New ASYA SS : I Forget You Not, Note PG 124, 04/07/2015

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: rajsmi
Aah...so cute!! And they called it puppy love... :-)
The trip is ending so fast :-(

Yup the trip ends soon but their story will unfold slowly. Glad you enjoyed the rwas Smitha 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: ayeshalove
Hiii its a amazng stry. Pls update soon nd pls do pm me

Glad you're enjoying the story 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: jas91
Wow such a cute love story
this story reminds me of initial days of Sam di's last story

aweome job Choco di

Its good 2 see u back wid short stories😃

Asya r really cute wid love at 1st sight wala pyaar😛

Hey Jas. Hope you're well sweetie 😊. Yeh it does 😛

Its good to be back sweetheart. I've missed being here too 😳

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: Sathya77
Finally AsYa become a friends and AsYa first hug was awesome blossome 😳 wating for the next update ❤️

Glad you're enjoying the story 😃

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: -.-Mariam-.-
Lovely update..Well written..
Asad's staring sessions was adorable..
Loved how AsYa became friends in just few days..
AsYa hug was CUTE..
Hope that Asad will tell her his feelings..
I think may be something will happen that Zoya will not come for dinner,,
Continue soon..Already waiting eagerly for update..
Thnx for PM..

Glad you enjoyed the read so far Mariam, its always a pleasure to read the feedback of my new readers 🤗

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: gowtu
Wow u updtd...

That was so amzng updt choco... I hv loved it so much...
Asad staring at zoya thinking she is ignorant... :-P :-P
Zoya tho asad as aage nikhli do khdam.. He he..

D words asad used to compliment zoya... Was impressive...
I was like '' ab kya bolega !!!!!" Loll

Thy were checking out echother and d way thy tried to spend tym wd echother was lvly...

So next part gonna be lst day.. And I m excited to read it..
Hoping asad llsay his feelings for zoya...

Continue soon...

Hey Gowtu. Am so happy to read your lovely comments 😃

Yea Zoya nikli chupi ruatam 😆. Aww I love when the dialogues are appreciated cause I love putting them there 😳

Will do 👍🏼

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman
Awesome update..
Luved it...

Thanks dear 😊

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: skavya
Beautiful update...!!!!
Asya r so cute...Asad's compliment...his staring session...his hug all r so nice...
so its last day & they r going to spend it with each other...she decide to keep her feelings herself & Asad want to confess...eagerly waiting for the next update...
continue soon...

Glad you enjoyed it 😊 hope you like the next part too 😳

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Firstly I am so Embarrassed...I can't believe you are on chapter two and I come now to comment. Shame on me

Thank you so much Chco, for giving me a shout out and for reserving my spot.

Another beautiful concept and captivating story. I love how Asad is smitten by her, but love her confidence more.

They interact with so much ease even though Asad overthinks everything 😆

Loved the updates

Mwah

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Aww Sis, please never say sorry. I know how busy you are and I really feel bad when you apologize 😒

Am happy you liked the story so far. It was your idea am just writing the story. Hope its up to mark for you 😳