New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a beautiful update
loved it to the core
please continue soon
will be waiting impatiently...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi buddy
Good to see you online
Res
Unrest soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice
Loved it
Hope zoya recognize him soon
I always wonder when asad can remember even the minute details of their past then y can't she
It lokks like she forgot everything abt them as if its a distant memory
But didn't she say she done everything he want to do so she can meet him by chance
If she don't even remember anything how come she is going to recognize him

One doubt... I am really confused of this heart monitor ...
is asads heart was attached by some machine which connects outer side too
I think u understood it
Is he going to carry that machine every where he goes...Sry I am asking this bcoz maybe I missed something...
Hope u clear my confusion

Who is this Adam...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
zoya's growing atttraction towards asad
asad enact like a gay 🤣
flashbacks r superb as well
lst jeaoulse part strt 😉

yup evn m cnfuse if zoya rember leo thn why she cn't recgonize asad whn
he told her about their fb story
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Nice
Loved it
Hope zoya recognize him soon
I always wonder when asad can remember even the minute details of their past then y can't she
It lokks like she forgot everything abt them as if its a distant memory
But didn't she say she done everything he want to do so she can meet him by chance
If she don't even remember anything how come she is going to recognize him

One doubt... I am really confused of this heart monitor ...
is asads heart was attached by some machine which connects outer side too
I think u understood it
Is he going to carry that machine every where he goes...Sry I am asking this bcoz maybe I missed something...
Hope u clear my confusion

Who is this Adam...


Actually, she blocked her mind to look back at those memories, as she said, it was a painful past. And sometimes, we trust more our eyes than our heart was telling us. She is confusing about him for sure, but he changed so much and she can't link both of them, because physically they are totally opposite. It happened to me in the past in my real life, when I change so much that my friend didn't recognize me. I just exagerat a bit here.
Asad was also only remembering few things but not everything, I know that mixing past and future can be confusing but my story is not working like a flashback, so when I narrated the past, none of them remembered this. It just how living the same episode can give a different ending.

You don't like Barney 😆? Anyway, for the monitor, I agree, but because I am not a doctor, I just imagine this part and I don't know for how long you can keep it. I just imagine that like any heart surgery, your heart was constantly under observation to avoid any blood clot or complication. But again, it 's part of my imagination.

Adam was one of her collegues, a cameo character 😉
Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
AAHHH
What a way to ruin the moment
They were about the confess
Dammit
Ugh
And Asad is all mad and stuff
Oh My God
Haha
🤣
I simply LOVED IT
Asad enacting as a Gay person
I love Gay people
Tons of Gay friends
YAAAS
I SOOO want them to confess to each other and then just kiss

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: siyasharma94

Beautiful update
zoya's growing atttraction towards asad
asad enact like a gay 🤣
flashbacks r superb as well
lst jeaoulse part strt 😉

yup evn m cnfuse if zoya rember leo thn why she cn't recgonize asad whn
he told her about their fb story


Actually, he didn't narrate this story, she did it. He just talked about the plan and she narrated to him, just noticed when this part finish, she was the first to talk to him, telling how Akram was looking with his lost hair.
I know it was confusing this part, but she talked about and not him.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

AAHHH

What a way to ruin the moment
They were about the confess
Dammit
Ugh
And Asad is all mad and stuff
Oh My God
Haha
🤣
I simply LOVED IT
Asad enacting as a Gay person
I love Gay people
Tons of Gay friends
YAAAS
I SOOO want them to confess to each other and then just kiss

thank you dear 😃
in the next chapter, the distance will decreased dangerously between their lips 😉


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida



Actually, she blocked her mind to look back at those memories, as she said, it was a painful past. And sometimes, we trust more our eyes than our heart was telling us. She is confusing about him for sure, but he changed so much and she can't link both of them, because physically they are totally opposite. It happened to me in the past in my real life, when I change so much that my friend didn't recognize me. I just exagerat a bit here.
Asad was also only remembering few things but not everything, I know that mixing past and future can be confusing but my story is not working like a flashback, so when I narrated the past, none of them remembered this. It just how living the same episode can give a different ending.

You don't like Barney😆?Anyway,for the monitor, I agree, but because I am not a doctor, I just imagine this part and I don't know for how long you can keep it. I just imagine that like any heart surgery, your heart was constantly under observation to avoid any blood clot or complication. But again, it 's part of my imagination.

Adam was one of her collegues, a cameo character😉



Thanx for clearing confusion
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm...
Thanks for updating...
Beautifully written update...
Loved AsYa scenes... ❤️
Loved the flashback scenes... 👍🏼
Please update soon... 😊

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