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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil

Oh my god! Mahhuu!! This was so so good girl!! This is too good man! Sigh! Who knew this could turn out this good?! Oh these CVs!

Aww, Prags! It feels so awesome to read your comments over and over again! 🥳I think it must be the 20th or 22nd time I've read it 😆 I know, it's crazy! Just like the CV's. *Sigh*

I almost thought that he would be ready to let her go when he would find about her and HIM..😭 He is such a vulnerable guy that he might go for this too, when he would see her happy with HIM now and would realise what has HE done for her after all..😭
Poor baby!

Aahil is such a vulrable kind of guy who has been through so much! And I wanted him to put her happiness above his, but he wasn't really ready to let her go.. He will always keep loving her, even when she doesn't return the feelings.. yet.. 😳

Seher and Rehan are there!! This is too good! He needs some genuine people, in that I mean Rehan. I always loved their bonding. They both are so good here.

This was the big surprise! 😆 Rehaan and Seher are still alive in my mind! they cannot just die like that! One of the most cherished bond for me has always been the Bromance! And therefore I needed the younger brother to knock some sense into the older one.

And Shaad? You know I actually kinda like Shaad HERE in your story. I don't know why but yes kinda. Not in the show though. I loved the staring session of them both, ARI and Shaad I mean 😆
He is not believing him that she is Sanam?! Wow thats interesting. You know I would have liked Shaad guy if this was like this. His self loathing and letting her go..so much potential this had. Ugh!

YAAY! You liked the Shaad guy in here - Bingo! 😆 Yeah, I needed the two brooding guys to stare each other down. You know I even got the right place and all - at the cafe counter, both dressed well. 😉

And Sanam. Yes, in her heart she knows its HIM just her mind is not processing. I loved how she was realising and denying it! <3 How her thoughts always call him out of nowhere..
I guess THIS is the way we wanted to see. Sanam falling in love with him all over again..

This is what I always loved about amnesia tracks! The whole process of falling in love again. It's such a beautiful thing.. You're making the other person fall in love with you again - and you know it's not impossible, because the heart knows where and to who the person belongs Haayee, SaHil!
Aahil! I loved how Rehan told her "she was checking you out' 😆 This is too good man! I lighted up after reading this. Thank you so much! Can't wait for next part!

Aww, see I already told you the two bros got some serious Bromance going on 😆 On a serious not though, I'm so damn happy that it cheered you up! Mission accomplished! 🤗 Haha. Well Prags, I hope you'll like the last part just the same way you liked this. <3 Will try to update soon. Thanks for your awesome and loving words, girl!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: _ZaaraK

This was amazing!!! I wish you were one of the writers of QH 😆 You definitely have more brains than they do! Just loved it - can't wait for the next part! :)


Wow! Wouldn't we all want to be the writers on that show? Oh the creativity we all could come up with.. But honestly, thanks for the heartwarming words! <3 I will try to update as soon as I can. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: bindasss

Awesome story! Please continue soon and pm me if possible!

Aww, thank you so much! I will def try to send out a PM for the last part! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok where do I start from!!! Let me start with a 👏 and a 🤗for one of my favorite writers!!! If only! If only the cvs had half or even a third of ur imagination we could have been watching such a gorgeous show!!! 😭

I love how u started with a nightmare! Trust me all of us at the heaven wanted more nightmares n dreams for both Aahil and Sanam! 😆 Esp during this track! Its so impactful! Like I said she can forget him but her soul wont!

The pain! The confusion! The distance! How must it hurt to even think of letting of her go! 🥺

Like Rehan said, he refused to sleep, calm down or do anything without her! He was so broken! Now to see her like this! Poor baby! 🥺 I always imagined that there would be a time Aahil would step away thinking that maybe thats best for her! We even came up with situations where he is about to leave, asks for one last dance and Sanam remembers him! It all sounded so perfect! But never happened! 💔But you have given us a beautiful story! If only this could have been shown! 😭

I can only imagine KV as Nawab Aahil Raza Ibrahim! Even while reading, I see him as Aahil! No one can replace him! ❤️ I really liked Seher and her straight talk balancing with Rehan's more subtle logic! At least here, Aahil has family who cares! I thought it was funny how Seher wanted to break the antique vase, thats so like her 😆 The three of them have a really nice warm bonding! That hug was sweet! 😳

Like I said, I made up my mind. I'm doing this for her and her happiness. There's nothing more to it.

Aahil has always loved Sanam in this manner! His love was wholesome and selfless! He never wanted to pressurize her or to go ahead if she wasn't comfortable! It was one of the things I have always loved about him! ❤️ His vulnerability was just so beautiful! It could have been so well depicted in this track! The pain, the desperation and the longing would have given us a story to cry for yet cherish! We would have cried with him yet urged him to fight back! 😭

In the coming days, Aahil sat in his cabin room at the office with eyes closed. He took a few deep breaths trying hard to calm the throbbing headache he was going through.

He opened his eyes only to stare at a picture frame he had in front of the black colored desk.

Sanam was staring into the camera showing the beautiful smile she had.
He missed her so much! 🥺 Aahil in white or black with a picture frame in his hand


He faced her and stared into her eyes with hope. "You don't remember me, Sanam?"

She shook her head slowly wearing a confused expression. "Should I?"

"You don't remember your Aahil? Your husband?" 🥺 We all would have cried watching this! KV would have nailed the expressions here!!


My Sanam is inside and when she wakes up, she'll find her way to where she belongs. - To her rightful man, her Nawab." Thats the voice of every Sanam and SaHil fan! 👏


Sanam knows in her heart and soul that he means a lot to her! His presence, his touch, his eyes all affect her! ☺️ She is denying it, but thats the first sign of her falling in love all over again! We all wanted her to fall this time! And she is! All she thinks of is him! All she searches for is him! All she unknowingly wants is him! Sanam ki Aahil! Just perfect!


The army man smirked. "I thought so. I've seen her smile long before you arrived. So answer me this, who makes the right life for her - and who is ruining it?" Shaad man! You have no idea what he means to her! How much she fought for him, how protective she is of him n how deep their Junoon is! 😡😳 😆


But I have to agree with Pragya, I like Shaad here! I have always loved these intense scenes between two men who love the same woman! A dangerous intensity, hatred, jealousy yet some kind of respect... Some kind of bond... Very strange yet fascinating! If only cvs knew how to build dynamics within various relationships! 😆


Shaad stared at the man. "I came with Jannat - "

"- Sanam," Aahil interrupted. "Her name is Sanam."

"As I was saying. I came with Jannat and she needed me here with her."

This was gold! ⭐️ Imagine KV and another really versatile actor performing this! Brilliant! Even in films, many times the men have so much chemistry, they don't even need a woman in the scene! This is one of those! Brilliantly written! I imagined another one of my favorite actors here and boy did it give me goosebumps lol Two hotties glaring at each other ☺️😆

"The wife I know is going to be super pissed once finding out!" Oh boy Shaad u have no idea how right Aahil is about this one 😆


Aahil eyes began to get clouded by the statement. It wasn't the only thing he had left of her. He still had her soft touch lingering on him. Her warm eyes staring back at her. Her soft spoken voice was like music to his ears. The passionate love she had taught him to feel. Her gentleness.

My favorite lines from this update! ❤️ Yes their love is so deep! There is so much to it! Passion, tenderness, and Junoon! Its gorgeous! They complete each other!

Aahil 🤗Don't worry Sanam sirf aur sirf apne Nawab Jallad Jinn ki Begum Jaan Hai! 😳

You have no idea how much I loved this! Like I am reading it for the 5th time and finally commenting lol Each time I was too lost in their world to comment lol You know like when u read something and kinda go off into that world! Through this you have made quite a few of our imaginations come alive! Thank you! This means so much and I totally loved it! 🤗 Plz update soon!! ❤️ I kinda wrote an essay my bad 😆 I just couldn't pick one favorite part lol

Edited by Raingoddess - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Wow!! This was just 😭 wow! I wish these cvs were half as creative and talent as you, and we may have been watching something brilliant as this.
Sanam still can't remember, 😭 but her heart knows, it remembers him. ❤️
Ahaan! You included SeHan, nice touch. It's nice to see some Ahan bonding that we missed so much.
Haha and I agree with the others, I also like this Shaad 😉
My Aahil, my baby ... He would do anything for her happiness, 😭 even if that means letting her go. 🥺 but she's there, still there... He knows it and she could feel it too ❤️

Please do continue 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Fantastic story
Do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Ok where do I start from!!! Let me start with a 👏 and a 🤗for one of my favorite writers!!! If only! If only the cvs had half or even a third of ur imagination we could have been watching such a gorgeous show!!! 😭

Awww, all the love back to you, Esha! ❤️

I love how u started with a nightmare! Trust me all of us at the heaven wanted more nightmares n dreams for both Aahil and Sanam! 😆 Esp during this track! Its so impactful! Like I said she can forget him but her soul wont!

Oh, she definitely cannot forget him! Like you said her soul belongs to him! His words and touch will make her remember! <3

The pain! The confusion! The distance! How must it hurt to even think of letting of her go! 🥺

Like Rehan said, he refused to sleep, calm down or do anything without her! He was so broken! Now to see her like this! Poor baby! 🥺 I always imagined that there would be a time Aahil would step away thinking that maybe thats best for her! We even came up with situations where he is about to leave, asks for one last dance and Sanam remembers him! It all sounded so perfect! But never happened! 💔But you have given us a beautiful story! If only this could have been shown! 😭

I know, exactly! This is what I wanted. This is what my mind has been imagining ever since the amnesia track has started. It would have been so beautiful to watch. Seriously, the scene SurVir would have done... My God! 😳

I can only imagine KV as Nawab Aahil Raza Ibrahim! Even while reading, I see him as Aahil! No one can replace him! ❤️ I really liked Seher and her straight talk balancing with Rehan's more subtle logic! At least here, Aahil has family who cares! I thought it was funny how Seher wanted to break the antique vase, thats so like her 😆 The three of them have a really nice warm bonding! That hug was sweet! 😳

KVB is the only ARI for me! And nothing will change that. Esha, you have no idea how much I laughed away while writing Seher. I have always thought she would be like that toward Aahil. Like knocking some sense into his head in her own style. 😆

Like I said, I made up my mind. I'm doing this for her and her happiness. There's nothing more to it.

Aahil has always loved Sanam in this manner! His love was wholesome and selfless! He never wanted to pressurize her or to go ahead if she wasn't comfortable! It was one of the things I have always loved about him! ❤️ His vulnerability was just so beautiful! It could have been so well depicted in this track! The pain, the desperation and the longing would have given us a story to cry for yet cherish! We would have cried with him yet urged him to fight back! 😭

You're so right! This is what I wanted to portray to my readers. That we still can dream and hope for our Aahil and his long lost love.

In the coming days, Aahil sat in his cabin room at the office with eyes closed. He took a few deep breaths trying hard to calm the throbbing headache he was going through.

He opened his eyes only to stare at a picture frame he had in front of the black colored desk.

Sanam was staring into the camera showing the beautiful smile she had.
He missed her so much! 🥺 Aahil in white or black with a picture frame in his hand


He faced her and stared into her eyes with hope. "You don't remember me, Sanam?"

She shook her head slowly wearing a confused expression. "Should I?"

"You don't remember your Aahil? Your husband?" 🥺 We all would have cried watching this! KV would have nailed the expressions here!!

*Feel so cherished and touched* - Esha, you've taken all the right quotes of the story. Thank you so much for loving these dialogues. 🤗

My Sanam is inside and when she wakes up, she'll find her way to where she belongs. - To her rightful man, her Nawab." Thats the voice of every Sanam and SaHil fan! 👏


Sanam knows in her heart and soul that he means a lot to her! His presence, his touch, his eyes all affect her! ☺️ She is denying it, but thats the first sign of her falling in love all over again! We all wanted her to fall this time! And she is! All she thinks of is him! All she searches for is him! All she unknowingly wants is him! Sanam ki Aahil! Just perfect!

Fall in love once again to the person you thought was everything! Hayee... Sanam Ki Aahil - I wanted her to feel something for this Nawab and she would know that it's much more than just attrction. There's a connection of some sort. ☺️

The army man smirked. "I thought so. I've seen her smile long before you arrived. So answer me this, who makes the right life for her - and who is ruining it?" Shaad man! You have no idea what he means to her! How much she fought for him, how protective she is of him n how deep their Junoon is! 😡😳 😆

But I have to agree with Pragya, I like Shaad here! I have always loved these intense scenes between two men who love the same woman! A dangerous intensity, hatred, jealousy yet some kind of respect... Some kind of bond... Very strange yet fascinating! If only cvs knew how to build dynamics within various relationships! 😆

Ugh! Why are you so perfect? 😆 You've said it, girl! Everything.. Now, I can just sit back and stare at you in admiration. 👏

Shaad stared at the man. "I came with Jannat - "

"- Sanam," Aahil interrupted. "Her name is Sanam."

"As I was saying. I came with Jannat and she needed me here with her."

This was gold! ⭐️ Imagine KV and another really versatile actor performing this! Brilliant! Even in films, many times the men have so much chemistry, they don't even need a woman in the scene! This is one of those! Brilliantly written! I imagined another one of my favorite actors here and boy did it give me goosebumps lol Two hotties glaring at each other ☺️😆

"The wife I know is going to be super pissed once finding out!" Oh boy Shaad u have no idea how right Aahil is about this one 😆

The Sanam we all know is going to go banana on Shaad. 😆 But on a serious note I have always loved sudden intense scenes between two males - some kind of bromance! I simply love it. 😆 Even I imagined two hot guys getting into a staring contest .. Wait did that sound weird? 😆


Aahil eyes began to get clouded by the statement. It wasn't the only thing he had left of her. He still had her soft touch lingering on him. Her warm eyes staring back at him. Her soft spoken voice was like music to his ears. The passionate love she had taught him to feel. Her gentleness.

My favorite lines from this update! ❤️ Yes their love is so deep! There is so much to it! Passion, tenderness, and Junoon! Its gorgeous! They complete each other!

I closed my eyes and thought how would I react as Aahil and poof.. Those lines just came out.. 😳

Aahil 🤗Don't worry Sanam sirf aur sirf apne Nawab Jallad Jinn ki Begum Jaan Hai! 😳

You have no idea how much I loved this! Like I am reading it for the 5th time and finally commenting lol Each time I was too lost in their world to comment lol You know like when u read something and kinda go off into that world! Through this you have made quite a few of our imaginations come alive! Thank you! This means so much and I totally loved it! 🤗 Plz update soon!! ❤️ I kinda wrote an essay my bad 😆 I just couldn't pick one favorite part lol

Esha.. You have to go with the rule 1# - always leave long reviews to readers and make them feel like they are the most special human being on earth and then make them be filled with the feeling that you just want to shy away.. 😆 I honestly read this at least 15 times already. It was the best start of my day and the best thought to sleep on ❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Booteefool

Wow!! This was just 😭 wow! I wish these cvs were half as creative and talent as you, and we may have been watching something brilliant as this.
Sanam still can't remember, 😭 but her heart knows, it remembers him. ❤️
Ahaan! You included SeHan, nice touch. It's nice to see some Ahan bonding that we missed so much.
Haha and I agree with the others, I also like this Shaad 😉
My Aahil, my baby ... He would do anything for her happiness, 😭 even if that means letting her go. 🥺 but she's there, still there... He knows it and she could feel it too ❤️

Please do continue 😊


Thank you so much, darling! So happy you liked the story. I wanted her to be a bit confused on what she felt. make her think what her relationship with Aahil is..

I had to include SeHaan. They very much belong together and alive.. Don't understand why they had to face the tragedy on the show.. *Sigh*

Anyway, I'll try to update soon with the last part. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Definitely brought a smile :) Loved it!! Wish something like this would've played out in the show before KV left. Not the last scene of course, since it is Indian television after all, but the rest of it 😳 Love how he was taking it slow and being so patient with her
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yes! You certainly made us smile and love you so much for this quick update! 🤗 ❤️

Sanam blinked a few times trying not to stare too much at the gorgeous man or what he wore in front of her. Aahil was only clad in khaki colored cargo shorts with a white slightly drenched undershirt which clung to his already perfect physique.

Can I trade placed with Sanam! ☺️ Omg is he washing his car! Paani Paani lmao Where is Pragya, she has to read n imagine this! 🤣

"Not now of course, I meant someday when you have time. Obviously you're busy with something, like cleaning your overly expensive car which does not need cleaning at all."

Uff Sanam back in Dhabevaali mode, saying it as it is! 😉😆 I used to loved her attitude then! I swear she kept on breaking ARI's ego (n heart) into pieces each time 😆

You have the only right' Aahil thought silently. 🥺 Just so perfect

"Were you always like this?" Sanam asked tilting her head slightly, allowing herself to relax a bit in his presence.

He took a sip from his Latte. "What handsome?"

Flirty ARI! 😉 Its so nice to see the teasing between Nawab Saab n his Begum Jaan! We got some during Faiz n Haya ke bacche... But wish we had more! This was so perfect

Sanam looked into his eyes. "And there's someone who loves me dearly."

"Yeah," he quietly said holding her gaze. "More than you'll ever realize."

❤️ The most beautiful part of this update! I imagined KV saying it with that expression and that voice!

She almost felt proud to be his. You write such perfect lines!

One day at a time' Aahil thought as he watched her by the corner of his eye with a small smile

This man is gonna kill me with his Junoon! The tender love, the patience, the purity of his love! Too gorgeous! This is what we fans demanded to see! ⭐️

Aahil laid down beside her and wrapped his strong arms around her delicate body. Just like that he held her throughout the night.
Protecting her. Mending her brokenness. In silence. Just the two of them.

Just perfect! There is only one place they both are safe... In each other's arms!!!

Aahil smirked as he followed her with his eyes. "No, it's called being jealous, Jaan. Good to know you're still in there."

Jealous Jaan... Yes, Sanam is jealous, possessive and protective! ☺️ Jallad Jin belongs only to her! This was hot and sweet at the same time! You have described both of their feelings and reactions perfectly! 👏

"You done checking me out, Mrs. Ibrahim?" His deep yet husky voice brought her out from her thoughts.

Nope! I don't know about Sanam, but I am certainly not done ☺️ Can never get enuf of this Nawab! Aww I love you u brought it all back to the first Junoon moment! So much has changed yet things are still the same! She is still attracted to him and he is equally attracted to her! But this time, there is the purity of love accompanying that Junoon! Beautiful! Now back to checking him out ☺️😆


"I.. I don't want to scare you off, so I'm going to take things slow, okay?" Aahil spoke softly which made her heart filled with admiration and love.

Ugh how perfect can this man be! He is so imperfect yet perfect! How can one stop herself from admiring and loving him! I always loved the vulnerability, steadiness and respect Aahil showed with Sanam! He wanted to things to progress with her comfort! That made me respect him so much! *Sigh* Aahil ❤️


The last part was hot! Jallad Jin and Dhabevaali!!! ☺️ I love the little surprise she gave him and the hug! Girl this was so perfect! You conveyed the voice of all the SaHilian! Cant thank you enuf! 🤗I will certainly reread it many times! The ending left me with a huge smile! ❤️ I hope KV comes back real soon and we can join him in yet another journey! 😳 As for Aahil, he belongs to us and KV! We will always love him and cherish those moments between SaHil! Junoon tere ishq ka... ❤️
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