New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Its brilliant ,mindblowing beautiful,touching update dear

I have no words to desrcribe what i feel when i read this

It touched my heart so close.

I dont know what to say.I cant express it.

Thank u so much for this amazing work

THanks for the pm

Pls update soon



Hi, Aseelah, thank you , thank you so much for your sweet comment 😳
and I have no words too to describe how your words were touching me so much.
I am really glad that you like this story and that you became close to the characters. It means you feel their hearts.
Thank you for following my story and to be one of the loyal readers here 😭
I will try to update soon in sha Allah
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: azsumay

Hey just loved

it how beautifully written their emotion
Asad rescue from sinere doctor
Asad parents room withwarm and love
In present zoya also have feeling for him
piano tune ohh fabulouse
Zita feel Leo love in this tune
Update soon
hope reveal asad is zoyas leo in next update
thanks for pm


Thank you so much dear 😳 and I don't know what to say, glad that you appreciate emotions in this chapter.
Zoya started to fall in love with Asad slowly for sure and she was confused also about him.
This tune is really beautiful and when I heard it, I knew that I have to use it for this story.
In the up coming chapter, Zoya will know but when and how? You will have to wait 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shailu123

That was just awesome yaar so Beautifully written n so emotional one love it continue soon 😊


Thank you so much and I am glad and blessed that you understand their feeling and emotions 😳
this is all why I am writting stories, just for emotions.
thank you dear for your lovely comment
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida



thank you Mayur

well I forgot to put the link for the music that I choose for this part. I imagine this partition for them. I hope you will like it😃


Which Partition are you talking about.?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Rada

How r u dear?

Hi Jas, I am fine thank you and how about you? Hope you and your family are well 😃

updt was Superb😃

thank you so much 😳

it started wid pervert Doc Albert

I know it's my sadistic part here, I am a perverse myself 😆 but ...

i wanted 2 slap him so tight but what Asad did was hilarious🤣

he gave him taste of his own medicine i m happy

only perverse against a perverse 😆 and I wanted to show Asad a bit crazy and funny , like the Asad from the gift from life (he was able to do the same for sure)


Asya's 1 on 1 convo was very refreshing

& i liked d flashback

Zoya felt d urge 2 Kiss him😲😲

after that Zoe again decided 2 avoid being wid him just like start of d updt

sometimes, it's not rational and it's only chemical between person, you don't know why you need to do soemthing that was against your own principle, anyway, I wanted to show how much she was confused with her feelings.

2nd flashback was nice

Asad's fvrt room give a pleasant & serene feeling as Asad said😛

Zoya was touched by Asad reply 2 her qstn that why he brought her there

I wanted to show the strong bond between them and I gave here a hint , but sssh I won't say more

i feel after knowing so much about him & his feelings d kind of person he was how can some1 doubt on that person i mean when MU occurs why don't ppl try 2 think how d person was wid them all d time in d past they just believe in that MU & forget d best moments of there time 2gather. That's why i feel bad ki even if Asad asked Zoe 2 go away why she left widout giving thought 2 this.😕

Because we are humans and we always focus on pain than happy moment. One day, I read something about a guy, who said a joke, so everyone laughed, he said again the same joke, half of the person laughed, and he did it again and again, until everyone stopped to react at the same joke. So the guy say, If you are not able to laugh hundred time for the same joke then, why you keep crying a hundred time for the same pain. So for sure, it's unfair but you will have to know why and maybe you would have react like her. Trust is precious thing between two person and when it lost, it's hard to get back.

there were many small small dialogues which were lovely

thank you so much to mention them, I like putting small advice or lesson from life , something I feel like a guru 😆 with all my rubbish lesson of life


Asad many a times blurted out past but manged in hiding it & Zoya also felt Asad Leo being same

he was still insecure about her, that why he didn't get the courage to tell her 😕, he doesn't want to loose her again


3rd FB when Asya were talking about there future was wonderful

They are totally opposite in the future and I wanted to show that sometimes we can wish something and finally , we do something else, Life is not strange, life is just suprising 😉

D piano scene was beautifully written 👏

Thank you, I wanted to be poetic like the tune that I choose for this part, glad that you like it 😃

OMG here comes d jello track in d end😲😲

Just a cameo, don't worry,

PS- i want 2 ask is d bed in Asad's room so big that both ASya were easily sleeping there😆

He had an XXL bed size, so don't worry, they can invite others 😆. No seriously, I was like Oh Man, Jas saw this ( you are too good) I only noticed when you mention it and I was like, Oh yes, she was right 😆. But Jas, I wanted them to be really close and if I didn't imagine this, the scene when she wanted to kiss him, will be remove from the story 😆.And you know,, as my grand-ma like to say, the big place is in the heart. So I let both of their heart together 😳


I reply to all your point sweetheart 🤗
Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


Which Partition are you talking about.?


Una mattina, I forgot to put when I updated and I only added the link when you posted your comment, You were faster than my poor brain 😆
Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida



Una mattina, I forgot to put when I updated and I only added the link when you posted your comment, You were faster than my poor brain😆


Well I wasn't faster...I was about to sleep at that..time...but then you update...and I can't go to sleep without reading this part..so read that...and in a hurry burry commented also..it was the shortest version...which I actually thought I should have posted...anyways..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Akram fiasco was funny. Liked the way she took revenge from him. Asad saved her from flirting doctor. He acted well as a gay. Zoya felt that he knew him but didn't recognised. Last piano scene was wonderful. She was crying as he said once. Angry asad now. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my god...
This chapter was full of entertainment...

Their past moments are hilarious...akram scene was one of the best scenes...asad acting handsome and zoya treating him as a girl...beautiful. Asad's house visit by zoya was lovely scene...

Asad acting like gay... Wowww...!! Loved it...
It was really good scene. Their little talk after that was adorably cute...
Whole piano scene was so intense. Like the way zoya tries to read his eyes...so, asad is jealous of this new Adam...interesting that zoya saw that too..

Whole chapter was intense, lovely and deeply romantic...love it...congratulations dear for writing such a beautiful story...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ressy
Remind me to unress plz
😊
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago

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