SS - Written in the Stars: Ch 17 & 18 Pg 112 COMPLETED

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Nice updates...Good to see Surbhi and Asad get closer..

I have not yet figured Asad's character yet...Its not coming out strong :-( Is it me? Probably need to read the story again, I guess. No offense. I am only being honest as I love, love your style and know this is different and you are experimenting too :-) I hope its okay...

Edited by rajsmi - 10 years ago

Quote

--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Res.. For Aroo, Mayur, ashii, azsumay, shama, Khushbu and all my other friends who follow the story.

Thank you so much di for res 🤗

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
Res 4 kadoo, mumma, yoyo, yashu, maggie, bano, srash, adi, trash, sukhi, binni, gowtu, sumi, amu api, apiya, hano, badi api, choco api, aseelah api, anopama, sanjhari, abi bhai, mayur bhai and asif bhai

Thank you so much aroo

🤗🤗

For double res

Quote

--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#314

Amazing update di

So Zack love ria

Asya party seen was too good

Their dance with each other

They dance moves are perfect

Ria and Zack kiss infront of Surbhi and asad they feel awkward

Started to feel each other

Waiting for next part

Lots of love

Quote

Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Res.. For Aroo, Mayur, ashii, azsumay, shama, Khushbu and all my other friends who follow the story.

Thank You so much for the RES* Tehseen...😊

Aapii update was wonderful and well written👏⭐️

Story is moving quickly yaa you are in a rush...😕...but anyways I liked the update..

Asad recovered and was discharged also...😊

Surbhi ke feelings mein I am confused😕...

Zack and Ria are a couple wohhh...that's good😊...

All and all a haapy go lucky kind of part⭐️

Dance sequence was also good...

Continue soonish..😃

Quote

sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Wow.. this was superb..I can see the sparks between them..:)
Their dance scene was so intense..
I am loving this pair..:)
Superb update dii.. cant wait to read more..
Your stories are an addiction. .:)

Quote

Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#317

Beautifully written updates
Ria & Zack was surprised for Surbhi & she was happy with that. Interactions between asad & Surbhi was nice. Dance sequence was wonderful. Everyone was awed to see them dance like professionals. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Quote

muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#318

That was such an amazing chapter

Loved it

Especially asad and surbhi dance

Please continue soon😊

Quote

anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#319

Love both updates

So they have each other phone numbers now

Let's see

So he was discharged she throw a get well party

Aww zack and Ria so cute Suri approves so does all

So asad also knows abt them

So the young couple r in love

Aww surad discussion abt love haha if only they know

They r written in the stars

So a night at the club she wasn't going until she heard he is

Aww so love the dancing and a shopping spree

So did her expression changed when he said date and shopping

Can't wait to see where they goes

They r already in sync and having heavy heartbeats

Wonder if Ria discussion have anything to do with surad

Continue soon

Quote

fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#320

Ahhh loving Asad here a lot!
Surbhi is in love!
Zack and Ria are a couple...and now they shall see the increasing closeness between Asbhi!

Can't wait to read on!

Thank you for the PM sis!

🤗 ❤️

Quote

1 ... 30 31 32 33 34 ... 81

SS - Written in the Stars: Ch 17 & 18 Pg 112 COMPLETED - Page 32

Related Topics

Explore Topics