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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Wonderful dear
Hope CV showed something like that but they are stupid. Enjoyed every scene the way u wrote. Waiting for see how asad saved zoya from Tanveer attack & also mend her heart which he hurt. Thanks for pm

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

long and amazing update...love it all

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zynia890

@zynia890

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I like that how you follow various tracks from qh and give the version which should have been or rather say could have been if creative didn't lost their mind..it was a lovely story...asad trusted zoya...and accepted her...now what that tanu is planning to do.update soon...

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

Trailblazer

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Awesome Concept Dear👏😊

Ur n Asshi's stories r really different 4m others😃

Zoya did right by saying d marriage as deal. He sud feel d same pain as he always said d marriage as nakli starting 4m d time they came 4m airport😡.

Glad dat dis time Asad listened to Zoya instead of acting dumb. He was horrible wen he said to apologize to Tanveer n actually thought dat she cud change Tanveer's blood wid chicken's blood n showing fake burning skins to frame Tanveer.

Tanveer has fallen into d trap n now she is again planning to kill Zoya😡

Luks like now Asad will cry n run after Zoya but she will always tell d marriage as deal like Asad's nakli😆

U r writing aftermaths of 2nd failed nikaah, Asshi is writing 1st failed nikaah & I wrote 3rd failed nikaah in an OS where Zoya reacts strongly insulting Asad n Ayaan publicly n getn married to her college friend who truly loved her.

Gul is an idiot for showing Zoya as a fool who always forgave Asad till d end while he always tuk her for granted till d end

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ZoyaAsadKhan

@ZoyaAsadKhan

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

I really like your style of writing 😃 ... its very unique with simple language .I was really missing reading your stories 😭.If possible plzz update them also i would love reading them.
And this story is simply awesome :)😃
Loved the way zoya handled everything 😊,Finally asad and zoya only got married . Thanks for such a beautiful story 👍🏼 and this big hug is for u :) 🤗
plzz update soon :) 😊

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

very nice

wished this happened in the show

waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

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Niki2794

@Niki2794

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awesome Update Di😊

It was nice seeing Asad trust zoya for a change

Eagerly waiting for that b***h🤬 to get exposed

And kicked out of khan villa

Plss update ur old stories too eagerly waiting for them

Continue Soon

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

awsm.mindblowing.super duper hit.👏

how i wish gul used jst a bit of logic.thn this track must b shwn more beutiful.

continue soon.

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PrettYSmile

@PrettYSmile

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Hiii...superb plot u know...

I always wanted to see this in the show...

I mean the way asad called off the marriage even after zoya gave him a second chance was un ignorable...

U wrote it so nicely yaar...its awesome...