New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15 - Page 40

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman

Gr8 job, even i got scared of asad..he realy need to control his anger and moved on from past..
Continue soon

so true and this is what i want to show about Asad, thank you so much for your comment 😃

Originally posted by: Tunailuvsahil

Plz cont runaway bride

i will dear, soon , promise 😃

Originally posted by: azsumay

So emotional update

Zed and leo fighting with akram

I hate akram in this situation

He beat Leo and get chance on zoya what a shame

Asad proved zoya he is not weak like Leo

He is strong enough to make thinks perfect but he lost love, emotions and friendship with Leo

Zoya want asad with full of pakage love emotions and care.

She thinks because of her asads past stood infront him

He can't move without her

He want to make perfect his life with her

In past and present they stood up for each other

I hope next chapter zoya except asad and express her love

Well written

Thanks for pm

thank you so much dear
akram was a disgusting character and I agree, it's really ironic that he was not like the meaning of his name, "generous' 😆, he is but in mad way.
@bold: this is absolutely Asad's state, he lost all of them and those things which was him years ago. but Life change him. it happen even with us, when we get hurt one time and the second we promise ourself to be strong, so we loose a part of us in some way.
Zoya just loves him a lot and as she reconcile with her past, she wanted him to forgive himself and to accept this hurt Leo inside of him, to look at him differently and not like the others used to look at him.
in the next chapter, it will all about Zed/Zoya emotion and confession, but you will see how it goes.
thank you so much for your comment dear

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Hi jas

I know this chapter was horrible and with all your comments guys, I realized maybe I went a bit far, however this scene was planned in my mind since the beginning.

Akram's character was really bad and he was just a looser spoild child. I know she was also closed to be raped again (God knows how I hate writing this) but it was in Akram's character so I didn't expect other thing than this. Anyway, I will never write about and in my story I only flirted with it. I don't like scene where women were abused.

You can pity both of them, I guess, they are right and wrong in the same time. They were young and in my opinion , even when we were adult it doesn't mean that we are going to manage everything perfectly. When you love someone or when emotions are involved, it's hard to think clear and to decipher the right decision from the wrong decision, it's our sensitivity I guess and how we manage to control or to deal with it.

I know what I am talking about I am impulsive girl and sometimes, I can hurt the other because I am suffering. It' doesn't make me bad but just stupid.

In the upcoming chapter, you will understand why she was pushing him from her and it will be an emotional scene where Zed/Zoya will open her heart while he was sleeping ( I know sadistic 😈).

PS: you perfectly understand Akram's mind and this is exactly what he decided to do. 👏

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Coucou

Je savais que tu allais adorer toi au moins 😃, bon je sais je suis peut etre aller un peu loin mais bon ce chapitre est important pour de futur confession de l'un et de l'autre 😉.
Sache qu'en tout cas ton cours de psycho m'a servie. Moi, j'avais ecrit qu'elle le repousse parce que sinon l'histoire serait deja fini 😆 et parce qu'il le faut vu son etat mais ce que tu as dit m'a aid pour trouver mes mots pour mon prochain chapitre 👏 bravo tu peux faire psy. Je suis d'accord avec toi, notre salut ne reside pas dans l'autre mais en nous, et zoya a compris qu'elle devait le pousser se retrouver avant de venir a elle. Et c'est ce qu'on appelle l'amour , c'est de penser au bonheur de l'autre avant le sien. C'est beau ce que je dis 😆 (tellement bateau oui)
les deux ne sont pas en tort a dire vrai et tu sauras aussi pourquoi elle ne s'est pas battu pour lui (il y a une raison valable).
Le truc que Akram a trouve et un pendentif de son bracelet qui est tombe, donc je te laisse imaginer ce qu'il va faire avec 😉.

Le jeune se passe bien, je vis seul et heureusement, que le soleil se couche tard, ca me laisse le temps de prparer a manger 😃. Ce weekend j'ai une tres bonne copine qui se marie donc pas de update avant la semaine prochaine, desolee.
PS: ne fait pas comme Asad ne me harcele pas 😆

Salut Rada

Je ne trouve pas que tu as ete trop loin, c'etait necessaire pour montrer le conflit interieur de Asad. Moi j'aurais du faire psy et toi philosophe Rada 😆... Je suis vraiment contente de t'inspirer ne serait-ce qu'un tout petit peu 😳. Ok j'ai saisi ce que Akram va faire avec ce pendentif et pourquoi Leo va le croire 😉

Alhamdulillah pour ton jeune mais ca doit-etre chaud de ftar toute seule non ? Ecoute je vais te laisser un repit pour cette fin de semaine et pour profiter du mariage de ton amie ensuite je commencerais a te harceler debut semaine prochaine ok ? ca te va commme plan ? 😆

enjoy your friend's wedding, happy writing and saha ftourek !

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Rada

How r u dear🤗

I am fine, but a bit busy 😆

well i know & agree wid everything u said both were young that time & didn't knew how 2 handle d situation impulsive much if i may say. Asad believed Akram & Zoe left widout putting up a fight cuz she was deeply hurt ( this Qstn is still there how can Asad trust that Akram after this horrifying incident but i guess u'll reveal that in future when Asad's POV will b given of d past).

yes, I will reveal and I should be convincing 😕

& yes changing a story if its already planned is definitely really tough cuz it can affect d future plot so just go as u planned👍🏼 i m happy u saved Zoe again😛 & yes i agree i can pity both of them almost same.

Well don't worry i m exactly d same when i m hurt i tend 2 hurt d person around me 2 & trust me i feel horrible after sometime when i realize. but what can i do this is me😒can't change that, its a package deal u have 2 accept that along wid other stupid qualities of mine so Take it or leave it.😉😆

I take it 😃

I guess agla updt bhi emotional hone wala hai sigh.

A bit emotional for sure, you know my favorite package : emotion-sadism 😆

I should pat my self😳😎 but waise bhi mostly mere guesses correct hi hote hain😆

You should and this is true, you are right most of the time

well again meri blabber kuch jyada hi lambi ho gayi talkative me u see😳😆😆

not more than me, but you will laugh at me because in my life, I am not talkative that much, only here in IF 😆

Good to read you Jas 🤗

Originally posted by: ikhlass

Salut Rada

Je ne trouve pas que tu as ete trop loin, c'etait necessaire pour montrer le conflit interieur de Asad. Moi j'aurais du faire psy et toi philosophe Rada 😆... Je suis vraiment contente de t'inspirer ne serait-ce qu'un tout petit peu 😳. Ok j'ai saisi ce que Akram va faire avec ce pendentif et pourquoi Leo va le croire 😉

Alhamdulillah pour ton jeune mais ca doit-etre chaud de ftar toute seule non ? Ecoute je vais te laisser un repit pour cette fin de semaine et pour profiter du mariage de ton amie ensuite je commencerais a te harceler debut semaine prochaine ok ? ca te va commme plan ? 😆

enjoy your friend's wedding, happy writing and saha ftourek !

Salut Ikhlass

Philosophe? Na, j'aurais voulu tre psy mais j'ai fini dans la recherche scientifique, le truc a l'oppose 😆. Mais bon, je realise mon reve en ecrivant sur des personnages conflictuels.
Pour Akram effectivement, c'est prvisible qu'il allait se venger mais j'ai interet a etre convaincante, si je veux que mes lecteurs y croient un peu. mais t'inquites, deja avec ce pendentif et un autre petit truc, ca va faire boom.
Ouh la la, tu me donnes juste deux jours? j'ai interet a bosser moi 😕😆 je t'avoue j'ai runaway a ecrire et j'ai rien ecrit. Mais promis, je ferai un package bientot pour les 2.
Pour ramadan, ca va seule pour le moment et je ne suis pas oblige de faire un gros festin 😃 meme si je mange bien en ce moment.

thanks a lot an saha ftourek 😃

forgive me if m so late😳
i just don't have enough words in my dictionary to appreciate this👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

taali bajate bajate ankho me ansu aa gaye😆😆😆😆😆😆

u have no idea how much
i love it😳
keep writing like this😃

It was a wonderful update
Both suffered bc of akram. Connecting of both scenes were nice. Asad is in danger again but he knew Zoya is with him now. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Salut Rada !

Tu pensais que j'avais oublie, hein ? Bah non 😆 Alors tu t'es bien amusee au mariage de ton amie ? Oui ? Ben maintenant tu te mets au travail et plus vite que ca !!!!! 😈😆

Saha ftourek !