Jannat -E- Aahil! ||Jannat's Dreamland||(16+) UPD. Pg. 9 - Page 8

You've made me speechless yet again. I read this last night but as you know me.. I need time to breathe and comprehend what you wrote. This is seriously so passionate and beautiful. ❤️ I think I already read it 8 times.

See, I told you that the cold bottles I had tacked for myself were not enough. 😆

First of all I need to comment on the title. "Screaming for Him." whoa... As soon as I read the words, I knew this was going to be one breathless ride.

I bet, Jannat felt the same way when she was on it. I mean sitting in the car.. 😉😆

You're so damn good at writing thoughts, Prags! I don't care how many times I've said it, but you are so so good! It's like I could see it before my eyes and actually see the faces she'll make at the beginning of the story. And even feel his captivating eyes staring into mine. I swear I had chills running down my back when I read that part.

Oh those eyes, bore you right through your soul. He leaves me in such a trance,

You've voiced every members' thoughts by this one! Don't we all just want to close our eyes and listen to his smooth deep voice at the same time. Haayee...

How amazingly seductive his voice sounds though! Ah! That voice is so heavenly, it's like music to my ears. A sweet melody of...seduction.

And then Jannat gives her thought on why he keeps coming in her dreams. 😆 You can't fight it,Jannat. You've already under his dark spell. I have to admit I had to stop and take some air as Aahil walked toward her while he took off his jacket! Damn, woman! Are you trying to get us all dead.

Oh god, he looks SIN while walking like that! Wait, why is he putting off his coat?! Geez!!

Gah, I could quote the whole thing and give you hundreds of reason why this is awesome. You've done it again, Prags. 👏 You've build up the pace beautifully and you can feel their longing and need they have. The gentle breaths they can feel on each other's skin and fighting the urge to claim one another - Oh so beautifully done!

Our lips were inches apart; they even touched due to our ragged breathing. I closed my eyes as the torture was immense.

"I love you Sanam! Your mine! Only mine!"

I think I just died reading his lustful and passionate words. I think I blushed a little too while reading their heated session... In a freakin' car! How hot can it get? Gah.. ☺️ He claims her and she is left moaning for him and perhaps for more... ☺️

I absolutely loved the ending. The words had such a powerful impact. I could feel a sense of confusion, sadness and longing in her voice. 👏

I woke up having tears in my eyes. I don't even know why I was so emotional and crying. Do I love him?

Beautiful, Prags! This is so awesome! I can't wait to read it again tonight and perhaps dream about our very handsome Aahil.. ☺️