Minnie's Sahil OS corner - Page 2

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

please write more, loved it

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Uff Dhabevaali and her excuses 😆 Sure, Mr. Aahil will catch a cold but ur gonna catch a bigger bimari... Mohabbat aur Junoon ki Bimari 😆 I agree with Pragya 😉 U shud write a second night 😆 Now this is the Sanam inside of Jannat speaking! I used to love how boldly she would check out Aahil! And that towel! It better be the same red one 😉😆 We have imagined such scenarios many times at the Heaven but you penned it down perfectly! ⭐️ In fact, you even connected it with the present scenario! Excellent job! 😳 U should write such drabbles more often! I seriously imagined it all before my eyes, well how could I not when a certain Jallad Jinn is involved 😉 😆 Those swims must also make a comeback along with Junoon lol Hot and bothered Jannat is much much better than any other Jannat we have been subjected to 😆 It connects her to Sanam! The part about feeling it with her bare skin... Without much detail u made it sound so sexy ☺️ Loved it! Now if only Nawab Sahab was privy to her thoughts, he would need a cold shower as well 😆 But him looking at her in the end is so sexy and Junooni! You never know, it might just remind her of another time Girl, this was so amazing 👏

thanks for your comments.

Originally posted by: flora212

OMG This was So...Loved it Minnie⭐️👏

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

That was quick and fun read
Love seeing jannat/sanam all bothered
Oh I miss ahil's swimming days

Thanks

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Beautiful OS ❤️

This was so perfect and I so could imagine something like this to happen.. I mean, come on.. We need Jannat to stare at the Nawab and feel frustruated.. I'm sure Aahil can help her with her thoughts.. 😉 Now that, would be a sight to watch!

I love the way she couldn't control her heartbeat.. And the special mention of the satin sheets - Pure awesome.. Hayyeee.. She has felt it against her soft skin.. The sheet, I mean.. 😆

And his dark eyes, which held her gaze.. I don't know about others, but it sure made me skip a beat..

Beautiful work, dear. Thank you for the passion-filled OS. I enjoyed the read so much :)

This begins at the point of precap and is Aahil's drabble

She said she thought I was her husband. I wanted to scream' I AAM'

I was informed by Shad that he would like for Jannat to not be left alone. I took this opportunity to take her to our home tonight.

The tensed aftermath of our hug made for an awkward journey in the car. Tonight she stays at our house and tomorrow she needs to be taken to the doctor. I need to ensure her health improves, I reaffirmed this for the umpteenth time to myself.

She had stared wistfully at our house, running her finger delicately at the main gate carvings, the door knob. I prayed' Remember our house Sanam. Remember me! Already'. I took my fill of her. Her graceful walk...

And then I panicked. Nayi Sanam.! She must be lurking around. She won't sleep unless she knows I am back in the house .how do I take care of that? And then I pleasantly realized that all through that walk, Nayi Sanam was nowhere to be seen. Perhaps asleep. Will take care of her later. I focused my attention back to my Sanam.

Her curious expressions for those familiar surroundings, for me, clawing my heart. She looked at the dinner spread and exclaimed at apple pie Oh. I make an excellent apple pie. My husband loves it' My eyes gleam happily until she adds' wish he was here' I will not allow her to see my eyes just then...

This cannot go on. She cannot forget me. She cannot feel this distance from me...How can she?

I put all the familiar things in the bedroom I set up for her including a lot of my photos, the myriad family photos...All except her photos.

Aaahil, tomorrow this bed sheet needs to go or you sleep on your cuboid... yes the one that doubles up as night lamp... I can't get anything serious done between the 2 of us on this slippery sheet' she'd giggled in her naked glory as I nuzzled her belly.

Her part shy, part aroused throaty voice still clear in my head.

I slowly caressed the soft sheet. My sweetheart has to sleep on this tonight. Anything to help her remember me.

I tossed and turned for a few minutes on my cold bed alone...before deciding it's time to wake up someone. Will she wake up? Will she remember? Something? Anything?

I'd generally not bother with the dive, but the splashing must be loud to disturb the slumber. Have to do this for a few times before she wakes. If she doesn't I'll knock on her door and wake her. I want to talk to her.

But sure enough I heard the soft rustling above and turned to see her looking at me. I looked back and held her gaze. More like got hypnotized by those eyes that still hold me captive. I watched her watch me dry myself. I wanted to smile at her, invite her down for a chat if she can't sleep. But I was afraid to break the moment. She continued to look, and I dared myself to take my fill of her face, of the way her hair softly fell on her heaving bosom, and then back at her eyes. I know that hypnotic turn on gaze so well. A gaze that makes me want to...! Suddenly she was gone.

I waited for a few minutes more and sure enough she peeped out, looking oh so adorable with her curious barely concealed excited expressions, before hiding again.

Originally posted by: castlebones

Please don't stop here. You have to continue this.

Aahil + Sanam/Jannat = HOT

ummm... actually they are always hot... anyway keep writing.

Originally posted by: fanraya

how sweet.. loved it😳