asya TS: Night call of the dogs :) *completed* index @ post no. 1

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey!! m surbhi😊
sue wali surbhi nahi...zoya farooqi wali surbhišŸ˜›
here introducing a new TS on asad and zoya😃 oh!!! meet asad below😊



hey! m karan😊
oh pls don't look at my oh-so-visible viensšŸ˜† so miz. chapar chapar ne aapko ye to bata diya hoga ki this is a new asya Ts. wat do you think about title? i know u all are curious. so c'mon surbhi...asad ke pass aao na

okay so without anymore ado!!! we let u all read another sue's story😊 hope you all enjoy!!!


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mwuaaah sam😳 lubbb ušŸ¤—
first shot


" raat akeli hai...bujh gaye...diye" she hiccuped in between singing the song.
" oh oh oh ooo...raat ki raani...hehe chori kiya re jiya...hum tum ek kamre me band...ho..." she carried on singing those odd songs at odd hrs of night. that was a really very dark alley and zoya was walking...aanha! not walking but dancing madly or wobbly on the street all alone.

"tell me tommy...tommy whr r u...oh! ur not tommy ur a mehow!!! its okay tu hi sunle meri dukh bhari kahani" she talked to the little cat sitting on one of the wall.
with a rum bottle in one hand she tried to threaten the li'll creature.
"m i drunk? no baby...ur mistaken..." she giggled not in her senses and threw the bottle at the cat.
the cat lurched away much to zoya's dismay and she pouted.
"u don't want to hear my misery it seems...kya karu" she started thinking dramatically tapping her index finger at her chin cutely.
the darkness complimented zoya's spotless white dress.


she was coming from her friends birthday party and got drunk real bad.she stretched her arms and cracked her neck.she bent down nd removed her heels to give some relief to her toes.
the next thing she saw made her heart pound.
"allah miya!!...help!!!!"

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he sighed sitting on a sofa sadly.he sat there for long covering his face with his hands.this was his routine everynight.he filled another glass of rum and cracking his neck made his way to the window.
the darkness prevailed outside and the clouds took over the sky dark and grey.asad looked up to the reddish color adorning to the sky proclaiming that it wud rain so harsh and tidious.
he took a sip and his eyes watered recalling his break up with zoya.that day in his life when he was blamed for ruining the life of two women.
his zoya left him that worst day when he was found naked with tannu...his nostrils flared at the mention of that scruel aldy's name..even in his thoughts.
"zoya chali gayi...najma chali gayi...ammi chali gayi..." he broke down recalling how his ammi and tamatar were deceased. that tanveer ruined his life and replaced his happiness with lonliness and sorrow. he want her to be dead not behind the bars now that she is. tanveer was proved to be the culprit and the jury took care of her.all remained was asad...alone.
he tried searching zoya but fate was fate and they never met!!!
he heard the dogs barking outside.for sometime he tried ignoring them but his patience has its limit and he got up to check outside.

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"allah miya !!! hattt!!" zoya was sitting on a wall of someone's garden with both legs on either side.she was continuously failing in shooing away those dangerous dogs.they were boring their gaze at her widened eyes and growling and barking.

"waah!! zoya! aaj to tu gayi! yaha ek...aye haatt!...ek ghar bhi nahi he aas pass" she self talked and tried to balance herself on the wall.
she was astounded when someone with his strong arms lifted her from the wall and gently placed her on the ground on the other side of the wall safe from the dogs now.

this touch was so familiar to her like she knew...the next moment she was left gaping at the man himself in front of her.

asad came outside and saw a girl sitting over his garden fence.hearing her voice and her famous dialouge he was left gaping first.it was his zoya .
she's back! he thanked his stars and sent a silent prayer to the god. he cudn't take the growlings and barkings of the dogs anymore and lifted zoya in his arms to place her on ground.
the growlings stopped and was replaced by the loud thunder in the sky.it was going to rain and the lights went out adding to the darkness.

two lone souls stood below the dripping sky getting all wet. their eyes brimmed in the parallel rhythm with the rain drops.
they were drunk enough bur still carried the dry throats.
it was like they were thirsty and hungry...



o okay do leave ur reviews now...pls hit like for us.
we KABHI assure you to bring another update snatching away from sue.
till then take care 😊
lots and lots of love
ā¤ļø asya

part 1 ~~~~~~~ abovešŸ˜›

part 2 ~~~~~~~ page16

part 3 ~~~~~~~ page 31
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Yayyy me 1st😃

Awesome Start SuešŸ‘šŸ˜Š

Zoya n Asad r both drunk😲

If its related to d show then has Zoya done plastic surgery on hand wid scar?šŸ˜•

Luks like Asad had married Tanveer out of guilt n Tanveer killed Dilshad n Najma wen they saw their real facešŸ˜•

So Zoya n Asad have met again😃

Why u killed Dilshad n Najma?😔 Asad cud have been punish for all his dumbness n mistakes in other ways na.
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey sue
Nice conceptšŸ‘
We love Asya alotšŸ˜‰
Thanks for pm
Edited by azsumay - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey sue that was awesome start yaar n love our kabhi also so excited to know what will happen plz continue soon n thanks for pm 😃
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg najma nd dilshad are dead...
nd asya separate...
felt bad for asad bt zoya's part was hilarious...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
HeyziesšŸ¤—
Loved it šŸ‘
You're an amazing writer dude
Lol both of them are drunk
But still recognised each other
Waiting for the next chappy
Update soonish dear



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
please continue soon
waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely start Sue or should I say KaBhi...lol
Cute with pain...
Update sooner ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting
But u killed nazma n dillu
Nooo
Plz don't say asad married tanveer
Plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Update was good
Update soon next part

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