Thread II, Asya FF: the runaway bride, Epilogue,(LAST) 15-11-15

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kaju27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

update was awesome radha...
zoya's desperation to be a mother were portrayed well...
bt she was really being selfish in forcing asad everytime in office ...
asad frustration on this was sooo correct...bt he was little harsh too...
bt they made up at night and his punishment was good...
then their aniversary part was really sweet...
asad's efforts to cheer her up was really sweet..
zoya's nightmeres...they should talk abt it...
their convo when asad came back from doctor was the best part of update

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PrettYSmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

U extended this story!!!...

3more chapters!!!.. Like seriously... Wooowww!!!...

Hmm. .quite natural story...it happens between couple...

Hope its just the mental problem nothing else!!...

Update soon!!...

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aseela sha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Radha dear for extending this story

Update is so brilliant dear

You wrote their feelings do beautifully & it touch my heart so much

I love this Asya so much

Their love so pure so magical

pls update soon

thanks for pm

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

uh oh! sad...but i hope asya will overcome this tough phase through their love
cont soon

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aleena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Luvd d update...
Thnx 4 pm..
Cntinue soon

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Hi Rada

so finally u posted this😃

love u 4 that🤗

so Asya were happy 2gather until

Zoya desired 2 become mother😭 which became obsession at a time

& when she failed 2 conceive she became super sad🥺

I have read Tamara's story wid this concept that was squeal of her FF

but i m sure u will do different than that & it will have ur special charm added 2 that which i will b eagerly waiting😉

1 thing i will say RB became a brand & had its own unique story & charm so don't give a sad twist here cuz i know u have a thing 4 it when d story is near its climax😆 so i m telling in advance don't go there😈... WE have had ur dose of rona dhona in RB itself😆...but i know u will still add that🥱 due 2 d concept but still try 2 make it as little as possible & add as much happiness as possible in it😳

& i thought epilogue will b happy 1 like i m used 2 read in other stories😆

PS- btw Zoya going 2 Asad on d day which always falls when they were in office & demanding 2 make love was super hilarious🤣 if we keep emotions & her desperation aside😆

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: jas91
Hi Rada
so finally u posted this😃
love u 4 that🤗
so Asya were happy 2gather until
Zoya desired 2 become mother😭 which became obsession at a time
& when she failed 2 conceive she became super sad🥺
I have read Tamara's story wid this concept that was squeal of her FF
but i m sure u will do different than that & it will have ur special charm added 2 that which i will b eagerly waiting😉

1 thing i will say RB became a brand & had its own unique story & charm so don't give a sad twist here cuz i know u have a thing 4 it when d story is near its climax😆 so i m telling in advance don't go there😈... WE have had ur dose of rona dhona in RB itself😆...but i know u will still add that🥱 due 2 d concept but still try 2 make it as little as possible & add as much happiness as possible in it😳
& i thought epilogue will b happy 1 like i m used 2 read in other stories😆

PS- btw Zoya going 2 Asad on d day which always falls when they were in office & demanding 2 make love was super hilarious🤣 if we keep emotions & her desperation aside😆

Hey Jas91, how are you 😉?

Don't worry, it's not going to be like barren and it's not a sad twist. It will be a normal thing between couple who tried to fix their problem, I wanted to show that love alone is not enough and communication between couple was important. As PrettySmile suggest, it's going to be more mental blockage, and I gave the hint with the dream.

I know I agree with you, the runaway bride was sad that why I came with the gift from life, more funny than the previous, I didn't want to kill my readers's eyes from tears 😆 (even I can be sadistic most of the time). The next chapter will be intense BUT I promise after that all will be good between them 😳.

PS: I know when I wrote this part, I was a bit embarassed because I didn't want to shock the readers, but this is how it goes in real life, I mean, I've never barged in my husband's cabin asking him to...You know and I can't because I don't have husband 😆 but anyway it can happen

Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: PrettYSmile
U extended this story!!!...

3more chapters!!!.. Like seriously... Wooowww!!!...

Hmm. .quite natural story...it happens between couple...

Hope its just the mental problem nothing else!!...

Update soon!!...

you are too good, you find the thing, yes it's going to be mental than anything else. And I wanted to show that communication between couple is the keys to solve all the problem.

You are too good girl 👏

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Well as usual it started of with a dreamy sight...and still with its Up's and Down's...they are going strong...
But I am waiting for Rada's Hammer' of reality in Fictionality...
Continue soonish..

You know eme so well Mayur 😉

it's going to be up and down even for the next chapter but soon everything will be fix between them.

Wait and see 😃

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: kaju27
update was awesome radha...
zoya's desperation to be a mother were portrayed well...
bt she was really being selfish in forcing asad everytime in office ...
asad frustration on this was sooo correct...bt he was little harsh too...
bt they made up at night and his punishment was good...
then their aniversary part was really sweet...
asad's efforts to cheer her up was really sweet..
zoya's nightmeres...they should talk abt it...
their convo when asad came back from doctor was the best part of update

Thank you so much Dear 😃

I know some will be on Zoya's side and other on Asad's side, both were correct in their decision and she is selfish I agree.

The nightmare was the keys for everything and soon they will talk about.