SaHil FF: Eternally Yours, Epilogue, P42, Dec14.2016 - Page 10

Yaaay, you updated! This was so needed after the "news" we've got today.

The start was so mysterious and well build up. I can understand the worry Aahil has for his family, especially for his sisters.

He tugged at his collar, feeling a tightness around his throat. That was weird, since the shirt's first three buttons had been left unbuttoned. It wasn't the shirt . . . it was the feelings that woman had aroused inside of him. She made him hope, and he didn't want to hope.

Love it! love it and love it! This was such a great chapter with so much happening. Feelings were slowly starting to get acknowledged..

It was really painful to read about Rehan's past. But at the same time it felt real and good to get an insight into his life. I miss him so much..

Again, I absolutely adore and cherish the bond the two have! It's so gentle and family-like.

And the scene where Aahil comes to donate to the shelter. It touched my heart so much! It was one of my fav scenes from the update. I have always pictured him to be soft and helpful toward others.

Sanam bribing Lateef to get his number was epic. 😆

And that conversation they had on the phone. *DEAD* Oh My God. It was so full of emotions and misery. I could feel Aahil's pain. And the fact that he thinks he's lonely. He don't have anyone... But slowly, he will come to realize that there are people who cares about him. You did a fantastic job at creating the atmosphere. Take a bow, Lovely!

Absolutely love the ending of Part One. So nice to see that Sanam wanting to help, as it's her nature. She cannot let go and see people in pain. So proud of her.

Part Two:

I actually needed to take a few hours off after reading the beautiful piece. Especially when the topic is so strong. I love the fact that you wrote a story on this. Kudos to you, Lovely! You're doing such a great job that you truly deserve all the attention and love. Keep it up. ❤️

How strong is Aahil's pain. I get tears in my eyes whenever I read about it. And he's slowly opening up in front of Sanam..

"Anything . . . I'd do anything to make sure that a child won't have to grow up like that," he said.

It really takes my breath away.

"How did you decide to work in such an ugly field when you appreciate beauty so much?" he asked in a driven tone, his fingers tightening around her shoulder. "How can your heart stand it?

"He opened my eyes to reality, and I swore that I would never close them again. I do this for that little boy that I couldn't help."

This is the most heart touching story that I have ever come across. Beautiful and so emotional.

She wrapped her arms around his waist, holding him close. Looking up at the stars once more, she murmured in appreciation. "My soul also needs beauty. And I look at these stars for that. There are so many stars in the sky tonight!"

"But now . . . now I'm seeing more stars in that sky. Who knows? Maybe one day I'll even see a falling star and all my wishes will come true."

My eyes are shining and I can't even think properly. I mean... I need to take a deep breath. I'm not sure if you'll understand what I mean, but wow... This is incredible and I really thank you for another heartfelt chapter. Update soon as we all cannot wait to read further. 👏