Jannat -E- Aahil! ||Jannat's Dreamland||(16+) UPD. Pg. 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Can I get ice cold water and a whole bucket of ice cubes? Because, damn! I need to cool down after reading this! 😲☺️

Paani, paani, paani 😆


This! Prags, this is pure perfection right here..


I was smirking when I finished reading, because this is what you had been cooking all along. Totally worth the wait!! Every single minute and second 👏


Wait... I wasn't kidding when I asked for the bucket of ice cubes.. I really do need it! Hard and solid.. the cubes, I mean 😉😆


"I feel myself burning up by just thinking about him! The way he looks and smirks?!"


God! I feel like a JT song coming up..


Come let me make up for the things you lack, Cause you're burning up I gotta get it fast.' ☺️


Ugh! My mind is totally all over the place. This was HOT, Prags!

"I turned him around this time and started kissing his throat, tracing my lips towards his perfect chest which was heaving heavily. I bit at the valley as I heard him groan, clutching my hair."

😳 👏 ☺️

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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Can I get ice cold water and a whole bucket of ice cubes? Because, damn! I need to cool down after reading this! 😲☺️

Paani, paani, paani 😆


This! Prags, this is pure perfection right here..


I was smirking when I finished reading, because this is what you had been cooking all along. Totally worth the wait!! Every single minute and second 👏


Wait... I wasn't kidding when I asked for the bucket of ice cubes.. I really do need it! Hard and solid.. the cubes, I mean 😉😆


"I feel myself burning up by just thinking about him! The way he looks and smirks?!"


God! I feel like a JT song coming up..


Come let me make up for the things you lack, Cause you're burning up I gotta get it fast.' ☺️


Ugh! My mind is totally all over the place. This was HOT, Prags!

"I turned him around this time and started kissing his throat, tracing my lips towards his perfect chest which was heaving heavily. I bit at the valley as I heard him groan, clutching my hair."

😳 👏 ☺️


Thanks my darling! ❤️

I hope you have cooled down now, with paani..and hard and solid..ice cubes. 😛😆

Haha! Trust me, the scene was in my mind from quite a days but only till the part when he comes towards her. What happened after that..was not actually cooking up from many days, it just got tumbling down and flowing..yesterday only 😆😆

I mean, I sat to write, like okay I need to finish this up now and then I imagined his new look..so it just came so naturally..😆 The fact with me is, I can't actually 'cook' it up for days and write it slowly, I just get a thought/scene and I end up writing the same day, or else I lose the inspiration. This I wrote yesterday only, its so fresh you know 😆😆

Oh that JT song! Damn! ☺️ It so fits in here! Ugh!

I had a confusion how to end this dream. And then I thought, earlier she remembered HIM, now she would remember herself. Seems legit. 😛😆

Thank you for such an awesome comment! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
wow!!!
too hot...loved it! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
woke up again this time hearing this name. Sanam?! Who is this Sanam?!
😆. this is exactly what she has been asking in that picnic with her fake hubby.
need the next part now. I am sure you are working on it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: princessaaliya

wow!!!

too hot...loved it! 😳


Thank you! :) Sorry just saw this thread! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Juhi, about the next part. I don't know, I have scattered thoughts and when I get to write them down it gets even more scattered, like all over the place😛😆
I'll try writing though, I have something in my mind. Lets see! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
why could not I see this till now????😡
what a romance????😛
no words to express...I enjoyed both of them...the dream and the bloody red towel...superbly written

enjoying my sahil...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Thank you so much! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Thank you so much for reading! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mini2013

why could not I see this till now????😡

what a romance????😛
no words to express...I enjoyed both of them...the dream and the bloody red towel...superbly written

enjoying my sahil...


Aww thats okay! Better late than never 😛

Thank you so much. Glad that you liked it! I am enjoying them too..❤️

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