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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: shailu123

Hey lovely update they r struk in a elevatour what will happen now it was but a short one yaar next time big one ok continue soon 😃


yes next time big one😆😉
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Originally posted by: anopama

Nice updates

Just caught up with both
So Asad helps zoya and then met her at the wedding
Oh boy zoya Ducks from her fowl Whe he keeps trying to talk to her
He learns the truth he is mad
Oh oh now he collide with her in DC
Continue soon


thanks for commenting
yes they met at wedding
asad learn truth😉
yes they face each other😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: suearmaniac

i loved😛 all the three chappy
they were beautifully written
this one was too short
but built the excitement so m looking forward to the elevator scene😆
pm me nxt update
and ya thanks for the former pm😳


hey suearmaniac
i am glad you liked it
yes its too short
yes i will pm you
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
hi buddies
next update its longer than previous
keep with me
welcome for sugesstions
sorry for any mistakes

chapter 4
' hello,hello... disconnected call.shit phone will not have range'asad said angrily see to zoya
'ohh hello mister why you are looking at me like this'zoya said scared seeing asad comes towords her.
-'beacuse you are liar and because of you i am getting late'
-'what ??this happen because of me? are you out of your sense'
-' no but when i see you i am out of my sense'
-'ok thanks i am very beautiful '
-'beautiful devil 'asad wispered
-'what? how rude you are? you have not any respect for womens?'
-'yes,i have but not like you'
Asad come closer to zoya but zoya feel embarresment ,'what you done to me?'
-'Excuse me? we don't know each other'Man ya na man main tera mehaman' '.
'-where is your baby mam? ohh sorry where is your seek child?Is he/she ok now?
I know you lying me at airport becauze vivan told me all truth'
- zoya realise her prank on him she want to apologize for that but asad stop her'Don't say any word'
-zoya have tears in her eyes. she say any word elevater started they come on tenth floor.
-zoya have cut in her because when asad open gate zoya's right hand catch up in between 'sorry' zoya said him softly.Asad doesn't realize that walked out elevator.
-she want to meet MD Rashid khan.she asked other employee and come in cabin
In MD's Cabin
-'May I come in sir'zoya asked
-'Yes come in,ohh come beta.'
- 'Zoya smiled softly in pain beacoz no one had called her by this tag'
-she comes in cabin and give letter to rashid .Rashid read letter in between call asad and told him come to his cabin.
-in between rashid seen stains of blood on zoya's dress'what happen to you, zoya?'
-Asad come in his dad cabin see zoya again come in his akdu mood,'why you call me dad?'
-'Asad ,go and come with AID box zoya have cut on her wrist'
-'Asad see this and forgot all his anger and remind him their incidence in elevator',Asad ran come with AID box.Rashid have call and he walked out.
-zoya doesn't give attention to him.Asad catch her hand come to sofa and bandage on her cut.
-Thanks Mr. 'asad ASAD AHMAD KHAN' asad said to zoya And sorry for Lying to you.but I have reason for that
- 'I know what you have reason 'asad walked out in his cabin.
-'Prasad come in my cabin quickly'asad call prasad
-'Good morning sir,what can I help you'
-'what is she doing here?'
-'Who sir?'
-'she is in Dad's cabin'
-'ohh! she is new employee in our DC sir'.In last week recruitment drive she is selected a trainee Engineer for upcoming projects.
-'what? go and 'send her out of DC.
-'We can't sir becoz DC rule she atleast stay here for 3 months'
-'who hire her?'
-'Rashid sir,hire her'
On desk
'Zoya crying slowly in pain,one girl walked upto her'
'hey what happen to you ' sidra ask zoya
-'i am sidra '
-'hi 'zoya said softly.
-'I am zoya nice to meet you'
-'Here take it'sidra give painkiller tablets to zoya.
-'Asad sir told me to give you'
-'what man,Dard aur Dawa Ek saath'
IN CONFERENCE HALL
-'sir,can I ask question?'
-'yes'
-'you are keep very rude and arrogent employees in our company'
-'what?who is rude with you'
-'Mr.akadu'
-'he mate in your cabin'
-'Asad come here, she is the new employee in our DC'
-'zoya He is my son and your Project Guide of next project'
-Zoya choked,drinking water and wet her dress
-'This girl'Asad rolled his eyes.smacked hand on his head



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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg thats awesome part
asya encounter and zoya complaining about asad to his father thats hilrious
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: nilusoni

omg thats awesome part

asya encounter and zoya complaining about asad to his father thats hilrious
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon


hey very fast
i am glad you like it

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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Super update asad is rude with her but also care for her 😳 it will be fun to see them together continue soon 😃
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Dard air dawa ek saath ache nahi lagte
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#50
Professional and childish fight at the same time...lovely

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