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Posted: 10 years ago
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So beautifully written love the way how sanam feelings for ahil n ahil tack care of her so lovely ending 😊
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Right in the feels Mahu...

Beautiful beautiful story.

I love your sentimental style. Love it love it love it.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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As usual awsm,fabulous,fantastic,jhakkas,gorgeour...:-*lv it.if cv's hv ths brains.bt dnt worry.u stry mk me happy.u r a awsm writer.pl keep writing on sahil.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Mahwish it was beaurtiful ... So so amazing...
I had not read the frst part yet... I resd it but then i dint remember the name 😛 i m glad that i git the chance to read both parts together .. Its so beautiful...
U can feel the same ambience of their love story... So so beautifully written...

I loved the fact that how their old memories were kinda releived... I always love revisiting the old memories... How awesomely u intermingled them with the present...i absolutely loved it... The frst staring by the poolside .. That emran hashmi dialogue... That kitchen it reminded me of the day she had burnt the oven n Aahil applied cream on Her hand... N then the healous incident... That poodiney ki chtney incident ... I had Aahil's face in my head the way he reacted when he saw chutney on his omelette n said "just for my general knowledge lateef who puts pudiney ki chytney on an omelette 😆😆
And then my most favorite part about that night ... That life changing night... U wrote beautifully about that night 😳


I was many a times having my heartbeats racing...

N finally the end .. Miss dhabewali back to her jallad jinn...
How i always wanted it to be like it... They both revisiting their memories n finally Sanam falling again fr jallad jinn ...
They were Gold... N still are... My beautiful SaHil...

Thanky fr again taking me to the beautiful SaHil world .. U r such an amazing writer... Blessed one... Please do come up with other stories as well
Edited by micshy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
😳 It was lovely ! I really love the way Aahil ws so patient with his begum and the effort they both made in order to reconnect and rebuilt their relationship 😉. Thank you so much !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
This story was sooo sweet
Started off a little bitter cus of shaad
But then when Sanam asked Ahil out uff! Beautiful! And he's such a flirt mentioning his looks and body every time he gets a chance uff too cute
Absolutely loved how you progressed them scene by scene getting closer and closer.

My favorite Ahil scene: Ahil leaning on the shower realizing what just happened
Favorite Sanam scene: her jealousy with girls staring at Ahil and putting the napkin and he drives with it. Hehe

Thanks!! Your writing it's sooo beautiful and unique and perfect. Even if they're not together in the show I can see them together through your stories...thanks for that!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful Mahu...
Just read chapter 1...

I teared up when Aahil saw her at the gathering. He was happy to see her, but at the same time it had pained him so much 😭

I just wanna punch that shaad so bad 😡. He's so arrogant I must say. To hell with him.

Oh..the dhaba burning scene...would love that so much. I haven't went through the comments yet and I haven't read part 2 yet. So I'm excited to read it later.

I have to go now🤪..
Sorry I'm on my phone and I can't delete that silly thing 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Yes! You certainly made us smile and love you so much for this quick update! 🤗 ❤️

Right back at ya, girl! You wonderful, beautiful Esha - always so full of love ! ❤️👍🏼👏

Sanam blinked a few times trying not to stare too much at the gorgeous man or what he wore in front of her. Aahil was only clad in khaki colored cargo shorts with a white slightly drenched undershirt which clung to his already perfect physique.

Can I trade placed with Sanam! ☺️ Omg is he washing his car! Paani Paani lmao Where is Pragya, she has to read n imagine this! 🤣

Don't we all want to trade places with Sanam? I couldn't stop laughing when I was writing this part. You and Prags were all I was thinking about..

"Not now of course, I meant someday when you have time. Obviously you're busy with something, like cleaning your overly expensive car which does not need cleaning at all."

Uff Sanam back in Dhabevaali mode, saying it as it is! 😉😆 I used to loved her attitude then! I swear she kept on breaking ARI's ego (n heart) into pieces each time 😆

Indeed our Miss Dhabevaali is back.. She had to give back to her Jallad Jinn. Gosh, I loved those days.

You have the only right' Aahil thought silently. 🥺 Just so perfect

"Were you always like this?" Sanam asked tilting her head slightly, allowing herself to relax a bit in his presence.

He took a sip from his Latte. "What handsome?"

Flirty ARI! 😉 Its so nice to see the teasing between Nawab Saab n his Begum Jaan! We got some during Faiz n Haya ke bacche... But wish we had more! This was so perfect

Thank you. I wanted them to relax in each other's presence.. Let them talk about anything.. Let them flirt.. This is what I imagine them to be with their playful banter yet being passionate and loving too.

Sanam looked into his eyes. "And there's someone who loves me dearly."

"Yeah," he quietly said holding her gaze. "More than you'll ever realize."

❤️ The most beautiful part of this update! I imagined KV saying it with that expression and that voice!

She almost felt proud to be his. You write such perfect lines!

God! You're making me blush one more time! I know I'm gonna smile like an idiot for weeks now.. Haha, all because of your awesome feedback. 🤗


One day at a time' Aahil thought as he watched her by the corner of his eye with a small smile

This man is gonna kill me with his Junoon! The tender love, the patience, the purity of his love! Too gorgeous! This is what we fans demanded to see! ⭐️

Aahil laid down beside her and wrapped his strong arms around her delicate body. Just like that he held her throughout the night.
Protecting her. Mending her brokenness. In silence. Just the two of them.

Just perfect! There is only one place they both are safe... In each other's arms!!!

You got that right! They only feel safe in each other's arms. Feel secure with their love.

Aahil smirked as he followed her with his eyes. "No, it's called being jealous, Jaan. Good to know you're still in there."

Jealous Jaan... Yes, Sanam is jealous, possessive and protective! ☺️ Jallad Jin belongs only to her! This was hot and sweet at the same time! You have described both of their feelings and reactions perfectly! 👏

I had such an awesome time writing this scene I wanted her to relive the moments she have had.. Kind of a way to tell that she hasn't really changed.. Our Sanam is still inside somewhere and she only belongs to her Aahil. Only him..


"You done checking me out, Mrs. Ibrahim?" His deep yet husky voice brought her out from her thoughts.

Nope! I don't know about Sanam, but I am certainly not done ☺️ Can never get enuf of this Nawab! Aww I love you u brought it all back to the first Junoon moment! So much has changed yet things are still the same! She is still attracted to him and he is equally attracted to her! But this time, there is the purity of love accompanying that Junoon! Beautiful! Now back to checking him out ☺️😆

Hahaha! Stare all you want, darling! You have the right.. Actually I wanted her to be confused and then suddenly have a dejavu kind of feeling when she was behind the pillar. Come on, how can ANYONE not stop and stare.. ☺️


"I.. I don't want to scare you off, so I'm going to take things slow, okay?" Aahil spoke softly which made her heart filled with admiration and love.

Ugh how perfect can this man be! He is so imperfect yet perfect! How can one stop herself from admiring and loving him! I always loved the vulnerability, steadiness and respect Aahil showed with Sanam! He wanted to things to progress with her comfort! That made me respect him so much! *Sigh* Aahil ❤️

We all fell in love with Aahil and his loving nature. His Junoon and Deewangi is what made us reach out for this man. Haayee.. Will forever love Aahil and SaHil..


The last part was hot! Jallad Jin and Dhabevaali!!! ☺️ I love the little surprise she gave him and the hug! Girl this was so perfect! You conveyed the voice of all the SaHilian! Cant thank you enuf! 🤗I will certainly reread it many times! The ending left me with a huge smile! ❤️ I hope KV comes back real soon and we can join him in yet another journey! 😳 As for Aahil, he belongs to us and KV! We will always love him and cherish those moments between SaHil! Junoon tere ishq ka...❤️

Indeed - Junoon Tere Ishq Ka... I can't thank you enough for this loving comment! <3 I've read it over and over again and it has the exact same response - blush and the feel of being appreciated ! So much love to you as always. 🤗❤️

Edited by mahwash22 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sageflower7


Right in the feels Mahu...

Beautiful beautiful story.

I love your sentimental style. Love it love it love it.

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Awww, right back at you, Sage! I have a thing toward adding emotions and sentimental touch into my stories - or at least I try. 😉 So touched you loved it, specially getting approved from a talented writer like you. Yaay! 😳❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: micshy

Mahwish it was beaurtiful ... So so amazing...

I had not read the frst part yet... I resd it but then i dint remember the name 😛 i m glad that i git the chance to read both parts together .. Its so beautiful...
U can feel the same ambience of their love story... So so beautifully written...

I really have no idea how to thank you for this lovely comment! 🤗❤️


I loved the fact that how their old memories were kinda releived... I always love revisiting the old memories... How awesomely u intermingled them with the present...i absolutely loved it... The frst staring by the poolside .. That emran hashmi dialogue... That kitchen it reminded me of the day she had burnt the oven n Aahil applied cream on Her hand... N then the healous incident... That poodiney ki chtney incident ... I had Aahil's face in my head the way he reacted when he saw chutney on his omelette n said "just for my general knowledge lateef who puts pudiney ki chytney on an omelette 😆😆
And then my most favorite part about that night ... That life changing night... U wrote beautifully about that night 😳

Awww, I'm sooo glad you liked it. I wanted to build their relationship in a slow manner, now that Aahil wanted to make her comfortable in his presence.

And of course I had to include her famous Pudine Ki Chutney! It's like her life! Give her that and she is sorted.


I was many a times having my heartbeats racing...

N finally the end .. Miss dhabewali back to her jallad jinn...
How i always wanted it to be like it... They both revisiting their memories n finally Sanam falling again fr jallad jinn ...
They were Gold... N still are... My beautiful SaHil...

They will always be gold to us! SaHil with their intense love and chemistry! <3


Thanky fr again taking me to the beautiful SaHil world .. U r such an amazing writer... Blessed one... Please do come up with other stories as well

Don't praise me so much, I'm really going to blush for days now.. 🤗 You are such a wonderful person and the fact that you take out time to read and comment means so much to me. Thank you for the awesome thing! Love you soo much! I will try my best to come with stories 😉

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