SS - Written in the Stars: Ch 17 & 18 Pg 112 COMPLETED

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Salaam All

Surprised to see me back so soon 😳

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I wrote and completed this story about a month ago. An idea that my Kiddo (Abi) gave me.

This story/piece of writing is experimental and may not be as wow as you have found my other writing. So please bare with me.

The story is called Written in the Stars and is based on Surbhi & Asad as opposed to Karan & Zoya.

Like I said the story is complete so will update regularly, but only if I get a good response to it. I cannot tell you how nervous I am about posting this.

This story is dedicated to a few very special people in my life.

Firstly, Kiddo as this was your idea, I hope you like it and it lives up to your expectations

Choco and Nim for always encouraging me and pushing me. My pillars of support that I cannot be without

Bano, Aroo & Fatima, you three are so special. I love you guys so much

Lots of Love & Duas

Saima


Index
Chapter 1 - page 1
Chapter 2 - page 7
Chapter 3 - page 14
Chapter 4 - page 27
Chapter 5 & 6 - page 35
Chapter 7 & 8 - page 45
Chapter 9 - page 51
Chapter 10 - page 58
Chapter 11 - page 63
Chapter 12 - page 71
Chapter 13 & 14 - page 87
Chapter 15 - page 98
Chapter 16 - page 107
Chapter 17 & 18 - page 112
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'And the award for the best actress of 2014 goes to non-other than the queen of beauty Surbhi Saxena' the entire stadium erupted in loud cheers and screams as the nation's best loved actress Surbhi Saxena stood up to claim her third award for the evening. There was nothing this dazzling beauty could not do; at an age where people struggled to find their feet in life she had achieved success, fame and fortune like no other. Hugging her best friend Suhana and co-stars Surbhi walked towards the stage to claim her winning trophy.

Taking the mic she addressed the audience

'Wow...I really am lost for words, thank you all so much for this honour. I would like to thank my family, my friends, the beautiful people I work with who have all helped me and supported me...without you all this would not have been possible...thank you once again'

Surbhi blew a kiss to her audience who stood up in a standing ovation and the thousands of viewers at home.

Taking her seat she sat full of pride and joy, a girl who came to Mumbai with nothing but a dream was now the face of India and the international world. Full of confidence and determination there really was no one at this moment in time who could match her.

As the award ceremony came to an end Suhana stood up 'you ready for the after party?' 'You bet I am...lead the way' she said beaming her million dollar smile.

Surbhi who was known as Suri amongst her family and friend really did know how to let her hair down and party. It was past three in the morning ' Suri, we need to go...you have a shoot tomorrow you really want to rock up half asleep looking like queen of the zombies' Surbhi pocked her tongue out 'ok, ok let's go' saying bye to those around her she called for her driver who took both her and Suhana home.

Just about managing to make it to her room Surbhi threw her bag and slumped herself over king sized bed falling asleep instantly.

The rays of the rising sun flickered through her blinds playing hide and seek 'noo...it can't be morning already' she moaned as she covered her face with the pillow 'morning...it's almost midday sleepy head get up, the producer has called three times already' Surbhi jumped up 'shit...we are late' 'correction girlfriend, you are late...now get a move on, the driver is ready downstairs'

Showering at the speed of light Surbhi quickly got changed and ran downstairs 'morning Ria, morning Mum...see you guys later...,byeee' she shouted out as she ran past them without a second look. Payal Saxena, Surbhi's adoptive mother and her younger sister Ria looked at each other 'something's will never change, I wish that girl would slow down' Payal said shaking her head.

Payal and Ria adopted Surbhi after she lost her parents at a very young age. Ria and Surbhi were poles apart, the total opposite of each other but the bond and closeness they shared was second to none. Ria loved her sister as much as she loved her, Surbhi could live without anything but not her sister, she would compromise on anything in life but not when it came to her sisters happiness, she was her pillar of support, her life line.

On route to the studio Surbhi called Ria 'I did it again...sorry' she said 'you know that tone isn't going to work with me madam...so keep,you acting where it counts' Surbhi started laughing 'ok fine...I love you' 'I know you do...now go and do whatever it is you are late for, I will see you tonight'. Surbhi put her phone away smiling to herself.

Like many people that belonged to the world of fame Surbhi had a number of personalities. For her loved ones she was the kindest most loveable girl you could ever know, to the people she worked with she was professional, hardworking and a perfectionist. And to the outside world that she didn't see eye to eye with she was arrogant, rude and an obnoxious girl who had more money than sense.

'Finally, her majesty makes her presence' 'zip it Akash' Surbhi said looking at him with narrowed eyes. Akash was Suhana's boyfriend and Surbhi's PR manager; as much as she loved him she didn't have much patience for his untimely sarcasm and humour that only he found funny.

Running towards the makeup room Surbhi got ready for her shot. Coming out on set she took her position opposite her co-star Aditya Shah, another big name in the industry. The scene required the character Surbhi was playing to show her emotional, most vulnerable side as she pleaded with her on screen love not to leave her. One of the best things about Surbhi's acting abilities was how quickly she was able to bring out and portray the emotions her director required. There was no doubt that she was beautiful but the beauty that the screen captured was exemplary, it was multiplied by a thousand.

After working through her scenes and dress changes non-stop for over four hours Surbhi was more than exhausted. The director had asked the whole unit to gather around for a briefing, he told them that for the next portion of the script they had to shoot on an outdoor location 'we will be travelling to Delhi for a three day schedule, we leave the day after tomorrow, I want everyone to be here ready to go at 7...ok people that's a wrap, see you tomorrow morning'
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Res for Nim & Chocoberry
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Badi api🤗
I am first yayyy new story🥳
That too on Surbhi and Asad (AsBhi) hayyeee name seems so perfect to them

Hayeee I am already in love with the fact that it's on Surbhi and Asad...❤️

Coming to story...

It sounds damn damn damn interesting👍🏼 Surbhi a successful actress🥳😎
Payal and akash...these name reminded me of IPKKND but sad they belong to different generations😆
Now is there any need for me to tell you that I already want nect update...please update soonish badi api...can't wait for asad's entry...

And yeah thank you for dedicating it to me too...didn't knew that i deserve such honor ... m overwhelmed🤗
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Res 4 kadoo, shona, apple, mumma, yoyo, yashu, maggie, bano, srash, adi, trash, sukhi, binni, gowtu, sumi, amu api, apiya, ainnu, shano, badi api, choco api, aseelah api, anopama, sanjhari, abi bhai, mayur bhai and asif bhai
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow a new story
So not ur idea someone else
So we have surbhi in place of Zoya
And asad instead of Karan
So let's see if readers will have issues with this as the did for Kaya stories
Love the concept thought
I am reading a story where we have asad and Anaya
And enjoy it truly
So definitely will enjoy this
After all it is u writing it
Continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love you too sis! To the moon and back! 🤗 ❤️

I'm loving this new story! Loving the fresh concept and characters! Can't wait to meet Asad! 😉

Love you loads sis xxx
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its start so nice ... bt vat attract me vs its title , so thoughtful so romantic luvd it !!
abt d pairing if kaya is acceptable den asbhi too so don't be nervous :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay! So happy for the new story
And i must say an interesting start
Please continue soon😊
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Very nice concept
I like it
Surbhi looks introduced very well
Thanks for pm 😊
Lol ❤️
Edited by azsumay - 10 years ago

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