SaHil FF: Eternally Yours, Epilogue, P42, Dec14.2016 - Page 14

Created

Last reply

Replies

299

Views

59.4k

Users

39

Likes

977

Frequent Posters

NanduVijay thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the update and it was worth waiting . Loved the entire update. Never expected that Aahil was in in jail for murdering his father. Is it true?
Hope Aahil comes out of his insecurities and confess about his past to Sanam. It is very painful to watch him hurt and also huting Sanam.
JShukla thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
such a treat to log on the forum and read the new updates on my fav stories..
So Sanam's sub-conscious mind realizes he is Aahil...
When did I miss the love confession. gotta read the previous part. is it there?
Sanam's glee mirrored mine at her getting stuck in rains with the hottie😉😆
not impeccably dressed...in jeans and t-shirt...'drool', t-shirt sticking to outline the abs.. ovaries bursting😃😆
AnnzSageflower7 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago

Loving the angst! ! She's reaching out to a hurting man and he pushes her away for her well being.

Love it!! Abbu Asad being the typical Dad huh.
darkice7_12 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
@muskaan17rocks - Thank you for the comment. Yep, we're at the angsty part of the story, and that might not end soon. I'm glad the emotions came through. Hope you keep on reading and commenting.

@onlyaahil
- thanks! Glad you liked it.

@LoveSonu2408 - Thanks for the compliments. Glad you liked it. I'm happy you're seeing their emotions in my words. As for what happens next . . . wait and see. 😛

@NanduVijay - Thanks for the comment! The truth of the past . . . will slowly come out. 😉 I will warn you though, the angst will continue, but there will be light moments, too.

@JShukla - Thanks! Glad you liked those little beats amongst the angst. The love confession is in chapter 07.

@sageflower7
- Thanks! Glad you liked the angst, since it'll be more in the forefront now. And isn't it true for all love stories? The concept of noble idiocy and overbearing parents. At least in all the Paki/Indian/Korean dramas that I watch. Our Aahil was always the sacrificing type. 😭
noesha thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
You made us wait so long. But it was soo worth the wait.
How beautiful was Ahils prayer. I absolutely loved it.

Update soon!
sahil333 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful and very touching chapter!

Love the SaSe convo...

So Sanam is even confused in her dream 😆

Oh boy, Sanam couldn't be more wrong to think that it would be an uphill battle for Seher. She will be in for a shock herself .

I love Aahil's dua, so sincere...

"Please make her my destiny. After You, I only want to be hers. Amin. . ."

Aahil was too violent and that was not good in front of Sanam. Love the time they spent together though. Sanam told him her past and it's so unfortunate that he had not. It would set him free from the darkness he's in and she would be very understanding I think.

And finally reaching her home and this just killed me...😭😭

"I'm not worthy of those tears," he said softly. "Never shed them for me."

"Khuda hafiz, meri jaan."

And hurts to think that he thinks that he was the reason and that he didn't deserve any better...gosh, the pain he must have felt.

Great update!


adventure_gurl thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome you updated on my birthday! awesome update, well done, hoping Aahil admits the truth sooner rather than later
tazzz thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
OMG THIS WAS AMAZING!!!! 😆 sanam accepting "rehan" and even going against asad!!! 😲 but im still confused about tanveer. so does that mean that aahil really killed his father? tanveer didn't kill him? so tanveer is dead? i think we'll be clear on this in a couple chapters! 😊 but i loved this update! it had so much in it! finding out about the nawab's death, sanam suspecting "rehaan" to be aahil, aahil saving her, sanam finding out about aahil's nightmares, and so much more! it was packed with excitement! 😆 ❤️


Ms.Sherlocked thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Can I just go in a corner and cry my heart out now?! Thank you! 😭😭
This was just too heavy on my heart I haven't watched the VM yet. I soon will, but considering the state I am in right now, I would just cry again.

This is so heartbreaking update! Aahil!!! The name has never sounded so painful like its right now! He feels he is not worthy of her, her tears. I couldn't control myself from crying when he said "Not even my name" 😭

I am an emotional mess right now. The prayers he offered with those heartfelt words, how he said "After him, I only want to be hers" ❤️😭

Both amidst the rain, her trying to reach out for her and he doesn;t want to be close to her. Her feeling "happy" about being stuck there and him being all sarcastic with her. 😆

Almost forgot that little dream she had in the beginning! Trust her to have such dreams about him 😉😆

That argument between them and how he is so vulnerable. Oh god! I wanna hug him, my baby Aahil! The way he walked backwards though..damn! 😭

Sorry for crying so much, but yes I am quite an emotional person and I usually cry very easily. The title itself and the last part on the poolside where he was searching for those stars..why you write so beautifully?! This was so so gorgeous! I can't tell I just can;t describe how this was..

AND, I can totally imagine how she must be feeling with a wet ARI standing close to him with his T clinging on to him, and that glee she had when there was no signal! Aww, she is so cute! 😆

You write so so wonderful! And man it was such a long update, wow! I was so engrossed in it, felt like I read a whole story! I had to read some parts over and over again, like how he is just so delighted and happy to have her in his life - His Sanam!

Thank you for this amazingly written chapter! Thank you so very much!
Edited by Junoon-e-SaHil - 10 years ago
Mahu34 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago

You've got to be kidding me!? Can I just express how my mind is blown right now. I have used THE EXACT LYRICS in my story... Gah! I think great minds think alike... 😉👏

The dream is so damn well written and I was actually convinced that she would wish to come true.

Prayer scene are always very close to my heart. Reading them console my heart, I don't know why.. But you did a great job by portraying the right atmosphere. The emotional battle Aahil is going through is really heartfelt. 😭


"The sun hadn't come out yet . . . wouldn't come out for awhile. All was dark, except for the small light that had been lit near his prayer mat. And in that near darkness, he sat, his hands raised in dua.
Just him and his Khuda."


Seriously amazing! 👏

His heartache. His compassion. His belief in God. His heart moving toward The Woman He Loves.

To tell you the truth I read this the minute you updated. But I needed some breathing space being unable to pin down anything.. I was filled with a empty feeling.. Wanting to literally grasp into Aahil and save his darkened soul... Crazy thought, I know. I just can't stop myself from getting attached to something which is so profound and beautiful.


"The need inside of him to attain her was so strong that it gnawed at him, making a beggar out of the man who was the Nawab of Bhopal. And he wasn't one bit sorry for it. She was a priceless treasure. Why wouldn't he give everything up to gain that treasure?"


God.. I wish I could reach out and hug you. 🤗 Seriously the prayer scene is one of the most beautiful I have ever come across. It's filled with so many emotions that I can actually relate myself to it somehow.

You're an amazing writer and every single time is so worth the long wait for an update. ❤️


"The need inside of him to attain her was so strong that it gnawed at him, making a beggar out of the man who was the Nawab of Bhopal. And he wasn't one bit sorry for it. She was a priceless treasure. Why wouldn't he give everything up to gain that treasure?"


So true! You scored right in the feels.

The update was really intense especially how The Khan Family found out about Nawab Murder.

Coming to the videos are so well made. I love how you put them up in your update. I love to stop and take a look at these. Because let's face it, - you're s master of making these. 👍🏼👏

Coming to Aahil's turmoil and how he lost control.. I loved how Sanam took it all and actually asked him what was going on.


"How dare you try to hit my Sanam?!" He pulled a hand back and began to punch him, his anger white hot. He knew nothing except for the fact that this man had thought to lay violent hands on her. The fire burned inside him . . . he didn't even notice when the man became limp in his hold. "


"He turned his eyes back to her, unable to be in the same room as her and not look at her. He gazed into her eyes, taking the time to soak up this moment. While it hurt to know that her passion . . . her love could never be his, he would have this picture of her in his mind and heart to cherish."


The change is evident. He is changing. This is what he wants but something is holding him from taking the step as well. - So well done.

How do you manage to come up with these heavy lines.. Seriously... You're a one of a kind. I was absolutely touched by Aahil's words.. It's true sint it.. No matter how much we really wish, some things are just not granted. You cannot save everyone and somewhere along a line is drawn between right and wrong.. - And you wish to do something.. Anything.. ❤️


"I wish that we could all live in a world where people didn't have to make these hard choices," he said from behind her, his voice as broken as crushed glass. "


I swear there's a whole bunch of my favorite moments in the chapter, but then I would be quoting the whole thing. How they were waiting for the rain to stop.. Sharing her past with him.. His sudden nightmare.. ❤️ Thank you, My Love.. For writing with such a depth and pouring your feelings down. I know it must have been hard to pin it down. Thank you for an amazing piece.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".