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Chappy 5 Thief and the princess

Razia smirking (thinks) its good tht she is gone..

gaffur :God plzz make her come back...she is the only treasure I cherish..i'll marry her to whoever she says

plzz darling come back...u don't know the outside world ..and I am grown old..i want to giv all the responsibility to u..and ur future hubby whoever it is...I am sorry dear ... a tear drop rolling from his cheek

Razia thinks well now its show time...its time to get rid of u...and make akram the king of narnia smirks evily

And gives a mixed fruit juice...

Your majesty u had nothing from morning...atleast drink this fruit juice

Gaffur : no razia my dauther had never gone away lik this..and I never allowed her to go outside...

And wht would be her condition how would she live without food ??...and our enemies if thy come to know tht she is missing thy would kill her...

Thts why our people of Narnia don't know abt the princess missing only palace gaurds and palace servents and ministers know abt it...I hope the gaurds find her soon

Razia : but ur majesty I think u should have this juice for some strength coz wht would the princess think if she returns that I have not even cared to giv u food

Gaffur aftr lot of insistence frm razia drinks the juice and instantly aftr few seconds gets guidy and faints

Razia smirks this juice will make u paralysed and you'll be in a state of coma.. sleeping like a dead body zinda lashh...ha ha ha ha.. this venom which is mixed in the juice is extracted from the poisonus plants..

Scene shifting to the princess and thief

Asad : This is narnia's dense forest...zoya scans it ...wow its so beautiful ...I love the nature...just love ittt

And starts running again franatically...

Asad : hmmm..waittt...listen..hey...

Zoya pov

I leapt to my feet running with the wind through the grass my bare feet feeling every step. I gasped as my feet came in contact with something wet and cool. I looked down, I was standing in a strip of water, I realized it was a pond.

"For like the first time ever," I sang my passion and hope and excitement falling off me in waves, "I'm completely free."

I could go running," I realized turning to leave the valley, "and racing, dancing and chasing, and leaping hair flying heart pounding" I ran faster than I ever had passing through the tunnel .

"And splashing, and really feeling," I exited the cave into a whole new world of sounds ..I threw my arms out as I slowly spun in a circle taking in the world around me.

The trees were so much bigger and there was no sound of water falling from a waterfall, instead you could hear the wind and animals chattering about.

"I can't believe I did this!" truly happy for once in my life. "I can't believe I did this," my voice dropped worry entering my tone. "I can't believe I did this!" I shouted to the heavens jumping up and down at my own rebellion.

I started walking mulling over my thoughts, I didn't really notice when asad caught up to me, I was too distraught to care. I reached a pond, which I have to mention was absolutely gorgeous, its surface clear and blue.

"But that's ok," I muttered down to my hands which were cupping one of the blooms that were floating on the surface, " I continued on past the pond into a cave..

a fresh wind with a new scent I had never experienced before entered the cave. I ran out suddenly my pace picked up as I began to fall/run down the hill.

"This is so fun" I yelled running past asad my arms in the air just taking in my surroundings. I kicked up a pile of leaves giggling at the textures against my toes. I slowed down after I stubbed my toe hopping up and down on one foot. I strolled around just taking it in.

I fell onto my face close to tears, how can father not care for me...did he ever love me ??

Asad sat beside me obviously bored out of his mind, Regaining my smile I hopped up and jogged on the spot shaking away my worries and doubts. Asad just glanced up at me his arms crossed, I think, if I recall properly his arms had been crossed for the last twenty minutes. I ran up to him and tugged them down smiling. He glared at me and recrossed them. I raised one eye brow and began to walk away, then I dashed back and pulled them down again, he seemed unimpressed.

"Stop it princess." He muttered.

I was shocked?? Did he know ?? I said I am not princess

Asad : but u seem like 1 princess who as never seen the world and was locked inside the four walls of the palace,,

"It's zzz uhh ziya." I said emphasizing my name to him.

He tilted his head to the side and then nodded once.

Asad : hmmm zzz

zoya : its ziya

Asad : zeee

zoya : ziya

asad : zeee well it seems lik urs and the princess name is quite similar

princess : my name is ziya and hers is zoya...

asad : hmm zeee

zoya : never mind

I simply ignored asad and walked away and started running again,. The feels of freedom

Asad : here we go again...

I noticed asad standing ther with his arms crossed. I slowed down dragging my feet into the ground. It occurred to me that the reason asad was so moody was that he was judging me. I swallowed. I mean, he obviously knew a lot about the outside world, maybe he thought I was being silly. What if he was right, I walked towards a set or rocks that looked like a decent place to sit down. I practically fell down onto the rocks wrapping my arms around my legs and tucking my head in. I couldn't hold it back anymore, I started to cry.

Asad's pov

This gal had been acting like a schizophrenic for the last five hours, she would argue with herself about the justifications of leaving palace, and then start picking daisies and smell them..and run and hop lik crazy..like she never has done all this in her childhood lik she never played or enjoyed this nature she is such a kiddo ..she acts like a princess hmm or even like a alien to this world of narnia Then She would cry in the dark cave and again argue wth herself abt her father whther he loved her or not..

I began to wonder how much the chick got out. She kept muttering about her father

I mean why is she questioning about her fathers love...atleast she has a father whether he loves her or not is different question but he hadn't abandoned her like my parents...so I envied her

Both my parents had abandoned me at the age of 2.. I couldn't even remember what they looked like I spent all my time with fellow orphans in the orphanage ... I pushed the thoughts away; I tended to avoid thinking about my past...well atleast she is not a orphan...and there again I see her crying looks like she has some pain within her... I started to walk over to comfort her but I stopped myself. Why would she want to talk to me? and who cares...all I care is for tht precious diamonds...

Yes I am going wth her to show her places but only for diamonds coz I needed them badly

If I didn't get it I would be back on the streets bartering for food. My entire life would be the same looting looting and looting from the rich...and being in the wanted list of the authority...

And my fellow orpans they would follow my footsteps...

Suddenly there was a large rustling in the bushes I tilted my head to the side in curiosity, usually animals didn't come this close to people, especially when they were being as loud as we had been. Unlike me, zoya didn't respond with idle curiosity.

About five seconds after we heard the sound she gasped jumping onto my back, I almost fell over with the sudden jump but balanced myself as she scrambled to place me in front of her for protection, really she was over reacting...

Zoya :"are they palace gaurds she asked her voice trembling in fear. " Have they come for me?!"

Oh lord now wht will happen ?? noo I don't wanna go...

Asad ; well zee will u care to get off my back...

Zoya : no ..

Asad : zeee

Zoya : nooo

The rustling paused for a second and then it grew louder in one moment the source of the sound... came out into our view. It was a wild pig

Zoya : tangling herself onto me crushing me tightly screamed ahhh somebody anybody...somebody

Asad balancing me took a dagger from his side pocket and aimed it to the pig and in a moment the pig is dead...

Asad :well u can open ur eyes zee

Zoya : opens her eyes how did u know tht I had closed it

Asad : just a guess

Zoya : uhh don't think tht I was scared of it..

He just nods smiling at my antics

Well shld I be carrying u to the whole of narnia kingdom this way since u seem to be frightened and scared (smirking) ...

Zoya : she sees herself in tht position bit embarressed still tangled behind his back and detangles herself from him carefully

Sorry ...I guess I'm just a little bit jumpy

Asad ; I looked at her, her naivety shocking me again, she was so sweet and unaware and yet so... understanding...but ther is somethg to her...somethg more...somethg hidden...

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hey nikki🤗 sooo cute n sooo lovely yaar awww zoya is so cute n she jump on asad🤣 n this not fair yaar tune precap nahi diya *pout* then continue soon😊

Gud job nikita!
Almost Neatly penned!
I hate razia! Ugh! So evil!
Though u it was interesting to read asya's pov 😆
nd zoya getting scared of pig! 🤣
nd saying she is jumpy...hehe funny
all in all it was a gud update
keep it up

Nice update
Razia played her evil trick & paralysed king. Asad noticed zoya antics & guess that she was princess. Zoya was happy & enjoyed natural beauty. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Nice update

I m loving it
Our innocent naive zoya her first interaction with nature
Asad is after zoya's crown nd diamonds but he did protect her
Perfect

awesome update once again! :)

good work Nikki,,
razia is an evil...waiting what will destiny stored for them

nice update
like it
thanks for pm