PAINFUL LOVE -- asya NEW ff :) *chap 2 * page - 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX
IS POSTED. !

prologue
zoya - i want him to suffer like my sister.. 😡...!!
haider - are u sure about..
zoya interuppted...
zoya - yeah..!
zoya called asad..
asad - hello.. aap kaun bol rhi hain??
zoya - tumhe tumhari sister se bahut pyaar hai naa??
asad - what are u saying?
zoya - agar tum apni sister ka mms leak nahi hone dena chahte.. toh do as I say..
mere office aao.. mein car bhej rhi hun.. agr nahi aaye toh...
asad - hello.. helloo... cut kardiya??


WHAT WILL ASAD DO NOW???
😡😭
WHAT IS SHE UP TO??


BUDDY ME FOR PMS.. :) .. :)


tell me if i should continue it or not


INDEX
CHARACTER SKETCH - PG 1
PROLOGUE - PAGE 1
chapter - 1 - page 2
chapter - 2 - page 3
PM'S LIST - PAGE 2 - DO CHECK IT OUT !! IF YOU WANT PM'S.. ! :)


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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think dis is d 1st time wen someone made a heroine in such a dark n menacing way. Lets see if everyone will like dis story like they like wen d hero is made worse than dis. Its not I am supporting wat Zoya is doing but will see wat she does further n wat Asad has done.
-Juhi

Wats ur name?😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I think dis is d 1st time wen someone made a heroine in such a dark n menacing way. Lets see if everyone will like dis story like they like wen d hero is made worse than dis. Its not I am supporting wat Zoya is doing but will see wat she does further n wat Asad has done.

-Juhi

Wats ur name?😊



hey! i'm priya 😆 u may call me shinchan
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Posted: 10 years ago
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character sketch
zoya farooqui - she was a bubbly,fun-loving gal.. but turned into a stonehearted.. dunno why?😕, business woman

haider khan - zoya's bestie..

asad ahmed khan - arrogant,business man, caring..

dilshad - asad n najma's mom

najma - hot.. , dating jatin but going to marry sameer

rest of the characters will be introduced later. 😃

Edited by asya_luver - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey! this is diff. n really interesting ..
u should definately continue... priya oops.. shinchan😆
do pm me..

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A request- Can u not make Najma slim cuz even a little plumpy girls can be hot? Also, Najma is not at all fat.

Dilshad- Asad n Najma's brother🤣


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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

A request- Can u not make Najma slim cuz even a little plumpy girls can be hot? Also, Najma is not at all fat.


Dilshad- Asad n Najma's brother🤣




🤣 hey! .. thanks for correcting me..
dilshad - asad n najma;s brother... 🤣
Edited by asya_luver - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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when are u going to update???
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chapter - 1
scene 1

girl - i want to know each and every thing about this man...
caller - aapka kaam ho jayega..!. don't worry..
girl - that's good
the girl was none other than ZOYA FAROOQUI

scene 2
najma - bhai jaan i'm going to my friend's home..
asad - okay, najma... but remember 8:00 pm se late mat hona..
najma - okay..

outside khan villa
najma - jatin ... mujhe permission mil gyi hai!!,,, let's go!..
jatin - let's go.!

in car
najma - jatin i think someone is following us.
jatin - nahi., toh,, chill..

in hotel
najma and jatin kissed... n they made out.
someone made their video!!
najma(drunk) - jatin wahan koi hai
jatin - chill darling.. wahan kuchh nahi.. hai.

scene changed
dilshad - asad, najma abhi tak nahi aayi! usse call karo.. zara
asad - ji ammi..
asad called najma but no response..
asad - ammi najma ne phone nahi uthaya...!
dilshad - mujhe najma ki bahut chinta ho rhi hai.. 9:00pm baj chuke hain..
asad - mein uske friends ko call karta hun..
asad to jiya - hello., wo najma tumhare saath hai??
jiya - she must be with jatin tonight!..
jiya(in mind) - shit! meine bata diya!!..
asad - jatin? wo kaun hai..
jiya - wo ... wo.. najma ki friend ka bf.. jatin...actually sia ka accident ho gya tha that's why she must be with jatin in hospital
asad - okay., tumhe idea hai wo kaunse hospital mein hogi?
jiya - i dunno..
asad - thank you.

call ended

asad - ammi.. wo.. uski friend ka accident ho gya,, toh wo uske bf ke saath hai..
dilshad - thik hai..
asad(in mind) - i think she was lieing..

scene changed
zoya to herself - disaster is coming mr. khan 😡 be ready!...

next day
zoya called asad.
zoya - agle 10 min.. mein tumhe zor ka jhatka lagne wala hai mr.khan..
asad - what?? who are u? aapko mera naam , number kaise mila??
zoya - i'm zoya farooqui..
asad - miss zoya??? india ki no.1 company ki owner?
zoya - yes ..
zoya - tumhe tumhari sister najma se bahut pyaar hai na?
asad - what re u saying?
zoya - tumhari sis. ki engagement bhi hone wali hai!... agar wo cancel
asad - enough!
zoya - tumhari sister ka mms banaya gya hai! wo bhi mumbai ke best hotel mein..isn't it gr8 n she laughed
asad shouted - WHAT?? HOW DARE YOU?
zoya - agar mms leak nahi hone dena chahte toh mere office aao.. n mein car bhej rhi hun nahi toh.. just do as I say..
asad - hello.. hello?? cut kar diya,,,
n
he had tears in his eyes..
asad to himself - how dare she?,,, i m not gonna leave her..!

in zoya's office
zoya was sipping her coffee..
n
asad entered with blood - shot red eyes...
zoya - tch.. tch.. tch.. what happened..
asad pinned her to the wall..
asad - tumne kyun bulaya mujhe yahan? n kyun kar rhi ho mere saath yeh sab?
zoya - leave me.. i said leave me..
asad - i won't leave u.. i want my answers first..

her body guards came..
n
freed zoya

zoya - meine kya kaha tha DO AS I SAY!!
n
she laughed..
zoya - tum aaj se mere P.A.
asad - what?
zoya to her bodyguards - u may leave now..
asad - in your dreams..!
zoya - oh please.. mein tumse puchh nahi rhi bata rhi hoon.. n tum mere ghar par rahoge n tumhari family ko tum bye bol do.. coz hum banglore jaa rhe hain.. mr.khan
asad - how can i leave my family alone??
zoya - u have to,, otherwise,, i'll leak that mms.. n u know what ur sister was hanging out with a guy!
asad - 😕

precap =zoya - let me show u your room..
asad - yeh room hai?? no lights, no ac,, just candles wth.. is this??
zoya - (in mind) - i'll make your life hell!




Edited by asya_luver - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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she's torchering asad!!!! 👍🏼
just luved it dear!...
update soon..!
really excited for next part!
as
zoya is going to torcher AAK..
but AAK is a lion,,
He isn't going to give up that easily!!

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