Asya's OS Stories Thread: Dream/Reality Updated complete, pg 14 23/2

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Last part...😕 already...?? 😲

i mean last part of this second chapter, no i didn't read the last 😆

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

i mean last part of this second chapter, no i didn't read the last😆

Oh...

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -ABI-
Interesting

Originally posted by: -ABI-
you know whats funny
Zoya's husband
a Gay
🤣 🤣 🤣lol

Don't know Abi, but i guess I am in Gay mood, I don't know, but its seems to me... I mean First Sara and Tasu, and Now this... Hushhh...

Does it make me gay too...... damn Tell me NO!!!!!!... please...😭😭

😆😆😆

Thank for Writing... 😊

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: dewcute
girl your works and you are unpredictable!!!

trust me,this was damn funny🤣

write more and do let me know😛

Sure Dear, will Tell you if I post anything regarding Asya... 😆

and i tell you, I am completely Unpredictable... I don't know what will I write and how the story will take sudden 180 degree turn.. for all the roller coaster, stay tune and i will keep updating...

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Sarangnunmul

Don't know Abi, but i guess I am in Gay mood, I don't know, but its seems to me... I mean First Sara and Tasu, and Now this... Hushhh...
Does it make me gay too...... damn Tell me NO!!!!!!... please...😭😭

😆😆😆

Thank for Writing... 😊

it didn't make you gay but open mind , just this 😉

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Heyy... 😃
Can i Know your name..??😳
And Thanx alot for scrap'ing me the update...😊
It is indeed a very different take on ASYA...and pretty interesting...👏
Zoya & Asad sharing their secrets ...and Asad falling for Zoya.. 😉
I have a questionn..?
Why the story is titled as TAKE HER KEEP HER 😕 just wanted to know how you choose this name for it...
Nice part...
Continue soon.. ⭐️ 😛

Rashi is my name...

No need to thank me, i even needed readers to read my stuff, I thank you for reading it thou..

I aim to please...😆😆

ahhh.. that question is tricky.. hmmm.. I read this book name as Find her Keep her by Z.L. Arkadie, and as per my story I twist it a bit, that time i Even didn't realize that I have a book as same name, that time the name clicked and i give it to it, and it suited it too.. so it is the story behind name.. 😊

yeah Will Post new OS soon... 😊 😊

in last can i know your name too?? 😊

Edited by Sarangnunmul - 10 years ago

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Thanks for scraping me.

It was So Lovely and Different OS.😊

ASYA(KABHI) were married here,it was so interesting.😊

The Feelings of Asad(KSG) towards Zoya was so nicely explained.😊

Please Update soon and PM to me,I am waiting here.😊

I'm sorry for late comment and Reply,I'm busy with My Studies.Please Forgive me.😭

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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PriyaCherry.

Edited by PriyaCherry - 10 years ago

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

it didn't make you gay but open mind , just this 😉

HAHA... I hope so... but It is happening with me so much, In each of my story, (right now) I am including something like that, unexpected... haha...

I even feel it so funny, but I didn't mean to make fun of anyone... I swear...

I guess As a human being, We really don't understand those people who fight with their identity, as a person, as a human, we all have such a mind set, that we can't break that thing, like we are slave of our mind...

I don't know how to describe it, but I know one thing for sure, I will Accept anyone who have any identity crises, coz I know they didn't chose to be like that, IT IS WHAT THEY ARE...

and I am NO ONE TO CHALLENGE a NATURE for our society MIND SET..

I hope I can at least change one mind with my thoughts...

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Sarangnunmul

Rashi is my name...
No need to thank me, i even needed readers to read my stuff, I thank you for reading it thou..
I aim to please...😆😆


ahhh.. that question is tricky.. hmmm.. I read this book name as Find her Keep her by Z.L. Arkadie, and as per my story I twist it a bit, that time i Even didn't realize that I have a book as same name, that time the name clicked and i give it to it, and it suited it too.. so it is the story behind name..😊


yeah Will Post new OS soon... 😊 😊


in last can i know your name too??😊

Hello Rashi...( Nice name )
Hmm...no need to thanx me...i guess it get pretty weird that we keeps on thanking each other for for li'l things...
And My name is Mayur.😳
You know why i asked about that title because it seems like a little bold you know...Take Her Keep Her...it is just a thought nothing else ok...if she is someone elses wife then why take her...that is what kept me thinking...

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: radadolcevida
just woow, 😃
I ddin't know that I stop to breath until I reach the last part, it was really beautiful, can't wait to read the last part.

Last part?? I am seriously lost here...

The story had ended.. right... It is just One shot...

where am I lost here??? huh...😕😕