New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15 - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update dear
It was fun how they enjoyed her birthday at her home. They did all the crazy stuff & that was the best day of their life. The same magic after 13 yrs, this time they dance again with love only. They kissed each other & asad finally confessed his real identity to zoya. She slapped him. Curious to know the reason of their separation. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Best update !

Loved every word of it yar

Wow

Just loved their kiss

Waiting for next one eagerly

Please please please update soon !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb chapters rada
Leo and Zed's scenes were cutee
They kissed 😳
So finally he told her
zoya slapped asad 😲
Can't wait to read more
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm part
lvd it
zoya(zed)birthday celebration..their dance beautiful written
now zoya knw the truth..nd she slapped asad
update nxt part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
very emotional and captivating update
i never expected the truth to be out so soon...they r going to be separated...isn't it??
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
aarrgh!ths is not fair...why u did ths...u jst cnt stop thr bt u did..
pls now updt next part jaldi jaldi...
awsm updt...both past nd present really well written..
asya kiss was lk cherry on the cake...
bt u stop thr...hhmmph!
now next part updt soon,thnks 4 pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update, loved zoya and asad dance and they kiss!! Yass! :) update very soon plss
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Radudada ! (puisque tu m'appelle Brenda, dorenavant je vais t'appeler radudada, je trouve que c'est mignon ! 😆)

Bon treve de plaisanterie ! Avant tout je tiens a te remercier d'avoir tenu parole et donc d'avoir mis la suite comme tu l'avais dis durant le week-end, thank you a lot !

Alors alors, que dire de ce chapitre ? Qu'il etait simplement extraordinaire, y a pas a dire tu sais nous faire vibrer ! Drole et emouvant... Leo qui fait passer un anniversaire inoubliable a Z, j'ai rit quand il s'est deguise en portant le hijab, le kitkat trop mignon (donc tu aime bien le kitkat et le chocolat et moi aussi 😆) et j'ai eu les larmes aux yeux quand le papa de Zoya lui a souhaite son anniversaire en l'embrassant sur le front, c'est tellement tendre comme geste. J'ai adore le parallelle que tu as dresse durant la danse quand ils etaient ados et a l'age adulte, leur maladresse et leur insouciance ado et l'intensite du moment adulte... Donc ils s'aiment depuis leur adolescence mais il ne le realise qu'a l'age adulte... Et Zoya qui semblait s'etre reconcilie avec le passe et voila que le passe lui ressurgit en pleine face litteralement... Asad qui n'y tient plus et lui avoue sa veritable identite d'une facon hmmm disons maladroite sur le coup de l'emotion "ca fait 13 ans que j'attends ce moment" et boom une claque pour lui dire combien il lui a manque mdr 😆... Je crois que je suis la seule de tes lecteurs qui me delecte de ca 😛... J'aime bien Adam je le trouve mignon mais je crois qu'il se fait des films sur les sentiments de Zoya envers lui enfin je l'ai ressenti comme ca. Et tu nous a revele un petit bout de ce qui s'est passe entre Z et Leo et donc ce n'etait pas la faute de Z ce qui s'est passe dans la chambre des parents de Leo mais il ne l'a pas cru, manque de confiance donc... Est-ce que c'est Akram qui aurait fait ca par hasard pour se venger ?

Ah oui avant que j'oublie, je suis contente qu'il sorte de l'hopital sinon j'allais suffoquer 🤢 lol

J'espere que tu vas mieux au fait ! Et compte sur moi pour te harceler si tu nous fais trop attendre 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey lovely update dear
loved zed's bday with leo...they were best memories...
his gift was so thoughtful nd cake too..
and in present they kissed bt she now know who is he nd slapped him...
i want to know what had happened in past ...disclose in next part...
leo get up to fool gaffur was hilarious...
nd update runaway bride too
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow mind blowing brilliant update dear
Thanks u so much for this fabulous update

It was fill with so much emotions

I cry with them,laugh with them,fell in love with them

Very few writers had the power to make the readers live with their characters in the story

And u are deffenitely one of them

Wishing to see u as a great writer in future dear

May Allah bless u with all happiness & success in this life & life after death

Love u dear

Pls update soon dear

From next week Ramadan starts.And i cant come to IF during Ramadan.

Pls try to update before Ramadan

Love u so much

Take care

Thanks for pm

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