SaHil TS Discovering the Truth *sequel to Finding a Destination* Pt 1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Beautiful update! I'm so happy to see the immediate remorse and can't wait to see how he makes it up to Sanam. Update soon!

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Esha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: fatima30
Just beautiful...how I would love to see such scenes to play out in the drama!

Each and every emotion described perfectly of each character 😊

Thank you 😳 I also hope we get some awesome scenes of SaHil on the show! I am glad u liked it! I tried my best! Glad it came across like that 😊 Thanks again!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: fanraya
Amazing part, loved it so much, can not wait for the next one...

Thank you so much! I am glad u liked it! Yes plz do keep reading and giving your feedback!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -Directioner-
amazinggg

Thanks! Glad u liked it!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: minnie2308
amazing... a lot of dialogs and cross questioning and answers and ends with Sahil Hug😆 now it has piqued my interest n the next part..
Loved how you showed their emotions through dialogs and body language.👏

Thanks! Yes I wanted this out of the way! And I wanted SeHan to be the ones to tell him, especially Seher 😆 I want Sanam to torment him just a bit 😉 SaHil hug Thank god the cvs added one too lol But yes Aahil could no longer control his emotions and the distance she suddenly placed between them! So he went for the hug 😆 I tried my best! This part was a bit difficult but I am happy that it came out well! Lol I am also glad that u enjoyed reading it! Thank you so much for the lovely comment! Plz do keep reading and lmk what u think of it 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: 1788shreya
What didn't happen in qubool hai serial, u made it happen in ur TS
Beautifully written
Loved each n every word of ur story
Waiting for sahil confrontation n tanveer true face i front of ahil
Update soon next chapter

Thank you so much! Wow this means a lot! I am so glad u enjoyed reading it so much! I tried my best! This part had me thinking for a bit but finally I got it lol Glad it came out well! Hopefully we get some dramatic scenes on the show as well! Today's episode gave me some hope lol Yes plz do keep reading and leaving feedback! Hope u like the next part as well!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Brilliant...👏

Thanks 😳 Glad u liked it 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: mahwash22
I looove that song!!!

I could easily see that song being played on SaHil - Given the situation they are in. Pain, Love, Remorse, togetherness! Oh, you have managed to capture everything!

The beginning was such an emotional roller-coaster. The heated discussion between them in the car really set the atmosphere.👏

"He stared at her in a cold manner, "Dont tell me what to do Sanam!""

I enjoyed the whole backstory and the way you made them tell Aahil the truth. It was really well written and I actually could not pull this story away from me at all. It had me glued to the screen.👍🏼

"Aahil stepped forward but Sanam held up a hand. "There is more you need to know Aahil!"

Aahil found the the distance cold and discomforting."

I was so close to tears reading about Aahil's emotional state. God, I cannot even imagine how it must be to actually see it.😲

I swear he is going to go crazy! Hell is going to break loose!

An angry and furious Nawab is going to want revenge!

Just by saying those lines made me shiver..

The ending was the best! You have no idea what feelings it evoked in me by reading the state Aahil was in. God! I cannot even describe it.👏

"Aahil felt his entire body shake, with anger or shock he didnt know."

"He wrapped her in his arms and held her tight, he let his tears fall as he buried his face in her hair."

Wonderful job yet again, Esha! ❤️ Reading your stories is such a delight! Keep going with the beautiful work of yours.

Love you.. 🤗❤️

I love that song too!!! And most ones from horror movies 😆 Those have the most intense songs lol I so wish it was played on SaHil Maybe under the moon or in that servants room where Tose Naina Lage took place! Thank you so much 🤗 I feel the amount of times I thank you its not enuf! You have been a constant support and extremely encouraging towards me and my writing ❤️ These lovely reviews make my day! I really wanted Sanam to place a small distance after the argument. She had reached a point where she could not take it anymore. She was still ready to fight for their love but not until he knew everything that he needed to work on their relationship. Aahil, on the other hand realized how much a simple cold shoulder or distance from her can hurt him. He could not let her go under any circumstances! I am glad his emotional state came out how I wanted it to! It made me emotional too! I really feel bad for the pain he needs to go thru! But still, the next part will have Sanam torment him just a little 😉😆 Jallad Jinn needs to win back Miss Dhabevaali! Lol keep reading and leaving such awesome comments 😉

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sukanya.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Esha Its incredible We are never going to see such a lovely scene in QH but yaar you have given us what Gul cant, a beautiful and lovely update on Sahil. Its just out of the world. Each and every line splendid. You are too good🤗

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Esha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: najma123
Brilliant update... Too good... God knows when it will come in the show. xD

Thanks! Glad u liked it! Hopefully we get some nice scenes on the show as well! Today's episode gave some hope lol hopefully they keep up with it! Lol Thanks again!