SeHan (SuZaad) Mini SS: Ek Nayee Seher... Last Part Page 12 Feb 28 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: .sushmitha.

Ohhh!!!!!!! this sounds interesting...


Seher has been shown in a different shade.

All the Best Chahat. :)

Thank you so much
Yeah I know the prologue shows her weak but...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: het27

What is wrong with you Missy,

You are at it again
More than one story at a time
Concentrate on AsYa
SeHan not even 15 fans
Scrap it after first part if not more readers and give us AsYa updates


I know but you know na if an idea comes I gotta share it
It is going to be just 3 parts so will not interfere with AAK ki D updates don't worry
16 likes hain you hit to 17 ho jaayenge
Anyways I got adn idea and am gonna tell it
If response is not good I will finish this story in 3 days but I finish what I start
Now comment after reading and hit LIKE too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Part 1

Once again Seher glanced towards the doctor's cabin. When she saw no one coming she once again tried to immerse herself in reading the magazine in hand. It had been more than an hour since her Badi Ammi, Dilshad had gone inside the doctor's cabin and had still not come out to tell Seher what the team of doctors had decided. She was tired of sitting in one place. Time and again her eyes roved in the direction from where the news of her life or the order of her death sentence was going to come in front of her in the form of her medical reports. The unbearable heartache caused by the unknown fate was making every second of the wait feel like centuries. It was becoming difficult for Seher to be patient.

Dr. Gupta was going to consult with other senior doctors and then give his final verdict. A frustrated Seher threw the magazine on the side table and stood near the window. There had been heavy snowfall at night. The snow covered tree tops and the mountain caps looked very beautiful and luring. Is it in her kismet to see this beautiful sight in the coming years or will the dark hand of death snatch her away before time! Many questions like these created a storm in Seher's mind. To find answers to these questions she and her badi ammi had frequented Dr. Gupta's clinic.

Dr. Gupta had sent Seher's medical files to many reputed national and international doctors and they had all also given their esteemed opinions to Dr. Gupta in the concerned matter.

Meanwhile a strong blow of the cold wind entered through the window and spread in the entire room, making the environment pleasant. Seher put out her hands and was trying to close the windows. Just then she froze on hearing her name! She turned and saw a handsome young man standing in front of her. Seher did not take more than a split second to recognize Rehan.

She said, "Aap... Aap yahan kaise?"

"Darwaaze se." Rehan pointed towards the door.

"I know ki aap darwaaze se aaye hain but aap yahan kaise aaye?"

"Tumhaare ghar gaya tha wahan pata chala ki aap log Dr. Gupta ke clinic aaye ho toh maine socha wahin jakar mil loon."

"Par aap aajkal hain kahaan? Simla mein toh kahin dikhte hi nahi. Garduation ke baad ke teen mahine beet gaye."

"Vacations shuru hote hi main apne ghar Bhopal chala gaya tha, wahan volcanic eruptions ho gaye thi, Ahil bhai ne kaha tha ki main jald se jald wahaan aa jaaoon. Iss liye main wahaan chala gaya." Rehan replied casually.

"Aapki mazaak karne karne ki aadat ab tak gayi nahi. Ab kya zindagi bhar mazaak karne mein guzaarni hai ya kuch aur bhi karna hai?"

"Haan, soch raha hoon kuch karne se pehle shaadi kar loon, tumhaara kya khayal hai?"

On hearing Rehan's words Seher laughing out loud said, "Haan aapka khayal bilkul sahi hai. Kisi ameer baap ki beti ko apni life partner bana lijiyega, poori life ghar damad bankar aish se rahiyega."

"Waise toh tumhaare abbu ne bhi marte waqt tumhaare naam kaafi jaaydaad chodi hai, soch raha hoon ki tumse hi..."

"Shakal dekhi hai aayne mein? Aapko toh koi banadariya hi pasand karegi." Seher replied teasing Rehan.

"Issiliye toh tumhaare paas..." Rehan's sentence was cut off midway. He saw Dr. Gupta come their way with two of his colleagues. Seher too looked in that direction.

Dr. Gupta said as he pats Seher on her back, "My brave girl, apni dawaiyaan time par leti rehna aur apni badi ammi ko zyaada pareshan mat karna."

"Aap kis nateeje par pahunche hain, Dr. Gupta?" There was impatience in Seher's voice.

"Doctor kisi nateeje par nahi pahunchte, sirf ilaaj karte hain. Zindagi toh bahadur logon ke liye hoti hai, haar se dare hue logon ke liye nahi. Tumhaari taaqat, himmat aur yakeen ka imtehaan abhi baaki hai."

"Main kitne jeeoongi doctor, mujhe saaf saaf bataiye."

"Seher, maine ab tak haar nahi maani. Mujhe abhi bhi America mein chal rahi medical research ke results ka intezaar hai, tum sabar rakho."

"Main samajh gayi doctor..." Seher was not ready to hear anything further. She quickly ran down the stairs and reached the main road. Rehan and Dilshad too ran after her at the same speed.

"Ruko beta, itni besabri mat karo... meri baat toh suno." Dilshad yelled out in a high voice, "Ruko beta..." Dilshad yelled out again but Seher did not stop.

"Ruko beta... mera matlab hai Seher..." Seher heard the naughtiness in Rehan's voice and abruptly stopped.

"Kyun rok rahe hain mujhe? Aapne suna nahi ki doctor uncle ne kya kaha, main bas ab kuch hi mahino ki mehmaan hoon... maut mera peecha kar rahi hai." Seher screamed.

"Abhi toh hum tumhaara peecha kar rahe hain. Kyun badi ammi?" Rehan looked towards Dilshad.

"Haan... par aap hain kaun? Maine aapko nahi pehchana." Dilshad asked adjusting her spectacles.

"Mujhe nahi pehchana? Main Rehan hoon Seher ka college friend, yaad aaya?"

"Nahi beta, kuch yaad nahi aa raha. Hum pehle kahin mile hain kya?" Dilshad asked as she tried to recognize Rehan.

"Itni jaldi bhool gayi badi ammi? Hum abhi toh Dr. Gupta ki clinic mein saath the... yaad aaya?"

"Haan... haan... par..."

"Chodiye bhi badi ammi... Bas, main Rehan hoon aur Seher aur main college mein ek saath padhte hain."

"Padhte hain nahi, padhte the." Seher corrected him.

"Badi ammi, aap ghar jaaiye, main aur Seher ek friend ko milkar ghar aayenge."

**

"Aap mujhe yahaan kyun laaye hain? Aakhir aap chahte kya hain?" Seher asked irritated.

"Tumhaare saath kuch baatein karne ke liye."

**

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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Oh no you can't do this. Why did you stop here?
It was so flawless. For a change rehan is flirty here. I think he likes her.
Kind of liked rehan's cool dude attitude.
Next update a bit long one please.
Edited by Az07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
aww it was so sweet poor sehet n rehan is such a lovely guy
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
It was so lovely update rehan is so cute hope sehar will be fain continue soon plzz 😃
Edited by shailu143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Az07

Oh no you can't do this. Why did you stop here?

It was so flawless. For a change rehan is flirty here. I think he likes her.
Kind of liked rehan's cool dude attitude.
Next update a bit long one please.

I may be writing for a diff couple but i am the same
So i ended there
Thank you so much for thinking that it was flawless
Yeah Rehan is flirty and full of life
Will try to update sooner and make it longer
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
love rehan!!!!!!!!so cute
hope everythng turns out f9
Edited by riaa234 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: ankiecool

aww it was so sweet poor sehet n rehan is such a lovely guy

Thank you for reading and commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: shailu143

It was so lovely update rehan is so cute hope sehar will be fain continue soon plzz 😃

Thank you for reading

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