Jannat -E- Aahil! ||Jannat's Dreamland||(16+) UPD. Pg. 9

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: JShukla
😳
dream time.
let me go drink water..😆 and be back

Huh?! I wanted a longer comment! 😡😆

You better be back.

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: SONU2408
take a breath.😳..its jst so damn HOT.SEXY...i m jst☺️.
thnks 4 the updt...

pl write more on sahil..

Aww thanks Sonu! :)

Glad you loved this! I will surely try to write some more! 😳

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: darkice7_12
Love your writing style. 👏 The chapter itself was hot, but I really enjoyed the running commentary we had of this whole scene from Sanam's point of view and in her "voice". Loved how authentic it was! And a bit more was revealed to her! Can't wait to read the next installment.

Thank you so much!! I am overwhelmed by this! 😳

Thank you for leaving such lovely comments on my writing style. I guess its her dream and its only her in her dream, so I am taking all the liberty to express her actual thoughts through this. I am so glad its turning out to be good! 😳

Thank you so much again! ;)

Edited by Junoon-e-SaHil - 10 years ago

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siyasharma94

@siyasharma94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Hayeee...Sanam's hot dream about ahil 😳

Amazingly written
Do continue

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noesha

@noesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

ufff that was sooo hot!

How i wish the show wld have these kind of scenes lol

Update soon!

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JShukla

@JShukla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil

Huh?! I wanted a longer comment! 😡😆

You better be back.

O, I am back.

And this is not a dream or may be it is atleast for that poor non-existent soul Jannat. Not for Sanam though.

I'd always imagined Sanam to be 'THIS' shameless and she is...😆😉

I always wanted to know what happened between Sanam kissing ARI's eyes in the evening and later she trying to wake him up in the morning😃... guess this was it😛

they were seducing each other😆 and getting seduced themselves😲

Prags, you do excel in these monologues ... inner voice stuff.

Jannat, this heaven awaits you... if only you go back😛 and recognize yourself😭

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: siyasharma94
Hayeee...Sanam's hot dream about ahil 😳

Amazingly written
Do continue

Thank you so much Siya! :)

He heart knows him after all! 😳

Thank you again! I'll surely write next soon!

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: noesha
ufff that was sooo hot!
How i wish the show wld have these kind of scenes lol
XD

Update soon!

Thank you so much!!

Lol I know man! Too bad they won't ever show such things, we just have our imaginations with us...*sigh* 😆

Thanks a lot!

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: JShukla
O, I am back.
And this is not a dream or may be it is atleast for that poor non-existent soul Jannat. Not for Sanam though.

I'd always imagined Sanam to be 'THIS' shameless and she is...😆😉

I always wanted to know what happened between Sanam kissing ARI's eyes in the evening and later she trying to wake him up in the morning😃... guess this was it😛

they were seducing each other😆 and getting seduced themselves😲

Prags, you do excel in these monologues ... inner voice stuff.

Jannat, this heaven awaits you... if only you go back😛 and recognize yourself😭

Glad your back Juhi! 😛

Lol I know right?! This is Jannat's dreamland, as you see. Not Sanam's. Her reality is better..SO MUCH BETTER than her dreams anyway 😛

Haha. No this was the things that happened when he came shirtless and I so wanted to have such type of scene in the show when he was bending towards her... 😛😆

That kissing her eyes thing, has another set of things going on. I know. Will tell you in another update 😛😆

Yep! She is a seductress and well he is a Greek God. Do the math, guess you already did 😆

Aww thank you so much Juhi! I love writing like this actually. Even when I write through Aahil's POV. I love writing inner thoughts, it makes me connect more to them and the readers too 😳

I know girl! She needs to go back, but he is there to take her...to their own "heaven" 😉

Thank you so much Juhi for such an awesome comment! ❤️