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Posted: 10 years ago
This is definitely not fair @mahwash22 firstly you give such a short update and then stop writing at such a crucial point. This is definitely not fair. I have actually got this "compliment" from many that i lack patience😉
But happy that everything was real and not sanam's imagination
And the teaser at the end is really very interesting
Please continue soon
And also please keep providing us with such awesome updates😊😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Totally loved it. But u left us again with a suspense. Not at all fair.
Waiting for the next update. update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update!

Oh Aahil...let me give you a hug 🤗 How did Aahil get caught...did I missed it?
Zain is a big coward. Afraid to be alone with him and fight him alone...such a coward... ugh! 😡

"Your dear father knew the power you were given from the minute you got reborn. Such a sad thing that you're after all not capable of all the things you used to say. Such a pity."

So Aahil is reborn with so much power that he has to control it? No wonder that that asshole is jealous and afraid of him. Reborn...hmmm...I'm curious now of his past life. What had Aahil said back then?

Aahil's eyes began to glow.. But he had to control himself. Only because of trying to keep his promise to Hamza.

"Just because you have the highest rank does not necessarily mean that that the anger you have buried deep inside of you wouldn't destroy you. Because it will. You need to hold into the anger and restore it."

Love the above! Does Zain really think that he captured Aahil and he can't fight back? Aahil is right, with the deadly power he has he can even free himself, but opted not to use it. It would mean the death of Zain right there.

Hours later a body was dumped into a dark alley outside the city. He groaned and struggled to stay awake. His whole body was aching in pain.

Jaan.. Wake up.. Are you okay?'

🤔 Wait!...what is this!!! Real life Aahil had an accident and he is dreaming all this while that he's a vampire? He asked Sanam once about him as a vampire didn't he? 😆 Am I making sense and am I out of line?😆😕

Awesome chapter!

Thanks for the pm buddy 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh yay! Okay, not yay since he got beaten up so badly, but he's alive! He's alive! Or okay, the immortal undead. Gotta love a villain who'd rather gloat than do the smart thing of killing his nemesis. Like that's not going to come back and bite him in the behind. 😆

Can't wait to see how all of this happened. Update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing! i read the last 2 chapters but i still don't get if Aahil is actually a vampire. I guess we'll find out! Anyways, I'm so happy that Aahil is still alive!
Looking forward to the SaHil scenes! 😉❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chapter.
U again gave such a cliffy end.
U have left me excited n confused.
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update..
So many question arised again bt i think for the answer we have to wait for next updates..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Zain is sooo jealous of Aahil's position in their Clan... But that's what ARI is all about, isn't it? 😉

And finally Sanam has found him!!! Those words of encouragement... Jaan, you okay? I'm here for you. We fall down only to rise again. ❤️

And the last line... The tragic hero had fallen only to rise again.. 👏

I'm really speechless!! He IS our tragic hero indeed!!!! 😭

AAAND the update was shorter than usual... More of SaHil wanted 😆

Please update v.soon 😊

Edited by innocentangel4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
@ sahil 333 brings up a good point. does that mean aahil dreamed of being a vampire this entire time? i am so excited for the next chapter! plz update fast! i stopped watching QH but for some reason this reminds me of QH4 with the vampires and everything. but this version is still much better than the actual QH. 😆 i really want to read the next chapter!!! ❤️
update whenever you can!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you so much for the feedback. I appreciate all the likes and comments. 🤗 First thing, first..

1) Aahil suppressed his anger due to his promise he agreed with Hamza. I will get back to that in later chapters..

2) Aahil was kind of hallucinating in the alley as he was not getting a hold of his mind. That's why he heard Sanam's voice and only saw her silhouette in the dark. You might say that you draw strength from your loved ones and that's what he did..

3) Is Aahil a human or a vampire? You will get your answer in the next update..


LoveSonu2408:
I know, I'm very bad.. I love leaving things in a cliffhanger for my readers.. 😆 But seriously, thank you for reading and the fact that you allow to get your mind into these heavy riddles I have written. Well, you could say Aahil was there with Sanam in a way.. I will sort out all the confusions, no worries. Just keep reading, lovely.


Noasha & Nilusoni:
Thank you so much for reading, guys. I'm glad the update was enjoyed. Keep staying tuned. 😛


Muskaan17rocks:
I know.. All I'm doing is, building up the next phase for the story. And I always need to have a few cliffhangers here and there.. Aww thanks love, - your last comment really brought a smile from me. I will try my best to keep updating.. Hugs to you. 🤗


NanduVijay:
Thank you so much! Totally made my day with your lovely feedback. I will try my best to update as soon as I can. 😛


Sahil333:
Yay! I'm glad you thought it was awesome. Reading your well-analyzed feedback is seriously THE BEST thing ever! Don't we all want to give our dark yet handsome man called Aahil a hug. We will see what's going to happen between Zain and him. Aahil has so much power because he was The Chosen One (I cannot reveal too much, but I promise things will make sense). 😉

Yes, about the alley confusion. I've written it above, maybe it'll start to make sense now.. Also the next update will clear things..


Darkice7_12:
Haha, I could so imagine you jump up and down when you realized he was alive. Of course he is. ARI isn't going to give up that easily. So true - high five, girl!!! I really wanted to portray how Zain was.. I mean, I bet Aahil was bored listening to his blabla.. 😆 Thanks for the lovely comment. Keep em' coming..


Tazzz:
Thank you. So glad you loved it. Even I stopped watching QH and when I saw it was based on SP, I was like I better guard my story, man.. 😆. Kidding.. I hope the above comment regarding Aahil made sense and if not, keep hanging for the next update. I promise I'll post it soon. 😳


Adventure_gurl, Kabhibloom & Kanwal4Salman:
Thank you, lovelies for the wonderful feedback. I promise things will start to get clear. Just hang in there. 😉


Innocentangel4u:
You got that right! ARI is the BOSS! 😎 - The scene at the alley; I hope the above comment regarding Aahil made sense.. Also, I simply looove cliffhangers. Ups, I will try not to do it again. Haha.. I can tell you this much, that the next update is going to leave you in some heavy daze..


Phew
.. It sure took time to replay, but I just want you all to know that your comments and likes are being appreciated very much. You guys trigger my mind of the things I might not have thought about. Love you guys and keep reading the story. ❤️

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