New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15 - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi Rada

How r u dear?

updt was Superb😃

it started wid pervert Doc Albert

i wanted 2 slap him so tight but what Asad did was hilarious🤣

he gave him taste of his own medicine i m happy

Asya's 1 on 1 convo was very refreshing

& i liked d flashback

Zoya felt d urge 2 Kiss him😲😲

after that Zoe again decided 2 avoid being wid him just like start of d updt

2nd flashback was nice

Asad's fvrt room give a pleasant & serene feeling as Asad said😛

Zoya was touched by Asad reply 2 her qstn that why he brought her there

i feel after knowing so much about him & his feelings d kind of person he was how can some1 doubt on that person i mean when MU occurs why don't ppl try 2 think how d person was wid them all d time in d past they just believe in that MU & forget d best moments of there time 2gather. That's why i feel bad ki even if Asad asked Zoe 2 go away why she left widout giving thought 2 this.😕

there were many small small dialogues which were lovely

Asad many a times blurted out past but manged in hiding it & Zoya also felt Asad Leo being same

3rd FB when Asya were talking about there future was wonderful

D piano scene was beautifully written 👏

OMG here comes d jello track in d end😲😲

PS- i want 2 ask is d bed in Asad's room so big that both ASya were easily sleeping there😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome,emotional nd well written..lv it..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Such a beautiful update

loved it to the core
please continue soon
will be waiting impatiently...😊


thank you dear 😛, I will try to update by the end of this week in sha Allah
I hope I will get time 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: miss.namrata96

Thanks for the pm...

Thanks for updating...
Beautifully written update...
Loved AsYa scenes... ❤️
Loved the flashback scenes... 👍🏼
Please update soon... 😊


Thanks you so much dear,
I was really axious about this update but thank to Allah, everyone appreciate it
I lost the inspiration and it came only two days before the update 😆
I will try to update soon in sha Allah, I love writting this story and I have to make justice like my previous story
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gouri_Joshi

Wonderful dear

Loved the update
Hope asad soon tells zoya that he is her Leo
Update soon
And thanks for the pm


Thnak you so much 😃
Well soon Zoya will know about him but when and how? I cook something a bit sadistic 😈
I try soon in sha Allah
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

awesome blossom amazing

superb...loved all the four parts👏
thumbs up


hey dear, how are you? Good to see you back 😃
Thanks dear and I am touched that you like this new story
thank you for your lovely comment 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Ahh u finally updates this... 😉
this was such an awesome update..
loved it soo much..
all their moments were so cute..!!
Very well written. ..update soon plz..;)


Yeah finally, after so long 😳, I lost the inspiration, each time, I opened the story, my mind became blank 😕
Anyway, I am happy that many like it after such a long break, but I hope to update regulary now, I love this story and I have to make justice like my other stories.
Thnak you so much and I 'll try to update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kaju27

amazing update radha...
asad's gay part was hilarious... 😆
then fb about akram... 😆
i wonder what had happened in past that changed zoya so much nd why do asad feel guilty nd scared of her rejection..
piano playing part was so touching...


thank you so much
I know I imagine KSG doing this, it was really funny 😆
I don't like Akram and I think he deserved it, but his story with Asya was not over yet
In the up coming chapter, you will know what happen, I don't want to reveal now, if I want to mingled past and present, without jumping from the futur past to past futur 🤪
I know it complicated, I can't reveal it now, because, before their fight, many thing happened before. After this argument between Leo and Zed, they were seperated.
Thnak you, M really glad that you like it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kobeb

Awesome update!! :) oh asad acting gay so funnyy lool!!


thank you so much , I know, I wanted to play with Asad's character, I wanted to show how he can be crazy in love and devoted for his lady 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Now the story is unfoldiny...
Why asad just does not tell zoya that he us leo...
Its confusing now...


I know it's confusing but in the upcoming chapter, you will understand what happened, but in this chapter I gave a hint but no one saw it.
Anyway, slowly, you will understand why, wait 😉

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