asya_kabhi ff 'Dilwale Dulhania Lejayenge' THREAD2 POSTED

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

so here is the prologue, enjoy hope it will please you as it did to me while i was writing...
this story is very special to me...

ASYA_KABHI FF
DILWALE DULHANIA LEJAYENGE

PROLOGUE

"Where's zoya"
"she's gone"
"g-g-gone w-w-where"
"why are you acting caring now?? After breaking her heart..."

"listen it was a misunderstanding...
please tell me where she is ???? ????
I need her to breath...I'll die without her...please please please"

she's gone back to Punjab. Her family took her back .They have arranged her marriage. she's never coming back..."

"that's impossible, she cannot get married, she's only mine..."

"She's no more the same now. Zinda laash banke rehgayi. she's heartbroken and left everything on her family. she's getting married in 3 weeks."
"no no no that's impossible..."
"don't leave me asad...marjaongi..." her tears...her pleads...her broken heart reflected on her face
I'll get her back in my life...
"main araha hoon, zoya... Aur iss baar hume koi alag nahin karpayega..."

please comment now... i really need the feedbacks to continue😉

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suni_104

@suni_104

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

interesting prologue

waiting for read more

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fatima30

@fatima30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

really intrigued! How will Asad reclaim his love...?

Update soon

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Haha lst dialogue...
Loved it...

Continue soon

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

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unres

oh wow!!!!!!!!!!!!
so goood prolouge
waiting eagerly for the nxt update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛

Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Awesome Prologue👏😊

U showed d story different than d movie😉

Asad seems like a jerk

Update soon

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Tunailuvsahil

@Tunailuvsahil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Wow ddlg asya version awesome:)😎Now amrashpuri as guffur zoya father.razia zoya mom

raj aka asad and simran aka zoya awesome story.

now im going hooked with your story.

plz

cont

sooon plz

just cannt wait for this stoy

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Awesome Prologue👏😊

U showed d story different than d movie😉

Asad seems like a jerk

Update soon

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Yyeaaahhh its not the same storyline like the movie...

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: SUCHARITA2014
Wow ddlg asya version awesome:)😎Now amrashpuri as guffur zoya father.razia zoya mom
raj aka asad and simran aka zoya awesome story.
now im going hooked with your story.

plz
cont
sooon plz
just cannt wait for this stoy

Babe you've already written the character sketch.
I don't need to post it anymore...hiii