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Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Omg Mahwash! What was that! It was one passionate and intense read! ☺️ Not that I am shocked since you are the writer! 😳 This was such a stunning read! Like I could imagine it all before my eyes! 👏 And your story has such an aura of royalty in it! Do you get me?!! Its about Nawab Sahab and his Begum Jaan and your story depicts that perfectly! Simply brilliant!! Loved the absence of a certain parasite 😆 If only the show had one track, a single track, minus vamps! If only! 😆 But that will never happen! Thanks for making it happen with your story though! I loved it! ❤️ I don't even need to tell you how much i love your work! You already know that you've got a fan right here! 😉

OMG Esha.. Are you for real.. 😲 Itna lamba comment... 🤗 I absolutely love it! Aww, Even I don't know what this was.. I swear listening to a song and being bored is a deadly combination for me.. 😆

I'm touched beyond words, really.. I actually had to sit down a bit and comprehend this comment. I am truly touched and humbled! Thank you so much for all the love. ❤️

And you already know how much I adore the aura of royalty.. I just had to include it in my story.

Trust me, if only they did that.. They would had rocked the show even more. But drama and suspense is all part of our SaHil. 😉 They need to prove their love and show the world how strong it really is. :)

The way Sanam is emerging from within Jannat slowly and falling for her Nawab Sahab once again is so beautiful! So ethereal!! And so sexy! ☺️ She cant help but be extremely attracted to this sexy Nawab! He has taken over her mind, body and soul! I swear I was transported to another world while reading this! This is the SaHil we see in our dreams! Such a delicious piece! Cant wait for part 2!!! ⭐️

Like I said somewhere before. I always imagined to show the slow and steady transformation form Jannat to Sanam. It's not something that will happen over night. It's a slow progress which I know Aahil will be patient and wait for her. That's what our Nawab is all about. :)

I loved the part where he moved away despite it being such a heated moment! You know I always wanted something like that! And you wrote it perfectly! It was so hot yet emotional! I love how Aahil believes that he belongs to Sanam and Sanam only! And he will wait for her to come back! Such a innocent and pure soul hidden beneath all that sexiness! I have always loved how respectful he is of her space and despite wanting her so much, can hold back! Thats true love! Where emotions are more important that physical intimacy! Its not easy for a guy to back off but Aahil's love is too pure to be held back by desire only! He wants only his Sanam, the one who loves him and wants him as much as he wants her! ❤️ Of course Jannat wants him too! After all, his charm is irresistible! 😉 Jannat can definitely vouch for that 😆

Remember that's what we talked about over PM - leaving her bothered and all. Haha! Thank you so much for pointing out the places you loved, Esha. I know how hard it can be sometimes, but the fact that you've done it really sets a warm feeling in me. 🤗 I appreciate all the effort. You're really a gem of a person - but you already know that. 😳

The prayer part was so beautiful as well! I always love how you include spirituality in your writing! Aahil and Sanam have always shared a soul connection and you never forget to add that in your writing! The way he pulled her dupatta over her head again was so innocent and beautiful! I teared up reading that part! And of course it would all be incomplete without her drooling over him while he is swimming in the pool! 😉😆 That was sexy just like Jallad Jinn himself! We all would love a scene like that 😆

Of course I had to include the swimming pool. It was where it all started. She started to peek at him and then fall happened where they knew their souls were connected. Aww.. JJ know it all, that's why he took the dip at the first place. 😆

Gosh I loved all of it! Cant wait to read more! Please update part 2 soon!!! 🤗

As you said, I have a thing toward adding emotions and spirituality. I just have to add them in the stories I write or else I feel like there's something missing.. 😳

Again, thank you for all the heartwarming love you're sending my way. It's so nice to receive so much appreciation that it makes you want to write even more.

This is definitely the most beautiful comment I've ever read. <3

I cannot wait to post the Second Part either.. 😉 It's going to goood.. (I hope😆).

Beautiful story. 👏 can't wait to read part II.

This quiet and gradual progression of a soul finding their way back home to the one who is waiting was very heartwarming. And w/o all the vamps to gum things up! Loved it. I wish they would've tried to do something lime this on the show. Do they think the audience won't appreciate a meaningful progression? We do! That's why I loved ur take on this.

Also, using those old favorites. 😛 I swear I could hear Aahil saying the serve me line. Or the Emran Hashmi&Salman Khan line making an appearance. That was fun. I liked how gentlemanly Aahil was and how true to his Sanam. It's truly not about lust but love.

My favorite part? When Jannat offered to be his Sanam. She fell for him all over again! My two favorite tropes: amnesiac falling in love w same person and falling in love despite everything telling u that it is wrong! You made that progression for Jannat look very natural and inevitable.

Great job!

Originally posted by: darkice7_12

Beautiful story. 👏 can't wait to read part II.

This quiet and gradual progression of a soul finding their way back home to the one who is waiting was very heartwarming. And w/o all the vamps to gum things up! Loved it. I wish they would've tried to do something lime this on the show. Do they think the audience won't appreciate a meaningful progression? We do! That's why I loved ur take on this.

Also, using those old favorites. 😛 I swear I could hear Aahil saying the serve me line. Or the Emran Hashmi&Salman Khan line making an appearance. That was fun. I liked how gentlemanly Aahil was and how true to his Sanam. It's truly not about lust but love.

My favorite part? When Jannat offered to be his Sanam. She fell for him all over again! My two favorite tropes: amnesiac falling in love w same person and falling in love despite everything telling u that it is wrong! You made that progression for Jannat look very natural and inevitable.

Great job!

Beautiful - was the only word that came in my mind after reading the whole part.

its simply beautifull...

really beautiful story and great job writing it

Loved it! 👏

I really appreciated how realistic Aahil's and Sanam's reactions were to this situation.

Aahil beat down on Shaad. Yay!

And Sanam is suffering from nightmares since this was a horrible thing someone did to her.

There are emotions to deal with, but Aahil speaks to her about letting go of the past. Liked how mature Aahil has become. And how he kicked everyone out!

And a beautiful ending for our fave couple.

Thanks for the wonderful story.

Awesome.
Loved it.
When will this happen in the show.
Write more stories like this only.

Firstly, you've created awesome banners for this story , I loved it. 👍🏼

"The city needs its Begum. The Nawab needs his wife."
Slowly a smile began to form across her rosy lips. Sanam slipped her hand into his. "Mrs. Ibrahim needs her husband too. No more being apart - and I mean it this time."

Happy Ending for our SaHil ❤️