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Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hi Choco,
Just caught up with the chap. I would say Im sorry but then I think I have used all my quota of that earlier only. Just hoping that you wont be upset with me :(The part was beautiful, as always. Seriously i need to learn more adjectives to describe ur n sis's stories. Everything looks plain in front of ur writings.I love the part. The emotions and situation were described so perfectly well that I just lost myself in it. I feel sad for Asad and Zoe both. Both are fighting, one for his love one against it. They have their reasons. Zoe's not wrong in her place. She must have faced something, something so drastic that she is pushing away her one love that she has been pining for all these years. And Asad, my baby, hurting so much :( But i really respect and love him for his patience and care that he is showing towards her. His actions in the cafe melted my heart. You know i gasped wen he said "for you.." God... my heart swayed. Hayye. Send me this Asad, pretty please :) I loveee him.Please update soon Choco. I cant wait to see what Zoe does now that she is feeling a little more for him and accepting her feelings. I hope no more turning away or running. Update soonish.Love you loads.. dher saraaa... hamesha
Nims, I can never be upset with you cause uske baad mera kya hoga 😒. Can't go a day without you 😳
Look whose talking, jiski writing ki mein knud deewani hoon says am good and Sis will agree with me that your writing is exceptional. Just wait for us to start posting 😉 you will know
Thank you so so much Nims, accepting all the appreciation with a big big smile 😃. I really feel happy when you mention the little details that you liked, especially the dialogues as I love writing those 😳
Writing the next part already 😃
P.S. If I send you this Asad what am I going to do??? Chalo lets share him instead b😛😳
Anupamaa
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