AsYa OS - Take Me To Hell! - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Nice OS...loved it
Thanks for the PM...
anopama thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Oh this is so sad and heartbreaking
I was looking for ur stories to reread couldn't find any
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..👍🏼

Thank you.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sageflower7

Res ...

unres...

What was that Juliet !!! Wowzers...

so dark and intense. ..

To want something so bad and to fear its temporariness...
she judges herself too harshly... unwilling to believe a chance to love and be loved back.

Very complicated feelings you have portrayed so effectively. .

Great read !

SAGEYYY!
How are you doing?
You really say the kindest of things.
Thanks so much for reading.
I am a less frequent on the forum, but I often think of you.
Hope things are great at your end.
Love
Juliet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Omg..
After ages... You write

And here we have...

BRILLIANCE.

THIS IS PURE BRILLIANCE.

What a fantastic write up!!!

Scrubbing.. Wow.. What a take on it.


Call it a Reserve.. Coz I will come back with more.

Thanks Jasmine/
My lips are sealed,
Kuch Bhi!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: dewcute

nice update


well written

write more

I shall try more.
Glad you like it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: sanarujub

wow beautiful story as always.

So glad you liked it.
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Dark and daunting!

How?


When did this happen!


There is such thing as love. There is..


ASAD <3



You know the only man I really truly loved was Asad.
Sahir did reside for a few weeks but I have patched up with Asad for the better.
🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: maha2012

Beautifully written😳
zoya was a prostitute n asad fell for her..zoya wanting to leave him but he convinces her that she is the purest :')
i want to read more
yet a very different story juliet⭐️😉
love u my buddy❤️

p.s do read the indebted series by pepper winters..☺️ you'll love it😉

Maha

Maha I am going to lurk on the plot even more for you.😈
What is Asad trying to rid himself off for which Zoya is his cure.
Zoya is not a prostitute, she is driving into things by her father and brother where she fetches them contracts. It's more discrete and elite if that can be said.
Imagine where they met the first time, how did Asad fall in love with Zoya and why?
😉😉😉😉
Ok I am evil. Muhahaha!
Love you Maha.
I did read Indebted. Winter Peppers is bold with dark heros. But sharing your woman with family of brothers and father is puke worthy. I wanted to butcher his cock and I wanted to drill into his eye sockets pull out his eye balls.
I wanted Jethro to be drowned in a muddy puddle and bite his frost off. No matter what I can't stand a woman being tortured.
IN book 3, I feel sorry for the two but still not forgiving him yet. Lets see what Mz. Winters has in store as redemption.
But its nail biting interesting.
Indebted Series was thanks to Aashana's pestering.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Intriguing and wonderful!! 😳

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