New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

wow hats off to u Radha for this exceptionally brilliant update

U described every emotion so nicely that i fell in to its depth

I t touch my heart in many ways.

Some times i thought i was living a life like Zoya

Pls update soon

I cant wait to read more

Thanks for pm

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

res unres

so many things happened in d part

main toh confuse hi ho gayi😆

Asya's past was revealed

so Asad was orphan

& Zoya was unloved she thought

she was rapped once😲 I wanted 2 kill that man😡

Guffi scolded her only 4 that I don't get it if he really loved her than why he never showed specially after this big tragedy wid his daughter in his own home he didn't supported her but scolded her

Asad even after being alone was very optimistic in life

Dreams of his future that he told Zoe was that his or he said them 4 Zoya ??

Both seems in deep love in teenage, both still miss each other but r staying away

But Zoe abhi tak Asad ko pehchani kyun nahi ?? Neaither Asad told truth

mixing of present & pst scenes was amazing

All d updt was brilliantly penned 👏

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: jas91

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unres

Another Amazing part Rada😊

I m confused in d beginning it felt like Zoya recognised him but no she remembers Leo but not Asad is it possible ofcourse he has changed a lot but they were close frds & according 2 me were lovers they saw each other so closely how can she not recognise him when Asad did after 13 yrs😕

so Asad loved her but don't know why broke her heart 1 day saying 2 go away from his life

Zoya also loved him but his this act shattered her

me not likey Zoya dating other man (what 2 do hopless Asya I m😳😆)

d flashback scene was cute their frndship was very sweet d way Zoya convinced Asad 2 run wid her

I liked her monologue when Asya become frnds & she was thinking why she chose 2 b his frnd

SO I guess Zoya's bitter past was she didn't got love from her parents

after waking up Asya's 1st meetig after 13 yrs was nice😊

he recognized her but she didn't although she's constantly remembering Leo seeing Asad

Asad gave her hint in d end but she didn't remembered still

but nice job Rada sepecially Zoya convincing him 2 stay in hospital now he will never argue 2 go from there😆

so my guess was right😆

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Hey Rada..
Thanx for the PM..
Update was very bery Good..., Engaging..and Brilliant.
So we got an insight into AsYa's childhood past...That what were the reason...why they were how they were in their childhood..
Zoya's incident was horrifying...but she was just saved in time...
Asad's past was scared...as he said...and the irony is Zoya have moved on...living a respectable life...as a Doc...and she also has got to know the past reasons behind her parents deeds...
But Asad...he is still scared , bruised from the past events...and now with this current revelation of Zoya not wanting to meet Leo...it is still disheartning...to listen...but I guess this Leo / Asad will give it a fight for sure..
Very Interesting part Rada..
Continue soonish.

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Nice
The past was horrible
Zoya felt she is unloved
Glad she was saved from that man
Still didn't knew the reason behind asad's words which lead to separation
Both are in pain
Glad that zoya reconcile with her parents
N also glad that there is no one in her life
So they can start a fresh
Still asad didn't told he is Leo
He is disheartened that zoya said she don't wanna meet Leo
I think now asad won't back off but will definetly win his love of his life
But eagerly waiting to knew how
I mean will he reveal he is Leo or he will woo her as ask
P.s...plz don't let any third person BTW asya..they already have gone through a lot
No need for some third person BTW them...n also I am hopeless asya fan can't see them with someone else...plzzz
Plz update soon

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miss.namrata96

@miss.namrata96

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Thanks for the update

Read both chapters in a go.

Liked asad's dominance and zoya's past.

Please update soon

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: -ABI-

Thank you ABI 😃

but it's not the winter yet here 😆, I love them

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: SONU2408
Nice chapter.asad knw her nw fully,bt zoya...she didnt even knw tht asad is leo.whn she will knw?zoya's past clear bt asad...
Let c wht hapn nxt.cntinue soon

Zoya will not know soon, actually, she will have a doubt many times, until she will know the truth and she will feel betray. But wait and see, first , I will make Asad and Zoya closer and closer.