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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

I don't think dat anyone wud have made Zoya in dis way before ur story cuz its always Asad like dis or d hero in all d other serial stories while heroines r always made a victim. But u decided to show d other way round & I appreciate u for it👍🏼

For d 1st time I think it will be interesting to see Zoya taming n controlling Asad in d way Asad is shown doing in many stories for some stupid revenge😉

But I don't think dat Zoya is really cheap😊

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome Part Dear👏😊

I don't think dat anyone wud have made Zoya in dis way before ur story cuz its always Asad like dis or d hero in all d other serial stories while heroines r always made a victim. But u decided to show d other way round & I appreciate u for it👍🏼

For d 1st time I think it will be interesting to see Zoya taming n controlling Asad in d way Asad is shown doing in many stories for some stupid revenge😉

But I don't think dat Zoya is really cheap😊

thank u so much !!

and

yeah u re absolutely ri8..

zoya isn't cheap..

once she was really bubbly,chirpy girl..

she is good at heart..

😊

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Chahat Doshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Wow that was something else!

I think it is a case of mistaken identity

Someone has harmed Zoya's sister Humaira and it must be Ayaan but naam Asad ka aa raha hai

Update soon

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

thanks for appreciating this!

i'll update asap!

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

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Edited by asya_luver - 10 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

**** CHAPTER - 2 ****

recap - najma hanging out with a guy n lied to asad ..

zoya is making asad's life hell!

asad - she was hanging out with a guy?..

zoya - yup!

asad - look.. just tell me why are you doing this with me? i mean hum kabhi mile nahi.. n

zoya - calm down.. abhi toh picture baaki hai..! let's go home!

asad - 😡

he felt like killing her..!

driver - yeh bhi humare saath jaa rhe hain?

zoya - mind your own business..!

driver - sorry ma'm

zoya - fine..

zoya to asad - mr.khan ab mein aapko invitation dun car mein bethne ka?

asad - whatever,!😡😡

asad P.O.V

it's enough now! .. how dare she ?? she is torchering me.. and mein kuchh nahi bol sakta,, huh! i want to kill this girl ..

end of asad's P.O.V.

in car.

asad called najma - ohh.. so you were hanging out with jatin..

najma - bhai., nahi,. wo

asad (angry) - JUST SHUT UP!!! i'm in a big mess ..all credit goes to you!,,

najma - mess??

zoya warned her (in sign language) - no! don't tell her! or else..

asad - wo mess i mean tumhari engagement hai.. so..u lied to me najma!

najma - i'm sorry bhai..

asad - past mein kitne bfs reh chuke hai tumhare? kitne jhooth bole mujhse?

najma was speechless..!!

u know what najma changed her bf every month lol..

najma - wo..

call ended

zoya - don't you dare to tell anyone about this! did you get that?

asad - yaa.. yaa.. huh!😡

someone called zoya

caller - hey! zoe.. what's up?

zoya - hey! justin?? you ??

justin - zoe, u know i missed you!!

zoya - but i didn't..

justin - really? am i that bad?

zoya smiled

zoya - you are very bad justin!! i didn't expected this from you!..

justin scared - what?

zoya smiled..

zoya - i missed you too..! i was kidding.!

justin - well that wasn't funny ..!!!

zoya - toh india kab aa rhe ho?

justin - after 15 days!!

zoya - that's great!

and she smiled again!

asad's P,O,V

oh! so she can smile too.. i thought she doesn't smile!..

her smile is cute. but she's rude to me.., she is just torchering me.. yeh toh allah jaane kyun ??

end of asad's P.O.V.

justin -okay,, talk to u later, bye.! luv uh!..

(justin is her best friend not bf )

zoya - bye!! :)

asad - why the hell are you doing this to me?

zoya - again same question? i am fed up! keep your mouth shut!..

asad - and what about my company?? agar mein tumhara P.A, ban gya toh meri company ka kya??

zoya - talk to ayaan..!

asad - how do u know ayaan?

zoya - mr.khan mujhe sab pata hai aapke baare mein..

asad - he'll surely destroy my company!!

zoya - he won't..

asad - how do you know that?

zoya - give him a try!.. i'm sure he won't deny.

asad - fine..

after sometime..

asad was standing in front of "miss farooqui's mansion"

zoya (in mind) - welcome to hell!

asad(thought) - this is beautiful!

zoya - it's designed by me!.

asad - it's shittiest mansion ever..

zoya - and you are the worst human being i have ever met!

asad shouted - 😡 just tell me.. meine kiya kya hai??

precap - same (sorry)

Edited by asya_luver - 10 years ago

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Asad's torture started😲

Najma ki pyaari behen playgirl nikli🤢

I love dis strong Zoya unlike several other stories

Again, I will tell dat I will hate if Zoya really leaks Najma's video but I want to see wat all Zoya will make Asad do. No one ever made Zoya in dis way in any story.

U sud continue soon n update everyday since ur updates r so small😃

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Asad's torture started😲

Najma ki pyaari behen playgirl nikli🤢

I love dis strong Zoya unlike several other stories

Again, I will tell dat I will hate if Zoya really leaks Najma's video but I want to see wat all Zoya will make Asad do. No one ever made Zoya in dis way in any story.

U sud continue soon n update everyday since ur updates r so small😃