughter getn her love n went back

AsYa r still mysterious abt who misplaced d ring n wrote letters

It was really a thrilling story

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Abi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

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jaanu013

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Beautiful ossupernatural..but felt as it was realasya confessed because of zoya's mother..happily married asya...loved it..

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Such an awesome Idea it is srash... would love to read all os' s especially emotional one😉

My request

Asad childhood friends, love each other but hadn't realized it yet...

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Srash...
Brilliant Concept...
Wonderfully Written OS...
A very Unique and Innovative Idea for a OS...and i loved reading this..
And AsYa*...were blended in a magical way.
Continue Soonish...with many more of this.

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kaju27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#140

heyyy can u write something on after bnhh sequence asad starts ignoring zoya nd gives too much imp to tanveer thus zoya getting hurt bt dont show her doing something stupid to get his attention like in the show...
plsss involve ayan helping zoya in finding out abt her abbu...nd thus asad getting jelous...so when he offers held zoya denies it...bt end it happily...i always wanted to read something like this always...

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