asya TS: Night call of the dogs :) *completed* index @ post no. 1

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Concept is amazing! Yearning to navigate through that first chapter!

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Preetii0005

@Preetii0005

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

good start continue soon thanks4pm

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Nice start dear
Asya separated by tanveer
She killed dilshad & najma. Asad all alone drunk.
Zoya scene was funny. Asad & zoya met
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

hilarious...
will they patch up?
i hope so...
do cont soon

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Nice

So asya drunk now come face to face after separation due to tanveer

Asad was found in bed with her

Tanveer in jail for her deeds

And dilshad and Najma die how

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Hey Its nice concept Sue...

loved it

want to read more..

Thanks for pm 😊

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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

It's really a nice concept

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Suganti Kularaju

@suganti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

interesting start

zoya is so cute and funny when drunk

eagerly waiting for next chapter

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

a different way..!!

exciting... love it.. plz continue/...

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Aishwarya

@pumpkin.honey

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Very first thing I want to tell, I js love Zoya in dat white dress n also loved d pic of Zo in white suit n Asad in 3 piece..
Now, back to d story...
Dis drunk state of Zoya was really amusing.. bt OMG u gave shock after shock
Asya seperated coz of dat good fr nothing woman n his ammi tamatar died. I can't digest it still
Btw m loving u fr letting dem meet already.. And I always lovveee where d whole picturisation is js on Asya so bring d next part soon n a long 1 dis tym plz. :)
Loads of love :)