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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
well written update
well asya are new tom n jerry in the town!
tie lover 🤣

cont soon

hehe...yes they are😆
thanku so much dear for the appreciation😛
glad ur enjoying😊

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Well written. Story progression is good. if you do not mind my saying it The grammar need to be corrected as a wrongly phrased or in correct verb form is like a stone in a mouthful of delicious food.

I hope i did not hurt you by the comment.If so pl.excuse me.

Waiting for the next part.

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Naina Asghar

@NnonaA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Yay a fight, loved it...

Beautiful update.

Waiting...

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

OMG

They are so silly

🤣

Lol

Loved it

❤️

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Kitni ajeeb hai na zindgi..

Jin se hume dur karti hai unse milati hai..

Aur jab milati hai tab iss tarah milati hai ki hum unhe pehchan hi nahi pate..

Inn dono ko hi dekh lo.. 10 saal pehle se ek dusre se pyaar karte hai aur abh ek dusre ko pehchan bhi nahi pa rahe..

But agar love story itni simple hogi toh vo apne bachon ko kya sunayenge ? 😛

Abhi jaldi jaldi update do main wait kar rahi hun..

And don't worry Gita bhi jaldi theek ho jayegi kyunki usse aake hume cute cute se update bhi dene hai na 😳

Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago

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deactivated_bye

@deactivated_bye

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

hehe nyc updt!!!

wat a superb writing allha miya !!!

updt soon!!

n thanks 4 d pm sue!!

Aresha

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Nice update dear
Asya story without their bickering & fight, not look like their story. Wanted them to meet & get to know abt each other. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao
Well written. Story progression is good. if you do not mind my saying it The grammar need to be corrected as a wrongly phrased or in correct verb form is like a stone in a mouthful of delicious food.
I hope i did not hurt you by the comment.If so pl.excuse me.

Waiting for the next part.

thanks😃
and not at all dear...y my feelings wud be hurt when ur helping me improve😆
i appreciate that u opened up and trust me i felt this too while writing that maybe m going bad somewhere..😲
ohk u'll see the changes in next update for sure😊
stay tuned😊

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Awesome update yaar asad fithing for a silly reason lol n he is missing zoya so much awww n they are ending at same place 😉 they are so cute continue soon 😃

Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago