(#1)AsYa-FF:Ek pal Jo dil mein Utar jata hai - Page 71

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman


wah wah! Nonu tu sher likhti hai kya??

Nahi bus yoohin kabhi hum khayaloon mein doob jatai hai...
Inheen khayaloon se wapis aatay hain tu ek sher likh bethtay hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Mene sare 14 chapters ek saath padh liye...

And I must say it was fabulous...
Very very nice...ayaan ki childish maange...asad ka big brother behaviour...Inn dono k bich me fast bechari masoom zoya...now what's next...Please update soon...

Hi... Thank u so much...
I am glad that u liked it...
I will try to update soon...

Btw welcome to the story
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NnonaA


Nahi bus yoohin kabhi hum khayaloon mein doob jatai hai...
Inheen khayaloon se wapis aatay hain tu ek sher likh bethtay hai...


wow u r really an artist..
Mujhe to kuch ata hi nahi hai..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman


wow u r really an artist..
Mujhe to kuch ata hi nahi hai..

dost tu dil mein ghar kertay hain...
Aap kahain tu aap ko sikhanay ki fermaish kertay hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
niks yaar abhi kal hi tu update ki mein ne...😲
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NnonaA

dost tu dil mein ghar kertay hain...

Aap kahain tu aap ko sikhanay ki fermaish kertay hai...


really u will?? Par kaise??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman


really u will?? Par kaise??

Idiot this was my first time doing anything like this aur tu hai k impress hoi hi ja rahi... Thorda try ker khud hi ho gai ga
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NnonaA


Idiot this was my first time doing anything like this aur tu hai k impress hoi hi ja rahi... Thorda try ker khud hi ho gai ga


to kya hua first time tha but that was gud..mujhse nai ho payga ye sab
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman


to kya hua first time tha but that was gud..mujhse nai ho payga ye sab

yaar its simple...
Take a theme on which u want to make a sher... Think of a line and then use ur vocabulary to make it rhyme ... And its done.
For example.

Aap ko pasand aya ye humari kushnaseebi hai.
Warna kharab likhtay hum bhi kuch kum na thai.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NnonaA

niks yaar abhi kal hi tu update ki mein ne...😲

work on it fast

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