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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayeshalove

Lovly update. Continue soon


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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Concept Dear👏😊

In which period dis story is of- medieval or modern 21st century?
I hate GaZia😡
Humeira is sweet😃
Wats ur name?
Send me a Buddy Request😃


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Call it the medieval 21st century 😃😆

My name is Ira 😳😛

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Originally posted by: Sanjhari

Very nice
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Hey its so interesting n zoya is a princess wow plz continue soon n pm me 😊
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Originally posted by: shailu123

Hey its so interesting n zoya is a princess wow plz continue soon n pm me 😊


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~Erroneous~
By: -pyaar-
Flashback (Continuation)

No POV

"I HAVE BEEN CALLING YOU! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?" King Ghafoor shouted at Zoya.

"I told you. This girl is nothing but useless. Just look at the way she dresses She resembles more of a poor peasant rather than a princess." Queen Razia replied disappointedly.

"At least the beauty of the average peasant outweighs your beauty. Comparing you to the ugliest of trolls is considered an insult to trolls." Zoya retaliated

"I WILL NOT TOLERATE THIS KIND OF DISRESPECT!" Queen Razia shouted.

"Eddie... What should we do about her?" Queen Razia exclaimed a little too sweetly. "She's getting worse day by day. I think it's time to marry her off to the Prince Akram. He's a charming young man and he's almost as wealthy as we are." She gloated.

Princess Humeira walked into the room shell-shocked at what she heard.

"My foot am i going to allow you to marry Zoya off to some man-wh**e." Humeira cried out in anger.

"Oh my Lord! What happened to you dear? Why are you using such lowly terms? I think this cheap excuse of a princess is rubbing--" Queen Razia exclaimed with fake concern for her daughter

"He's a douchebag s**t who sleeps with every other maiden he finds. How could you even think of doing something as cruel as that?" Humeira cut her off. She was both hurt and shocked at how low her mother stooped. Humeira knew her mother acknowledged the fact how bad Prince Akram was, she was upset the fact her mother even considered marrying Zoya off
"Humeira..." Zoya exclaimed. "It's okay. It's not like I would've married him anyway. It is a completely coward thing to do." She continued disgustedly. She wasn't even shocked at how low-life her parents were.

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And it ends here. I hope you guyz like it!

Comment and like! Love you <3




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Nice update but its a short one yaar raziya is so evil 😡 plz continue soon n give us a big one 😳
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