'ASLI BIWI' - A SAHIL OS

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Author's Note:

This OS is based on the events after Sanam discovers Aahil in bed with Nayi Sanam, and how Aahil reacts to the way Nayi Sanam behaves towards Sanam afterwards.

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"ASLI BIWI"- A SAHIL OS

"Yeh Dil...Bewafa se...wafa kar raha hain...hai di deko dil se...kya kar raha hain...Yeh dil...bewafa se wafa kar raha hain!"



Sanam still could not believe it. Was what she had witnessed in that Hotel room really true? Did Aahil really get intimate with Nayi Sanam? The image of her draped over Aahil's naked chest came to her mind. Sanam shook her head as if to dislodge the image from her mind."How could you Aahil?" she whispered to herself. "Do you hate me so much now, that you would go to these lengths to hurt me?" she thought, as tears fell down her face. She had come home and she was sitting near the pool thinking about everything that happened. She had told Seher and Rehan what she had witnessed as well and they had been equally shocked.



Sanam knew that in the past Aahil had been a playboy. That he had had encounters with numerous women. Even when she had first seen him, she had seen him with some girl. So maybe to him this was an extension of the same thing? Spending the night with this new Sanam may not have meant much to him either ways. But then, she had thought he had changed. That since he had fallen in love with her, he had wanted to only be with her. That he had wanted to be faithful. She had never imagined that Aahil would cheat on her! But then, this Nayi Sanam was considered a wife. So was it really cheating then? But Sanam knew, that she and Aahil both knew, that this Nayi Sanam was not his wife! She was just someone Begum Sahiba had planted to get between them. He had not even really married her. He had been shocked to find a third party under the veil on the night of the Nikah. Aahil had been conned. He had been used. WHY cant he see that? Why did he give into this women?


"Are you that weak Aahil?" thought Sanam sadly.


But then she thought of how in control Aahil had been through their months of marriage. Looking back it cant have been easy for him, when he was in love with her, and sharing a room. But they had come close slowly and steadily. He had never crossed his limits with her, or imposed himself on her in any way. He had never exerted the rights of being her husband. This was one of the things that had appealed to her about him! So why would he then go and sleep with this Nayi Sanam just like that? Something didn't add up here! Sanam walked to the kitchen to get a glass of water. Just as she walked in, she saw Nayi Sanam there, getting a juice. When had she got back? Sanam ignored her and walked further into the kitchen. But Nayi Sanam was in a taunting mood.


"Tum abhi bhi yaha ho? Main toh samja ki tum ab thak gayi hogi?"



"Gayi? Kaha? Why I should I go anywhere?"



"Why? Kyon ki, aab Aahil ji ki Biwi main tu...toh tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?"


"What I am doing here is non of your business! This is Aahil's home, and if he wants me to leave HE can say it. I dont take orders from you!"



"Woh kahe ya main...kya farak padatha hain? Malik ki Biwi toh Malkin hotha hain!"


At that statement, Sanam saw red! No one spoke to her that way."TUM Malkin?" laughed Sanam. "As Aahil's first wife, I am the 50% owner of the Ibrahim fortune. So no one can kick me out of my own house! If I want to, I can have you kicked out! All I have to do is call the Maulavi Saahab, and tell him your marriage happened without my consent! Then you can see who the Asli Biwi is!" said Sanam looking at Sanam 2 with a sarcastic look.


Sanam2's eyes flashed! "No matter what you say...I have slept with Aahil ji. So my marriage is a fact now! I am his wife now!"



"Really? Just by spending one night with a man...no one becomes his wife! Do you even know what being a wife means? What do you know about Aahil? Do you know anything about him? I LOVE him. I have spent the last 6 months of my life with him. So your one night in a Hotel wont change that! Your no more his wife than any women from his past!"



"Your just jealous, because I made a rishta with him that you could not!"


"MY Rishta with Aahil is a lot beyond the physical! The relationship I have with him, you cant even dream of having. You are just someone Tanveer brought here to get between us! But dont think you will succeed for long! Jhoot ke buniyad par bani hui rishtey, zada der nahin tikthey!"



"Tum khuch bhi kaho, lekin aab main Aahil ji ki Biwi ban chuki hu, aur tum ek naukar hu!" she said with a sarcastic smile.




"How dare you?" said a voice from behind them. Both turned and saw Aahil standing in the doorway. His eyes flashed anger as he looked at Nayi Sanam.



"How dare you speak to Sanam...to my wife that way?"



"Lekin Aahil ji..."



"Shut up!" said Aahil, looking at her in anger. "Tumhari himmat kaise hui Sanam se iss thara se baath karne ki? Tum apne aapko samajthi kya ho?"



"Par Aahil ji...aapki asli biwi honeki nathe..."



"ASLI Biwi? TUM Meri Asli Biwi? Are you serious? Have you forgotten...that I had never even SEEN you until the night of my Nikah to Sanam? I married Sanam, not you. Yes your name is Sanam. But other than that, there was NO consent given by me to this marriage! If I so wished, I could have had this marriage nullified then and there. But I didnt. Because Ammi requested me not to do so. Aur main uski koi baath taltha nahin hu! But obviously I made a huge mistake!" said Aahil looking witheringly at her.


"Kal raath ke baad bhi...aap iss tara seh baath kar rahe ho?" she said, her eyes filling with fake tears.


Aahil looked at her coldly. "I dont even remember what happened last night. But whatever it was, it was a mistake! It should NEVER have happened!"


Nayi Sanam started to cry in earnest now and Sanam looked at her and then Aahil, feeling uncomfortable. She turned to leave and Aahil called out to her.


"Sanam!"



"Aahil please! This matter is between you and her! I have no part in this conversation!"



"Sanam please...I...!" said Aahil again, but Sanam didn't listen, she walked away. Nayi Sanam watched her go her eyes triumphant. Aahil saw the way she looked at Sanam and his anger grew even more.



"Look here! I dont know what happened between us last night. I dont remember a thing. But if you say something did, then I will give you the benefit of the doubt. But don't think this gives you some sort of right over me! I have only given you a place in my life because of Ammi. Nothing else. I don't love you, and I never will! So dont live in the delusion that you can make me. Main kabhi tumhari nahin hoga! Samji tum? Excuse this indelicacy, but I have slept with a lot of women before I married Sanam. So to me, spending the night with a women does not equal lifetime commitment! Sanam was the only women I wanted to commit to. She was the only women I wanted to be faithful to. And that will never change!"



"Lekin uss ne aapko chor diya aur..." she started to say when Aahil held his hand up to her to indicate that she should stop.



"Whatever happened between me and Sanam that is OUR business. We may be having issues. But that doesn't mean YOU can use it to try and come between us. Muje aur Sanam ke bhich main tum to kya...kuda bhi nahin aa saktha! IF you want to continue to have a position in this house...you give Sanam the respect she deserves as my first wife! If you can't, you know where the door is. You are free to leave. I will make a monetary settlement on you. If I so wished, I can end this marriage today. So dont think you can fly high coz you slept in a Hotel bed with me for one night! Trust me, that does not make you special. That is where I usually slept with women in the past! But the ONLY women who ever slept in MY bed was Sanam, and that is not a place I will give to anyone else. Not even you! Remember that!" Aahil said, looking witheringly at her as he turned on his heel and left.



Nayi Sanam stared as Aahil left. She could not believe that things had backfired on her so badly. She gulped. She would have to tone it down, or Aahil may actually kick her out of the house. She cant let that happen. Just then she heard a sound at the door and looked up.



"How does it feel...to fall off your High horse?" said Seher, as she sniggered at Sanam2.



"Matlab?" she said, as she looked at Seher.



"Matlab? Tume yeh bhi samjana padega? Didnt you hear what my Jeejaji, my sister's husband just told you? Your not special. You are just another women who managed to sleep on a hotel bed with him for one night! So many have graced that position before you! So come down off your cloud and face reality! Tum KABHI Meri behen ki jaga nahin le sakthi? Samji tum?" said Seher, venom in her eyes.




"Lekin hum Aahil ji ki Biwi hu...aur..."



"TUM Aahil ki Biwi? Why do you keep repeating yourself? Do you think if you say the same thing over and over, it will make it come true? He hadn't even seen you before the wedding night? You know very well he only tolerates you because of Tanveer? The day Tanveer comes down HER high horse, that is the day you will also fall flat on your face! So before you try to show MY sister attitude, you mind your own position! You are hanging by a thread! Aahil LOVES my sister. She is in this house because he WANTS her to be! But you? Your only here because of his false sense of gratitude to his poisonous Mother! The day he realises what she is, the same day, he will realise what you are as well! Daayan kahi ki!" said Seher as she turned on her heel and left.



Nayi Sanam looked at Seher leave, her eyes alarmed. "Daayan? She had called her a Daayan? Did she know...did she..." she thought her face paling in fear. "No No. She cant know!" she thought. But suddenly Nayi Sanam felt very afraid. She didnt know what was going to happen now. She had played this huge game to try and win Aahil. But it appeared that he was in no mood to entertain her. He had told her whatever happened meant nothing, and that he was not going to give her any special place in his life because of it.



Seher also said that he will never give her Sanam's place. That when Tanveer gets caught so will she! Nayi Sanam balled her fists, and she stared at a blank space in front of her! It seemed like even Kala Jadu was not working on breaking up Aahil and Sanam! What Nayi Sanam didn't realize was that Aahil and Sanam had true love on their side. So no. It was not that easily broken. Definitely not by Kala Jadu.


Seher came into the room that used to be their parents, and saw Sanam standing at the window looking out. She sighed.



"Sanam...you have nothing to be sad about. I know you're upset with Aahil. But the truth is, he loves only you. Whatever happened or didnt with this Nayi Sanam, that will never change. I heard Aahil tell her off good. He told her non of it meant anything and he couldn't even remember any of it! Who knows what that Tanveer and that Chidiya have done? Maybe they did something to Aahil? Gave him something, like the night she tried to make it look like I slept with him? These people are capable of anything!"



Sanam looked at Seher. "I know. I know they are capable of anything!"


"Aapki shohar bewafa nahin hain. He loves you Sanam. I should know. All he did during the two weeks I pretended to be you was tell me how much he loved you! Well he told me he loves me, but it was actually you!" said Seher with an ironic look. Sanam shook her head.



"Tum uski asli biwi thi, hain, aur hamesha rahenge!"


"I know. I know Seher. Main Aahil ki asli Biwi hu, aur uski asli mohobaat bhi! And soon Aahil will know that too! Very soon!" Sanam said, conviction in her voice. She was going to get to the bottom of this. She was not going to just let one scene spoil the trust and love she and Aahil had built over the past 6 months. Seher was right. "Mera Shohar Bewafa Nahin Ho Saktha!"



The End




Hi All,

Just something I penned down in a hurry. Just the way I would have wished that scene played out the other day. Or more like a scene I wish to see play out in the future! Let me know what you all think!

Mandy


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written OS... (:
I so wish this happened in the serial as well but for some stupid reason they didn't even acknowledge this.. :/
Love you for this.. (:
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing...
loved it...
can u pm me if u write something on Sahil...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nitya_Suresh

Beautifully written OS... (:
I so wish this happened in the serial as well but for some stupid reason they didn't even acknowledge this.. :/
Love you for this.. (:



These days when I want to see something on the show, I have to end up writing it myself! Lol. Thanks for liking it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashiii333

amazing...

loved it...
can u pm me if u write something on Sahil...



Thanks. Please do check out my index. That has all my SAHIL stories and even a SEHAN one. My signature has a link to all my work to date.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I LOVE IT ! This is what I want to see in the show Aahil destroying the illusion of this witch ?! I want him to let her see his bad side ! Lol she won't expect that kind of attitude... And this time sanam wot defend her 😆 I hope to see Aahil like this in the show enough being a puppet ! Time to be jallad Jin 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow man! Mandy this awsome! I just love how Ahil gave back on the face of the chudail😡😆 Sanam Rocked too. I hope in serial too Ahil gives something on face of chidiya when he sees chidiya insulting sanam! Only if cvs*sighs*
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Awesome this is Mandy!!
Really hit that nail down !! Loved the way Aahil told Sanam2 off...

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Wish we could see smthg like dis on d show too
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Always I wish the conversation in your story to be in the serial, but it's just a dream.

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