New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

This is way too emotional...

Every paragraph in it is filled with different shades of emotions and bitter- sweet truths of life...
Like the way their emotions are portrayed.. And the timing of two different parts is impeccable...
I felt really emotional reading it because of its meaningful, true sentences...
They say a story can tell you the type of person its writer is... Just wanna say that I am impressed... And want to appreciate your approach here...
Awesome story...update soon...


Thank you so much dear for your words,
I wanted to show how life can change you, that the pain was not always bad, it's just quicker to change you than happiness or tenderness.
Thank you that you appreciate this chapter and you understand what she meant about growing up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: kobeb

Amazing pls call continue pls! :)


I will soon , I will and the up-coming chapter will bring them closer 😉 as Asad and Zoya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: cutie15

Ohh god this was just so full of emotions
very well written.
loved it..! :)
Awesome update...
this was just so intense...
update soon..:)


Thank you so much, I wanted to show how we can bloom even when it's hard and how sometimes, growing up asked us to be in pain.

I am happy that you like it, I didn't want to sound to much or to unreal, but anyway many like it so I am happy with it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: kaju27

it is too emotional radha...
they are different persnalities nowww
i hope zoya recognizes him soon nd they can start a fresh


Thank you 😃
I wanted to show how ages can changes us and how life will always remain the best school for our education. And as you said, they took different road and they are totally different.
She will have doubt but will be in fog for some chapter before.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Oh! Mind-blowing nd emotional update rada!
I like it every scene i love it!
Ur very gud writer
continue nd m waiting here nd hoping that zo nd leo get togather


thank you so much 😃
i am happy that you like it and understand thier feeling, this chapter was about their evolution in life, how they started and how they became after the seperation.
Thank you so much 😳
The up coming chapter will bring them closer 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: aseelashah

wow hats off to u Radha for this exceptionally brilliant update

U described every emotion so nicely that i fell in to its depth

I t touch my heart in many ways.

Some times i thought i was living a life like Zoya

Pls update soon

I cant wait to read more

Thanks for pm


Thank you so much dear, I am really blessed that you feel it like this
Her words will speak to some but maybe not all, we are not taking the same way in life to change. And I see that mine and yours are the same, I am too living a life like Zoya.
Thnak you so much again and in sha Allah I will update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: jas91

res unres

so many things happened in d part
main toh confuse hi ho gayi😆
Asya's past was revealed
so Asad was orphan
& Zoya was unloved she thought
she was rapped once😲 I wanted 2 kill that man😡
Guffi scolded her only 4 that I don't get it if he really loved her than why he never showed specially after this big tragedy wid his daughter in his own home he didn't supported her but scolded her
Asad even after being alone was very optimistic in life
Dreams of his future that he told Zoe was that his or he said them 4 Zoya ??
Both seems in deep love in teenage, both still miss each other but r staying away
But Zoe abhi tak Asad ko pehchani kyun nahi ?? Neaither Asad told truth
mixing of present & pst scenes was amazing
All d updt was brilliantly penned 👏


Jas dear
I love to put a lot in my chapter you know that 😆 , I am talkative girl
I know their past was horrific, it was painful for me to write the part where Zoya was closed to be rape, I was almost cringing with each word, that why I write in few sentence.
Guffi scolded her in front of everyone, because, everyone was watching and he didn't want to make any drama, in front of them. And when they became alone in her room, he was frustrated because, he had to smile in front this dirty man, he was just frustrated. ANd you can see that he cared, when Razia told him that Zoya was telling the truth and he said : I know and he will fix it.
He was just clueless about how to do and he was not confort in consoling her in his arms.

It was Leo's dream, but as Asad wanted to find Zoya in smoking, she wanted to find Leo in his dream, that why she did this, realizing after, that it became her own destiny to do it. Like him, she was still attach to him but she changed and let those memories away. But when Asad entered in her life, all those memories came back to haunt her.
I've learn you rpast will come back the day you will be able to face it. Zoya entered in his life after so long to save him from his misery and he was supposed to redem himself for what he say.

But this you will not know so soon 😉

She will have doubt more and more about him but let's see how Asad will manage this
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Rada..
Thanx for the PM..
Update was very bery Good..., Engaging..and Brilliant.
So we got an insight into AsYa's childhood past...That what were the reason...why they were how they were in their childhood..
Zoya's incident was horrifying...but she was just saved in time...
Asad's past was scared...as he said...and the irony is Zoya have moved on...living a respectable life...as a Doc...and she also has got to know the past reasons behind her parents deeds...
But Asad...he is still scared , bruised from the past events...and now with this current revelation of Zoya not wanting to meet Leo...it is still disheartning...to listen...but I guess this Leo / Asad will give it a fight for sure..
Very Interesting part Rada..
Continue soonish.


Thank you so much Mayur,
Yes, I wanted to clarify slowly their past and future and how life changed them both. Life can be impredictable, Asad was bitter but Zoya became more in peace with her past, but she didn't finish to check all her past as Asad/Leo entered again. It was the last door that she left. Even if she said, that she don't want to meet him, she can't stop heself from thinking about his happiness and safety. I've leant that the past will only come back the day you are stront enought to face it, and this day come for her and him.

The upcoming chapter will be about them and the sentence in bold resume this idea, for Asad now fighting to gain her heart.

I will continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: sasir

Nice
The past was horrible
Zoya felt she is unloved
Glad she was saved from that man
Still didn't knew the reason behind asad's words which lead to separation
Both are in pain
Glad that zoya reconcile with her parents
N also glad that there is no one in her life
So they can start a fresh
Still asad didn't told he is Leo
He is disheartened that zoya said she don't wanna meet Leo
I think now asad won't back off but will definetly win his love of his life
But eagerly waiting to knew how
I mean will he reveal he is Leo or he will woo her as ask
P.s...plz don't let any third person BTW asya..they already have gone through a lot
No need for some third person BTW them...n also I am hopeless asya fan can't see them with someone else...plzzz
Plz update soon


Thnakyou so much

I know past was horrible and I was in pain writting this part, but it was just to show how life can change you to become positive or negative.
I wanted Zoya to be happy after her teenager time and we misundertood sometimes our parent and this is what I wanted to show. Sometimes, we are wrong in our conclusion
She said that she don't want to see him but can't stop herself from wondering how he is now, she was just afraid to face him after so long, she was too scared fro the moment.
@bold : the up-coming chapter will be about Asad trying to win her heart, exactly, you prediction was good .
Zoya will have some doubt about him but the truth will be revealed later about him.
PS : I will use some jealousy track and it will just be some cameo character, don't worry,

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Posted: 10 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: miss.namrata96

Thanks for the update

Read both chapters in a go.
Liked asad's dominance and zoya's past.
Please update soon


thank you so much dear 😃
I know I like to give to my character a bitter past, I am well know now to be sadistic a bit in my story 😆
I will in sha Allah

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