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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Beautiful Mahu!

This is what everyone wanted, an intense story of their finding way back go each other - minus Vamp interruption!

Sigh.. Loved it !

Ramadhan Mubarak!

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: khushbloom
Awesome. Loved it.
Sahil emotions were potrayed so nicely.
Why can't this happen in the show?
Continue soon.

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you loved it. :) We all want some progress on the show.. Let's see how it goes.

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: lasya13
Beautiful 😊
how I wish it happens in the show..
waiting for the next part

Thank you! I had to write something if I needed to survive with the current track 😆 I'll try to update in the coming week. :)

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
This was seriously so beautiful
i wonder how the next part will be
sahils emotions are so beautifullly expressed
can't wait for the next part
please continue soon
will be waiting impatiently 😊

I think I have a thing toward emotions 😆 I can't seem to write anything if I don't include that ingredient in the stories I write. :)

Thank you so much! I'm sure you'll like the last part of the story as well. I sure enjoyed writing it. :)

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sahil333
Oh so beautiful 👏. I'm loving it 🤗. All kinds of emotions running through my mind.

You took us on an awesome ride down memory lane. Love how you incorporated the actual scenes of the show. It felt really good, loved it so much.❤️

Laughter when she was being curious about him.😆

Sadness for Aahil that she couldn't remember the night they shared their love.😭

Also sad that she was so confused about herself and her feelings for him.

Happiness, coz she finally remember who she is. So touching, snif 😭 happy tears!

Now I'm waiting for a speedy update! 😉

You're a great writer Mahu and thank you for writing and sharing those SaHil stories with us.

Where is your index, btw?

Awww.. ❤️ 🤗

Thank you so much for all the love, Dear! You're way too cute! 😳 I was so touched when I read your feedback. I'm so happy that you enjoyed the First Part. Yaay..

I can't seem to connect with Jannat.. That's why I've always had the thought that she'll be drawn toward The Nawab. She'll start to question his ways and become highly frustrated. Now, that's what I always wanted to see..

You know, look forward for the update! It's both intense and power packed. It got a few moments of 😆 and ..

Oh, and the Index is placed right under the Banner with the Link attached. :)

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil
Mahuu, my darling! How do you do it everytime?! Such a lengthy first part on top of that! 😲
WOW. This is just brilliant! Such a dreamy story this is! Good thing you sent that Shady in search of SK. 😆😆

Prags!
You were the first person I thought of along with Esha when I was about to post this! 😆
But seriously, I have no idea just how I can come up with these kind of stories! All I did was listen to "Kitni Bechain Hoke" by accident and Viola, I had a small piece of paper on me and I just started to write..

This was just so amazing! I mean everything! THIS is want we wanted to see! Her falling for his charm, and all those memories keep playing with her. Being hot and bothered with his presence, and him smirking knowing what she is feeling! 😆

Word!!

Now, that's what we've all been waiting for. I would have loved if they showed her bothered and frustrated by him.. 😳 This is what our JJ is all about! He has the upper hand and knows just how to play it out.

My most favorite part?! When he saw her doing prayers! Awww!! That was beautiful! No actually, the way he put that scarf back on her head when it was loosened a bit...😳 It had something so sweet about it! Sigh!

I knew it'll be your favorite part and it's mine too. I so loved writing it. The small gesture and studying her gently from the doorway.

And ofcourse the pool part and when she blurted that oh so famous dialogue of her 😆 The Pudine Ki Chutney and ARI playing it cool! 😆 How awesome is this!

And that little close encounter in that place?! How can I miss that? How HOT was that to be honest?! Aahil is such a...❤️ He wants his Sanam and he would wait, till she would be back! I can imagine how hard must be it for him, being so close to her..😳 And Sanam, totally turned on by his charm! 😛

Sophistication and Determination is all what Sanam and Aahil need. I wanted him to wait so she remembered. Trust me, they are both equally frustrated by the compassion and lust which have been formed between them. 😳 Maybe we'll see someone take a step forward next time ... 😉

And also, I am so glad that she actually gave into the feelings she was having, when he was around and actually said to him! So unlike the dumbass Sanam she was earlier. I am sure is she would have known and aware of her feelings she would have confessed too all those days back...😳

Such an excellent piece this is! Can't wait for the next one! 😛

Thank you for the gorgeous feedback, Prags! 🤗 I always imagined Jannat to be aware of her hidden feelings. I wish she would have confessed it all to him, because it's rather clear - HE is the one who brings out a reaction from her unlike someone else, who btw is only busy with being annoyed these days. 😆

And Prags, look out for the last part. YOU are going to looove it. 😆😉

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: siyasharma94
Beautiful story
No shaad No sanam2 yipeee 👏
Amazing nd very long part it was
cn't wait for another part update soon 😳

Thank you for loving this! It means so much to me. :) Yes, no Sanam2 in my stories. I can't tolerate her character. 😆

Keep looking forward for the Last Part. It's all power packed and rather interesting 😉

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
Oh my goodness
This is amazing!!!
15th story and still impressed
Now I have to go make sure I read all your stories

Loved how you describe everything
It's so vivid and real
I can picture every emotion and scene in my head

Excited for her to get her memory back

I'm shocked that ahil stopped himself from touching her during their whole almost makeout session

Great great job
Ouuu excited for the next part
Thanks!!!

It's so nice to hear from you! I feel it's been so long since I saw you around.. 🤗

First of all, thank you soo much for the beautiful words. ❤️ This is what I wanted to create and the fact that you mention those things, makes me so happy.

I wanted Aahil to make sure she remembered him. He is pushing her limits and he knows very well how she is reacting to it.

Do look forward for the Last Part. It's all about Love... or is it? 😉

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sageflower7
Beautiful Mahu!
This is what everyone wanted, an intense story of their finding way back go each other - minus Vamp interruption!

Sigh.. Loved it !

Ramadhan Mubarak!

Anniii 🤗 Thank you for loving it. :)

I'm so fed up with Vamps and negativity and more importantly, I am so tired of Sanam2! So of course she is nowhere near SaHil in my story. 😆

I personally cannot wait to post the Last Part. It's going to be an intense ride that's for sure..

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Omg Mahwash! What was that! It was one passionate and intense read! ☺️ Not that I am shocked since you are the writer! 😳 This was such a stunning read! Like I could imagine it all before my eyes! 👏 And your story has such an aura of royalty in it! Do you get me?!! Its about Nawab Sahab and his Begum Jaan and your story depicts that perfectly! Simply brilliant!! Loved the absence of a certain parasite 😆 If only the show had one track, a single track, minus vamps! If only! 😆 But that will never happen! Thanks for making it happen with your story though! I loved it! ❤️ I don't even need to tell you how much i love your work! You already know that you've got a fan right here! 😉

The way Sanam is emerging from within Jannat slowly and falling for her Nawab Sahab once again is so beautiful! So ethereal!! And so sexy! ☺️ She cant help but be extremely attracted to this sexy Nawab! He has taken over her mind, body and soul! I swear I was transported to another world while reading this! This is the SaHil we see in our dreams! Such a delicious piece! Cant wait for part 2!!! ⭐️

I loved the part where he moved away despite it being such a heated moment! You know I always wanted something like that! And you wrote it perfectly! It was so hot yet emotional! I love how Aahil believes that he belongs to Sanam and Sanam only! And he will wait for her to come back! Such a innocent and pure soul hidden beneath all that sexiness! I have always loved how respectful he is of her space and despite wanting her so much, can hold back! Thats true love! Where emotions are more important that physical intimacy! Its not easy for a guy to back off but Aahil's love is too pure to be held back by desire only! He wants only his Sanam, the one who loves him and wants him as much as he wants her! ❤️ Of course Jannat wants him too! After all, his charm is irresistible! 😉 Jannat can definitely vouch for that 😆

The prayer part was so beautiful as well! I always love how you include spirituality in your writing! Aahil and Sanam have always shared a soul connection and you never forget to add that in your writing! The way he pulled her dupatta over her head again was so innocent and beautiful! I teared up reading that part! And of course it would all be incomplete without her drooling over him while he is swimming in the pool! 😉😆 That was sexy just like Jallad Jinn himself! We all would love a scene like that 😆

Gosh I loved all of it! Cant wait to read more! Please update part 2 soon!!! 🤗

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