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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sageflower7
Loved the second part Minnie...
short, to the point and so good to read...

😛 good you know you enjoyed

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil
Oh Minnie! Aahil's part! I would give anything to read his thoughts! I love reading and writing him. 😳😆 And seems like this is getting out the writer in you too, keep em comin'! 😛

Anyway, back to it. Amazing and fantastic and wonderful! Love your writing style! ⭐️

Aww, I wanted to hug him myself seeing him like that almost about to scream "I AAM!" 😭 Baby! That was so heartbreaking!

And the drive back and her looking at all the things, him mentally screaming for her to remember! Sigh!

Oh?! The satin sheets, have an interestingly HOT story! You could have elaborated on that some more you know?! 😛😆

I slowly caressed the soft sheet. My sweetheart has to sleep on this tonight. Anything to help her remember me.

This is my favorite line for so many reasons! Aww!! Lol he dived just to wake her up and talk to her! How cute he could get?! And the way you described how she was looking at him, so adorable!

How amazing this piece is! With all the right amounts of hotness, passion and adorable-ness.

Waiting for some more from you! So loved this! I hope you din't get bore reading this, coz I tend to get excited reading such things 😆

Pragya, I wrote a 3 shot earlier too. long back...Its locked now due to inactivity.😕

every sheet in a couple's bedroom, as hot as Sahil will have an interesting story. pity they did not get more than a couple of nights maybe

heart breaking.. yeah. his current plight and I don't want to go into how it is a little bit of his own doing on my own TS thread😆. Like CVs I kept someone's bashing out of Aahil's mind. It wasn't fitting anywhere much.

yeah in his current teen avatar, he thinks of this ,method to wake his woman. though he had plan B

too.

thanks for your words.

I am glad I could get you excited😉

I would never get bored by your awesome comments

Edited by minnie2308 - 10 years ago

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Mini2013

@Mini2013

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: minnie2308

😆

I am the one who fights and writes essays though. the other Mini is on this thread too🤣

oh and thanks for commenting

I am the other mini...I am not a writer😉...just comments and post😆

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simran_singh_24

@simran_singh_24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Mini2013

I am the other mini...I am not a writer😉...just comments and post😆

Sory guys and thanks for the pointers😆 I will read the fine print carefully.

TBH, couple of times i did wonder at the different style of writing 😆

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KhatamKahani

@KhatamKahani

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Minnie, I rarely read fics...I saw you, and I knew it was rare. Decided to see what made you write, and what you wrote.

This is so good. I am glad I read it.

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Mini2013

@Mini2013

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: simran_singh_24

Sory guys and thanks for the pointers😆 I will read the fine print carefully.
TBH, couple of times i did wonder at the different style of writing 😆

thanks you guys for remembering me as a sahil fan...

we both are IF dazzlers,hence the confusion

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sahil333

@sahil333

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: simran_singh_24

Sory guys and thanks for the pointers😆 I will read the fine print carefully.

TBH, couple of times i did wonder at the different style of writing 😆

Haha simran, well well, you're not the only one 😆. I've known minnie2308 first and I've commented on her first beautiful FF here on IF. Then long back, the other mini and I commented on a post and with each other and I thought this is weird. (my self thought...how can she not realised what it's about...don't ask me, I can't recall it anymore 😆 ). But then much later I realised that it was another mini. I felt so 😳 😆, but didn't say anything. Sorry girls 😆.

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: KhatamKahani
Minnie, I rarely read fics...I saw you, and I knew it was rare. Decided to see what made you write, and what you wrote.

This is so good. I am glad I read it.

That's true KK.. I was not expecting you here. But its nice to see that you read and liked it too😃

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

I cannot express how much I love the Second Part! You're too good, Minnie.. ❤️

I loved we got an insight into Aahil's thoughts. Se careful yet desperate toward his Begum. But as they say, love shall find their way back home, where it rightfully belongs.

Haayee.. I'm in love with your story and the way you write. Such a joy to read. 🤗

Awesome job! :) I really hope you come up with another story, wiuld def love to read. ❤️